Ek Shaira Ko Shabdon Kee Kamee Padrgaee...

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Ek Shaira Ko Shabdon Kee Kamee Padrgaee…

1)   Muhabbat K khael mein maine khudko awwal sahmjha thah, aaj mein khudko zaamaanay k peehchaeh kargaee,
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

2)   Khamoshee nazron ko dubo deygee, palkon mein ushqon kee nambee bhargaee…
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

3)   Ub mustaqbil mein bhi uss ko paanay ka sawaal nahee utt tha, wo umeed bhi dil mein margaee,
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

4)   Raathon ko chandni mein bihkray saye khauf dila thay hain, aur undhayron mein main khudse dar gaee,
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

5)   Yoon tho hum umangon se wabasta hain, par na jaanay kyon seenay mein AARZU kee layhaer ubhar gaee…
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

6)   Dunya se dhukay chuhpe hum chalthay thaeh, aaj ye baat har sonch mein utar gaee…
K Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

7)   Anjaam kya banayga mera? …Jo Ishq k ehtraaf ke muamlay mein, muhje, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee...

                                                                                                        ~Sidra Aarzu Ahmed~
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The reason this poem's stanzas are numbered, is because initially, this poem was supposed to be a couplet, ek shair, with one rhyme pattern, par jaise jaise mein lihkthee gaee, aur khayalt shabdon mein badal gaye... if u have continuations... please agay lihkeeyay...
Thank You...  happy3
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2009, 03:38:54 PM »
Subhan Allah, Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Sidraah Ji,.
Waise Ab Shaira Ko Shabdon Ki Kami Nahi Padegi, Uske Saath It Adna Sa Shayar Hai Ab,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2009, 05:19:34 PM »
very nice...
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2009, 05:21:18 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 16, 2009, 03:38:54 PM
Subhan Allah, Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Sidraah Ji,.
Waise Ab Shaira Ko Shabdon Ki Kami Nahi Padegi, Uske Saath It Adna Sa Shayar Hai Ab,.

Wah wah....Allah kare aap dono saath bana rahe....
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2009, 05:22:05 PM »
Quote from: cRony/eNemy on March 16, 2009, 05:21:18 PM
Wah wah....Allah kare aap dono saath bana rahe....

Aameen,.
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2009, 05:33:50 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 16, 2009, 05:22:05 PM
Aameen,.

Summa Ameen !!!

Wahan ka jawaab yahin de rahi hoon...kyunke abhi ijazat nahin hai reply dene ki...Aapki dua ka bhi bahut shukriya...InshAllah hum sidra se bhi baat karenge..
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2009, 05:38:38 PM »
Soch is shayara ka sach he hoga....
Mujhe ise aage badhane Ko Shabdon Kee Kamee Pad gaee…
Quote from: anjaan dharkan on November 21, 2008, 08:17:35 PM
Ek Shaira Ko Shabdon Kee Kamee Padrgaee…

1)   Muhabbat K khael mein maine khudko awwal sahmjha thah, aaj mein khudko zaamaanay k peehchaeh kargaee,
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

2)   Khamoshee nazron ko dubo deygee, palkon mein ushqon kee nambee bhargaee…
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

3)   Ub mustaqbil mein bhi uss ko paanay ka sawaal nahee utt tha, wo umeed bhi dil mein margaee,
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

4)   Raathon ko chandni mein bihkray saye khauf dila thay hain, aur undhayron mein main khudse dar gaee,
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

5)   Yoon tho hum umangon se wabasta hain, par na jaanay kyon seenay mein AARZU kee layhaer ubhar gaee…
Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

6)   Dunya se dhukay chuhpe hum chalthay thaeh, aaj ye baat har sonch mein utar gaee…
K Ishq k ehtraaf k muamlay mein, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee…

7)   Anjaam kya banayga mera? …Jo Ishq k ehtraaf ke muamlay mein, muhje, ek shaira ko shabdon kee kamee padrgaee...

                                                                                                        ~Sidra Aarzu Ahmed~
                                                                                                                Nov/18/08



The reason this poem's stanzas are numbered, is because initially, this poem was supposed to be a couplet, ek shair, with one rhyme pattern, par jaise jaise mein lihkthee gaee, aur khayalt shabdon mein badal gaye... if u have continuations... please agay lihkeeyay...
Thank You...  happy3
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 11:34:22 AM »
shukriya doston...!

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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 11:37:44 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 16, 2009, 03:38:54 PM
Subhan Allah, Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Sidraah Ji,.
Waise Ab Shaira Ko Shabdon Ki Kami Nahi Padegi, Uske Saath It Adna Sa Shayar Hai Ab,.

Hay re hay! shukriya!
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2009, 12:04:38 PM »
Very very nice sidra..

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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2009, 12:07:20 PM »
shukriya sophi ji!
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