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Ek thi Kashti ek tha Kinara..... Dono the akele the dono hee besahara.....
Rutt badli par Kinara na peeche hata..... Kashti bhi aati rahi dene use harr Dard ki dawa.....
Ek Dinn poochti Kashti ki tujhe Dard kya hai..... Dia Jawab Kinare ne ki harr Din hee mera ek Saalgiraah hai.....
Baat yeh Kashti ke Samajh na aayi..... Dard hai kya use yeh sunn woh dheeme se Muskurayi.....
Phir chal padi hawa or Kashti bhi uske Ruukkhh me beh chali gayi..... Manzil thi uski Purab aur woh Paschim me Safar taye karti gayi.....
Sochta raha Kinara ki iska Safar bhi Dhua bharr ka hai...... Jaise Badli hawa waise hee Naavik use badalta hai......
Soch lo Zindagi mita lo aise hee Gum...... Kya hai Safar aur kyu hai tumsabki aankhein namm......
Rahe Manzil toh Raston ki na karo Fikar..... Milti hai Manzil use jo bhatka hai Kashti ki tarah darbadar.......
Ab tu hai Kashti aur main hoon Kinaara..... Chalna hamesha Sang na Chorna kabhi Saath hamara.....
Ek thi Kashti Ek tha Kinara.............!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2006, 04:25:15 PM » |
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bahut khoob gauarv ....wonderful ......
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2006, 05:02:13 PM » |
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Gaurav
Great work ! =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2006, 02:36:03 AM » |
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jab dubi kashti toh pass hi thaa kinaara hamne har pal bas talasha koi galat kinara
jaga liye woh khawab jo sach na hone they aur le liya dil mein ek dard aur dubara
zakham abhi pichle bhare bhi na they risne laga dil mein ek zakham aur hamara
nakaam si hasrte hain bebas hai halaat hame dube wahi per jahan se pass thaa kinara
ek thee kishti aur ek thaa kinara....................
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2006, 04:51:16 PM » |
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Shayad Kashti ko Kinara..... Aur Manzil ko Chahat Chayie hoti hai......
Jaise Murde ko kuch Saansein...... Aur Shayar ko Badnaami Chayie hoti hai......
Rote hai hum bhi ghut ghut ke inn band Deewaron me...... Na jaane mere Dil ko kaisa Azaadi Chayie hoti hai........!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2006, 02:48:20 AM » |
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Shayad Kashti ko Kinara..... Aur Manzil ko Chahat Chayie hoti hai......
Jaise Murde ko kuch Saansein...... Aur Shayar ko Badnaami Chayie hoti hai......
Rote hai hum bhi ghut ghut ke inn band Deewaron me...... Na jaane mere Dil ko kaisa Azaadi Chayie hoti hai........!!!!!!!!! ranju and...BS too good!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2006, 07:14:10 AM » |
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Toogood gaurav and ranju keep it up dear freinds.
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2006, 08:29:10 AM » |
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bohot achhe gaurav and ranjana...
shukriya umar aapki nawazishon ka ghum ki daulat ataa kar di tuney hans hans ke iltejaa kar di maine ro ro ke intehaan kar di..
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2006, 07:58:53 AM » |
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Thnx Anjani Huzena....and Sanya.....
Aye Hazrat waalon...... Kya tumne kahin khuda ko dekha hai......
Main dhoond raha hu Aks unka..... Kya unki Khushion ne kia mujhe andekha hai......
Dard hai jab juda Zindagi se toh...... Kyu Tanhai ko woh Roshan kar gaye.....
Jab mukammal hai harr kisi ka WaQt-e-Niza..... Toh kyu log kehte hum Mahobbat ke Safar me gujar gaye......
Bata de aye Dunia...... Kya kisi ne iss Sawaal ka Jawaab poocha hai......
Rooh talab hai jab Saanson se...... Toh kya Dhadkan ka Jism Dooja hai......
Aye Hazrat waalon...... Kya tumne kahin khuda dekha hai..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2006, 08:40:23 AM » |
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Very nice Gaurav bahut ache dost.......
tere payar ke saaye mai mai jiye jata hun na thame teri kasthi kabhi bhi .... na mile thje kahin bhi paani kam...... mai nadiya main aansu bahaye jata hun...
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2006, 10:03:10 AM » |
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shukrira sanaya, angle ....bahut khoob likha gauarv ,vikas and sanaya ...
yeh tasvur na jaago koi haseen khawabo ka ki yahan apne hi logo se ab hame dar sa lagta hai jahan hum sochte hain ki milega zindagi ko kinaara wahi per mera vishawas dard ke dariya mein dubane lagta hai
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«Reply #11 on: April 02, 2008, 05:54:48 PM » |
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Ek thi Kashti ek tha Kinara..... Dono the akele the dono hee besahara.....
