Ek Udaas Phool...

by Aryaan on May 10, 2006, 03:43:45 AM
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2006, 04:01:57 AM »
wah wah wah bahut achaa Aryaan as usual.......man u r really gr8.......the way of presentation is even amazing too !!!:)
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2006, 04:19:14 AM »
very beautiful Aryaan...............

with best wishes

ranju
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2006, 08:28:01 AM »
Thanks a lot Isha & Ranjana.....
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jalpari
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2006, 01:50:01 PM »
wowww Aryaan, Excellent, very nice and touchy words.
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Style_guru
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2006, 02:18:38 PM »
The Style Guru Says......

Bhai, Achha likha hai!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2006, 08:18:13 PM »
Bohat shukriya Jalpari & Style_Guru....
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2006, 01:24:31 PM »
aryan bahut hi khoob surat hai ye udas phool dher sari mubarak baad is ke liye........
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2006, 01:37:04 PM »
ek uddas phool hai tera dil......
kante se saja mera bhi jaha hai ......
tu baitha hai kisi bahar aane k intzarr me ......
mere ye kate to magar har mausam me jawa hai .....
tu fir has payega ye mumkin hai tu yaki to ker .....
mai fir bhi chubhan jhulunga tu fiker na ker .......
tu badal jayega ek bahar ek ummed jagg jane k badd.....
mai fir bhi rahunga yuhi in kanto k sath.....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2006, 02:10:21 PM »
Quote from: "tabassum shakeel"
aryan bahut hi khoob surat hai ye udas phool dher sari mubarak baad is ke liye........

Thanks a lot Tabassum...

Good One Tushar...
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manu1979
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hi
«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2006, 02:24:47 PM »
bahut hi khoob likha hai aryan ji aap ne bas aise hi likhte rahiye ,khaas kar aap ki image mujhe pasand aayii
take care
regards
manu
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2006, 02:34:05 PM »
gulab ka paudha

main vahi hun gulab ka paudha
 jisko tune kabhi lagaya tha
pani de de ke roz subah o sham
jisko parvan kal chdaya tha

hoke khush tu har ek se kehti thi
aain mere gulab men kaliyan
ab khilenge mere gulab ke phool
aur ghar men bahar aaegi
 
sochta tha ki mere phoolon se
apni zulfon ko tu sajaegi
haar men goonth kar mere gunche
 tu gale se inhe lagaegi

haae meri hasin tamanna ye
 ban ke ik khwab rah gai aakhir
mere khilne ka waqt jab aaya
tere gulshan men bhi bahar aai

ajnabi door se koi aaya
jisane tumko bana liya apna
tere arman ki kali mahki
ban gai tu gulab ka ik phool

kya khabar thi ki ek din tu bhi
mosame gul men ho ke diwani
chor ke mujhko aisi jaaegi
lot ke phir kabhi na aaegi

haae rukhsat ka waqt jab aaya
meri aankhon men aagae aansu
tu mere pas aake yun roi
jaise gul pe nisaar ho shabnam

tere aariz ki dekh ke surkhi
maine kaliyon men bhar liya vo rang
har kali phool ban gai khil ke
phool tujhko talash karte hain

tu khan jo lagae seene se
tere gesu kahan sajen jinme
vo khile aur bahar bhi aai
 tu magar lot ke nahi aai

mere phoolon ki ab sada hai ye
 dil se nikali hui doa hai ye
jo masarrat na mil saki hmko
 vo bhi tujhko naseeb ho jaae
 
tu kisi ke gale ka haar bane
aur sajae tu waqt ke gesu
god men teri jab koi aae
yaad aae tujhe gulab ka phool

tujhko mera khyal aaega
ghar ke aangan men ek podha tha
jisko maine kabhi lagaya tha
usmen ab phool khil rahe honge
unki khushboo mahak rahi hogi
 aur mujhe yaad kar rahi hogi
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2006, 02:38:07 PM »
Bohat shukriya Manu....

wah wah Tabassum, kamaal ka likha hai aap ne.. Bohat khoob
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2006, 02:40:26 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya aryan
aap khud kamal ka likhate hain isliye likhna pada ..........
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Aryaan
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2006, 02:43:35 PM »
Shurkiya Tabassum, magar aap bhi kisi se kam nahi.. keep writing..
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