~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~ -Panna 7:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #90 on: April 07, 2006, 03:18:04 PM »

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waqat ki bandishon ko yah dil janta hai
duniyadari ke farzo ka bhi, nahi koi thikana hai
janty thy ki bahoot vayast (busy) hai zindagi apki
phir bhi chaha tha, do line ho jaye, yaha apki!!!!

kaafi dino mein hum bhi aate hai.
busy rahne se begaane nhi ho jaate hai.
jawaab bahut dino baad de rahe hai .
iske liye maafi maangte hai.


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«Reply #91 on: April 07, 2006, 03:22:03 PM »

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shukariyan quyda ji!!!!

do line mai bhi bahoot kuch likh gaye app!!!!

intzaar uska hai aor main bhi uski
bas ek wo hi mera na hua kabhi!!!!

sach kaha aapne: aur isiliye shayd iss duniya mein kuch aisa hi dastoor hai,
"ye dilwalon ki duniya hai,
magar yahan kisi se dil nahi milta,
to koi dil se nahi milta"

khair hamari dosti kabool kijiye...yes/no mein

do lafzo mai kahani likh gaya
wo aise shabdo mai bayani likh gaya
iss parr ua us parr, kaise nadani likh gay
magar phir se do line-o mai, ek kahani likh gaya!!!

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«Reply #92 on: April 07, 2006, 03:23:10 PM »

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Quote from: "Pooja"

waqat ki bandishon ko yah dil janta hai
duniyadari ke farzo ka bhi, nahi koi thikana hai
janty thy ki bahoot vayast (busy) hai zindagi apki
phir bhi chaha tha, do line ho jaye, yaha apki!!!!

kaafi dino mein hum bhi aate hai.
busy rahne se begaane nhi ho jaate hai.
jawaab bahut dino baad de rahe hai .
iske liye maafi maangte hai.

kisi se kaya shikayat
hum khud kam atty hai
kabhi kisi kaam mai vaysat (busy) to
kabhi kisi kaam ke nahi rah jaaty hai!!!


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«Reply #93 on: April 07, 2006, 03:28:15 PM »

Pooja, qayda, Bhondu

Very nice...

Rajbir


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«Reply #94 on: April 09, 2006, 09:39:15 AM »

thanks veer ji!!


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«Reply #95 on: April 09, 2006, 04:18:36 PM »

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kisi se kaya shikayat
hum khud kam atty hai
kabhi kisi kaam mai vaysat (busy) to
kabhi kisi kaam ke nahi rah jaaty hai!!!

aap zada aao ya kum aao aapki yahan ek pehchan.
humko to aana chahiye, ye humse to anjaan hai.


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«Reply #96 on: April 09, 2006, 11:17:37 PM »

anjaan nahi ab koi jaan ban gaya hai
dekar wo sath, dil ka mehmaan ban gaya hai
jab bhi ayye is darbar mai, najar dhoondati hai
aggy ki line ab nahi sujhati hai sad5


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«Reply #97 on: April 11, 2006, 09:15:03 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

anjaan nahi ab koi jaan ban gaya hai
dekar wo sath, dil ka mehmaan ban gaya hai
jab bhi ayye is darbar mai, najar dhoondati hai
aggy ki line ab nahi sujhati hai sad5

aap ka bhoj apne sar liye lete hai .
aage ki lines hum puri kiye dete hai.
is darbar mein jiske baatoon se milti hum ko rahat hai.
kya kahe "pooja" ji wo aapki chahat hai.


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«Reply #98 on: April 11, 2006, 12:03:11 PM »

BHONDU JI AUR POOJA JI.... bahut bahut khoob...nice


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«Reply #99 on: April 11, 2006, 12:39:28 PM »

Socha nahi accha bura, dekha suna kuch bhi nahi
manga khuda se raat din, tere siwa kuch bhi nahi
socha tujhe, dekha tujhe, chaha tujhe, puja tujhe
meri khata meri wafa, teri khata kuch bhi nahi
jis par hamari aankh ne, moti bicchaye raat bhar
bheja wahi khaghaz usaa, humne likha kuch bhi nahi
ik shaaam ke saaye taale, baithi rahi woh der tak
ankho se ki baat bahut, muh se kaha kuch bhi nahi
ehsaas ki khushboo kaha, awaaz ke jugnoo kaha
khamosh yadoon ke siwa, ghar mein raha kuch bhi nahi
do chaar din ki baat hai, dil khaak mien mil jayagaa
jab aag par khaghaz rakha, baaki bacha kuch bhi nahi

~roshni~


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«Reply #100 on: April 11, 2006, 12:50:48 PM »

Wah Roshni jee Wah Bahut dinn Baad padney ka Mouka mila aapko, Its Really Awesome!!! PLz keep wrinting!!


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«Reply #101 on: April 11, 2006, 01:45:53 PM »

thxx nirbhay ji !!! hume khushi tab hoti jab aap humari shayari ka reply dete !!


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«Reply #102 on: April 11, 2006, 02:44:09 PM »

Quote from: "BHONDU"

Quote from: "Pooja"

anjaan nahi ab koi jaan ban gaya hai
dekar wo sath, dil ka mehmaan ban gaya hai
jab bhi ayye is darbar mai, najar dhoondati hai
aggy ki line ab nahi sujhati hai sad5

aap ka bhoj apne sar liye lete hai .
aage ki lines hum puri kiye dete hai.
is darbar mein jiske baatoon se milti hum ko rahat hai.
kya kahe "pooja" ji wo aapki chahat hai.

shayari -e- dard mai hum yah kaha aa gaye
likhne chale thy dard, kuch aor hi farma gaye
yah darbar to phir shayri-e-ishaq mai sajana hoga
karani hai aise shayri to phir yahan se jaana hoag!!!


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«Reply #103 on: April 11, 2006, 02:44:49 PM »

Quote from: "roshni246"

Thanks Vicky akela, bahoot khoob Roshini!!!


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«Reply #104 on: April 11, 2006, 02:46:14 PM »

very nice Roshani......... Pooja.... Bhondu........


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