----- /// Ek Sawal /// -----

by klaskar on May 15, 2010, 01:46:26 PM
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aaj fir tere us uljhe sawaal ne mujhe uljha rakha hai,
sochta hoon kabhi kabhi ki aise sawaal ka matlab kya hai,
kyun aaj tak tu ye nahi samajh paayi ki tu chahti kya hai,
kehti hai rishta mujhse tera atoot hai to darti kya hai,
tera wo sawaal jise main sochta rehta hoon har lamha,
mujhe aaj tak samajh hi na aaya ki tune poochha kya hai,

haan wahi sawaal jo tu ne har baar poochha tha mujhse,
haan wahi sawaal jiska jawab bhi main chahta hoon tujhse,
kyun har baar tu yun behki baaton se mujhe dard deti hai,
ho sake to tu aaj hi bata de kya tujhe chahiye mujhse,
tera wo uljha sawaal jo mujhe uljhan me daal deta hai,
main haath jodke us sawaal ka jawaab maangta hoon tujhse,

haan ye ghadi tere imtihaan ki nahi hai mere sabar ki hai,
ghadi meri tere uljhe sawaal ke uljhan se nikalne ki hai,
jawab tujhe malum hai aur mujhe bhi pata hai ki sach kya hai,
par kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki jawab sun lu to achcha hi hai,
haan wo sawaal jo tu ne har baar poochha tha mujhse,
kaho na, "Mera jo ye rishta hai tumse kya mohabbat hi hai?"

"Kya mera jo ye rishta hai tumse wo mohabbat hi hai?".....

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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2010, 01:55:12 PM »
Waah..!! Bahut khooob.... Kapil ji.... notworthy notworthy

Aise hi likhte rahiye sahab.... khuda khush rakhe... Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2010, 02:12:56 PM »
Bahaut khoob Kapil Dost..bahaut ache... Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2010, 02:38:48 PM »
Kapil Bhai Aapki Yeh Nazm Bahut hi Umda Rahi.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Lafzon me Utaara hai aapne.. Ek ek Lafz dil Ko chhoo jane wala hai..!!

Aur Aakhiri me Jo aapne Sawal choda hai Khas kar wo Bahut Hi Touching Hai.. Nice Creation Dost... Applause Applause



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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2010, 05:52:15 PM »
Waah bahut khoob kapil ji..aese hi ek ansuna sa sawal mujhe har lamha parshan karta hai..aese sawal aksar saamne wala apni nigaho se puch baithta hai aur hum us sawal ko suljhate uljhan mein din bitaane lagte hai..ye mhbt bhi ajeeb cheez hai jo dikhayi nhi deti per lagti badi zor se hai......
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2010, 09:45:02 PM »
Wah wah Kapil ji,great work,bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likha aapne,fantastic creation,aapke sabhi kavitayein bahut khoobsurat hai,bahut achi lagti hai,baar baar padne ko mann karti hai.keep writting.excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2010, 01:16:44 AM »


        Achhha likha hai kapil ji. Mohabbat me maujood kashmakash ko bakhoobi bataya hai jisme jane kab koi sawaal sulajhte-sulajhte ulajh jata hai or ulajhte-ulajhte sulajh jata hai. Bahut umda. Yun hi likhte rahein.
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2010, 01:55:24 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2010, 05:06:34 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Touhid ji...!!!

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 15, 2010, 01:55:12 PM
Waah..!! Bahut khooob.... Kapil ji.... notworthy notworthy

Aise hi likhte rahiye sahab.... khuda khush rakhe... Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2010, 12:00:47 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on May 15, 2010, 02:12:56 PM
Bahaut khoob Kapil Dost..bahaut ache... Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2010, 12:01:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji ... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: Mann on May 15, 2010, 02:38:48 PM
Kapil Bhai Aapki Yeh Nazm Bahut hi Umda Rahi.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Lafzon me Utaara hai aapne.. Ek ek Lafz dil Ko chhoo jane wala hai..!!

Aur Aakhiri me Jo aapne Sawal choda hai Khas kar wo Bahut Hi Touching Hai.. Nice Creation Dost... Applause Applause



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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2010, 12:03:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... sach kahaan aapne mohabbat ki chot bahut zor ki lagti hai.... aur nigaahon ke zariye kahi hui baat aksar humein uljhan me daal deti hai... aap jald se jald apne us sawaal ka jawaab dhund lijiye... kahin der na ho jaaaye... keep smiling always...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 15, 2010, 05:52:15 PM
Waah bahut khoob kapil ji..aese hi ek ansuna sa sawal mujhe har lamha parshan karta hai..aese sawal aksar saamne wala apni nigaho se puch baithta hai aur hum us sawal ko suljhate uljhan mein din bitaane lagte hai..ye mhbt bhi ajeeb cheez hai jo dikhayi nhi deti per lagti badi zor se hai......
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2010, 12:05:28 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... ye ti mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai ki aapko meri kavitaayein itni pasand aati hain... bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 15, 2010, 09:45:02 PM
Wah wah Kapil ji,great work,bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likha aapne,fantastic creation,aapke sabhi kavitayein bahut khoobsurat hai,bahut achi lagti hai,baar baar padne ko mann karti hai.keep writting.excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 18, 2010, 12:06:04 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji...!!!

Quote from: tamanna.pt on May 16, 2010, 01:16:44 AM

        Achhha likha hai kapil ji. Mohabbat me maujood kashmakash ko bakhoobi bataya hai jisme jane kab koi sawaal sulajhte-sulajhte ulajh jata hai or ulajhte-ulajhte sulajh jata hai. Bahut umda. Yun hi likhte rahein.
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«Reply #14 on: May 18, 2010, 12:06:35 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 16, 2010, 01:55:24 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil
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