~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~ -Panna 13:Shayri-E-Dard

rajrishi

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«Reply #180 on: August 26, 2007, 12:53:45 PM »

bahut acha pooja ji, gajab likhti hain aap, bahut badiya

Umar gujar di humne mohabbat ki ibadat mein,
Dikha jo aks iska to hamara kuch bhi na raha.


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Pooja

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~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~

«Reply #181 on: August 26, 2007, 03:30:45 PM »

Raj ji apki shayri pardi hai, app bhi bahoot acha likjte hai, yaha sath dene ka shukaria....

Ahsa hai aise hi sath milta rahega... bahoot acha likha hai apne...

Apne gumo main kaha kisi aor ka gum najar atta hai
Apne hi gumo se, dum ghoota jaata hai

Kab dekhu , kaise dekhu kisi aor ka gum e-dost
Apne hi gumo se kaha hosh mujhe rah jaata hai


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~

«Reply #182 on: June 18, 2008, 07:32:53 PM »

Ajj phir ek baar wo sab najaro ke samne aa gaya...

E dost aaj bhi tera ahsaas hai
sath nahi mere, magar dil ke bahoot pass hai..


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Pooja

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«Reply #183 on: November 04, 2008, 06:45:35 PM »

jab bhi anjaane main yah thread samne ayya hai
dil ko bahoot yaad aai teri,
ek pal ko bhi na maine tujhe bhulaya hai!

waqat ka chalta raha pahiya
her pal yaadon main tujhe basaya hai
jab bhi suni kisi ke marne ki khabar
ek tera hi chehra her baar samne ayya hai

thi tu pyari sakhi meri,
dil main sada tujhe basaya hai
roi hai ajj phir ankhia meri
teri ankhon ne dekh, kaya haal mera banaya hai!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #184 on: November 04, 2008, 08:50:12 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 04, 2008, 06:45:35 PM

Meri is poem main do lines ne kisi ko bahoot preshan kar diya ki main aise kaise likh sakti hu, koi dushman ke liye bhi aise na likhe. Jab maine kaha ki is thread ke pahle do page parro to sab samjh aa jayega. uss insaan ne history padne se mana kar diya aor kaha ki her ek share ki apni life hoti hai.
Bilkul sahi kaha dost apne.. magar mai koi shayra nahi hu.. ek bahoot he sadharan insaan hu jo apni bhawnao ko bahoot he sadharan shabdo main likhti hu.

Khair wo do lines yah hai:

jab bhi suni kisi ke marne ki khabar
ek tera hi chehra her baar samne ayya hai

yah Thread maine apni ek sehali ki yaad main shuru ki thi jo is dunia ko 15 saal ki umar main he alvida kah gai thi. is liye jab bhi kabhi kisi ke marne ki khabar atti hai, meri yaadon main meri is saheli ki yaadein taja ho jaati hai. Wo jin halato main humara sath chorr kar gai wo jab bhi yaad atta hai dil bahoot rota hai.. magar yahi akar insaan bebas ho jaata hai..

maine yah sab iss liye likha ki agar ek insaan ke man mai in Lines ko laker sawal ayya hai, to ho sakta hai ki aoro ke bhi man mai sawal ayye.. kyun ki agar apne is thread ke pahle do page nahi parre, to shayad apko baad ki likhi kavitaye itani samjh nahi ayye!!


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Re: ~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~

«Reply #185 on: November 11, 2008, 11:03:15 AM »

Bahoot Badhiya Pooja Sis,.


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Pooja

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«Reply #186 on: November 11, 2008, 04:49:42 PM »

Thanks lil bro


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«Reply #187 on: November 11, 2008, 06:12:51 PM »

POOJA JI.BAHUT KHOOB ANDAAZ MEIN Applause


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Pooja

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«Reply #188 on: November 11, 2008, 06:26:02 PM »

Thanks Taheer ji!!!


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«Reply #189 on: July 13, 2009, 05:19:46 PM »

Waqai Bahut Dard Hai Pooja Ji aapki Is Thread me.. Aaj Pahali Baar is Thread par Nazar gai.. Jiski Har Ek Rachna Ne Dil Ke Taaron Ko Ched diya..!!

Apni Friend Ki Yaad Me aapne jo Alfaaz Yahan Likhe hain.. Waqai Bahut dard Bhare hain..! Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob...

Daad Kubool karen is Dost ki..

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #190 on: August 11, 2009, 09:29:35 PM »

Quote from: Mann on July 13, 2009, 05:19:46 PM

dard to dard hai, dard he dikhlayega
kuch zakhmo ka dard, sanso ke sung he jayega!!

Acha laga ki apko meri yah rachna achi lagi....


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~

«Reply #191 on: August 12, 2009, 02:26:07 AM »

Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob. Bahoot hi khamosh sa dard basa hai aapki iss thread ki har ak line mea.... bahoot saari ankahi baaton ko . ak gehre dard ko aapne bakoobi sabdo mea utaara hai... bahoot Bahoot Khoob!


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Pooja

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«Reply #192 on: August 12, 2009, 05:49:40 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on August 12, 2009, 02:26:07 AM

waqat ke sath dard khamosh thaher jaata hai
tees ki tarah uth.ta hai kabhi kabhi
ankhon se chalak jaata hai

aai jab bhi yaad uski, khud ka bhi na hosh raha
ajj bhi uska hansta chehra, ankhon mai simat jaata hai

na hui kabhi himmat ki jakar haal bhi puch lu uske gharwalo ka
khud mai soch-soch kar, dum ajj bhi mera ghoot.ta chala jaata hai

waqat ke sath Dard khamosh sa thaher jaata hai
per atta hai jab yaad.... ansoo ke barsaat main nahla jaata hai .......


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«Reply #193 on: August 21, 2009, 11:09:56 AM »

didi aapne bahut bahut bahut achcha liklha hai
sach main har ek lines dil par dastak deti hai di
hats off to u


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salma786

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«Reply #194 on: August 21, 2009, 11:20:18 AM »

App to hamesha se hi khoob likhti hai... Clapping Smiley


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