Rutt badli par Kinara na peeche hata..... Kashti bhi aati rahi dene use harr Dard ki dawa.....
Ek Dinn poochti Kashti ki tujhe Dard kya hai..... Dia Jawab Kinare ne ki harr Din hee mera ek Saalgiraah hai.....
Baat yeh Kashti ke Samajh na aayi..... Dard hai kya use yeh sunn woh dheeme se Muskurayi.....
Phir chal padi hawa or Kashti bhi uske Ruukkhh me beh chali gayi..... Manzil thi uski Purab aur woh Paschim me Safar taye karti gayi.....
Sochta raha Kinara ki iska Safar bhi Dhua bharr ka hai...... Jaise Badli hawa waise hee Naavik use badalta hai......
Soch lo Zindagi mita lo aise hee Gum...... Kya hai Safar aur kyu hai tumsabki aankhein namm......
Rahe Manzil toh Raston ki na karo Fikar..... Milti hai Manzil use jo bhatka hai Kashti ki tarah darbadar.......
Ab tu hai Kashti aur main hoon Kinaara..... Chalna hamesha Sang na Chorna kabhi Saath hamara.....
Ek thi Kashti Ek tha Kinara.............!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bahut khoob Gaurav bro...kya likha hai yaar aapne!!! bahut ache..
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2008, 07:24:40 PM » |
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Ek thi Kashti ek tha Kinara..... Dono the akele the dono hee besahara.....
Rutt badli par Kinara na peeche hata..... Kashti bhi aati rahi dene use harr Dard ki dawa.....
Ek Dinn poochti Kashti ki tujhe Dard kya hai..... Dia Jawab Kinare ne ki harr Din hee mera ek Saalgiraah hai.....
Baat yeh Kashti ke Samajh na aayi..... Dard hai kya use yeh sunn woh dheeme se Muskurayi.....
Phir chal padi hawa or Kashti bhi uske Ruukkhh me beh chali gayi..... Manzil thi uski Purab aur woh Paschim me Safar taye karti gayi.....
Sochta raha Kinara ki iska Safar bhi Dhua bharr ka hai...... Jaise Badli hawa waise hee Naavik use badalta hai......
Soch lo Zindagi mita lo aise hee Gum...... Kya hai Safar aur kyu hai tumsabki aankhein namm......
Rahe Manzil toh Raston ki na karo Fikar..... Milti hai Manzil use jo bhatka hai Kashti ki tarah darbadar.......
Ab tu hai Kashti aur main hoon Kinaara..... Chalna hamesha Sang na Chorna kabhi Saath hamara.....
Ek thi Kashti Ek tha Kinara.............!!!!!!!!!!!!
kamaal ki kavita he.kya gehrai he aur kya baat aapne hum tuk pahuchai he,bahut shukriya. Prateek
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2008, 07:34:55 PM » |
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wow!! badnaam_shayar jee, pata nahi apki itani achi kavita kaise miss ho gai!! bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2008, 02:46:15 AM » |
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Ek thi Kashti ek tha Kinara..... Dono the akele the dono hee besahara.....
Rutt badli par Kinara na peeche hata..... Kashti bhi aati rahi dene use harr Dard ki dawa.....
Ek Dinn poochti Kashti ki tujhe Dard kya hai..... Dia Jawab Kinare ne ki harr Din hee mera ek Saalgiraah hai.....
Baat yeh Kashti ke Samajh na aayi..... Dard hai kya use yeh sunn woh dheeme se Muskurayi.....
Phir chal padi hawa or Kashti bhi uske Ruukkhh me beh chali gayi..... Manzil thi uski Purab aur woh Paschim me Safar taye karti gayi.....
Sochta raha Kinara ki iska Safar bhi Dhua bharr ka hai...... Jaise Badli hawa waise hee Naavik use badalta hai......
Soch lo Zindagi mita lo aise hee Gum...... Kya hai Safar aur kyu hai tumsabki aankhein namm......
Rahe Manzil toh Raston ki na karo Fikar..... Milti hai Manzil use jo bhatka hai Kashti ki tarah darbadar.......
Ab tu hai Kashti aur main hoon Kinaara..... Chalna hamesha Sang na Chorna kabhi Saath hamara.....
Ek thi Kashti Ek tha Kinara.............!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wah bahut accha likha hai aapne Badnaam_shayar ji. Purana posting hai... Nazar pe le aaye Khwaish ji ke liye shukhriya
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