~~~Elaan-E-Mahobbat~~~

by badnaam_shayar on February 13, 2006, 03:44:07 AM
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Ikraar jo kardo tum apne pyar ka.....
Toh hum apni jindagi Gul-O-Gulistaan se saja denge....
Haath jo thaam lo ek baar hamara....
Toh hum bhi apne pyar k liye Taz Mehel se kuch behetreen bana denge....
Aap ek baar hamari Jindagi me aane ka wada toh karo....
Aapki kasam hum khuda Saahil toh aapko Kinara bana denge....
Leni na hogi aapko kisi se bhi Izazat....
Aapko hum apne iss dil ki Mallika bana denge...
Kisi aur ki ho na jaana...yeh Khawab hamare na tod jaana...
Warna aapki doli k barabar se hum apna Janaza Uthwa denge...
Agar Ungli uthayi is poore jahan me kisi ne bhi...
Toh Khuda Paak Kasam poori Dunia ko Hum shamshaan bana denge...
Yeh Elaan hai hamari mahobbat ka....Zara dhyan se padna...
Sach me bahut Nasha hai aapke pyar me...hum zaroor kuch kar denge........
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2006, 03:56:02 AM »
GR8888 Baddu....U r gr88...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2006, 03:59:07 AM »
Shukriya Dildaar bhai....... Puzzled !
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Sonu
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2006, 04:33:10 AM »
gaurav bahut khoob....
yea un pyar kerney valo key lyea mess hai...

oss ki nani bund sa ehsaas tha,
komel... nerm... keoki vhaa pyar tha...,
mey thi..., tum they..., tanhayee thi.
humarey apney palo ka ehsaas tha.
rom rom mey tum ho samaya hai,
tumharey ahdharoo ka sangeet loogo key beech bhi tumhri chitven hai or hia, tum meyrey pass.
tum hugey or huga tumhara reyshmi ehsaas,
meyra pyar kabhi khatem nahi huga,
gheyra per gheyra huta chlaajayga mithaas ka bhaver.
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2006, 04:44:22 AM »
Bahoot khoob BD JI,, waise agar app last line mai jayengy ki jagah dengy kar de to rythem bilkul sahi rahegi aor arth bhi same hi rahega.....
Bahoot acha likha hai apne!!!!

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Ikraar jo kardo tum apne pyar ka.....
Toh hum apni jindagi Gul-O-Gulistaan se saja denge....
Haath jo thaam lo ek baar hamara....
Toh hum bhi apne pyar k liye Taz Mehel se kuch behetreen bana denge....
Aap ek baar hamari Jindagi me aane ka wada toh karo....
Aapki kasam hum khuda Saahil toh aapko Kinara bana denge....
Leni na hogi aapko kisi se bhi Izazat....
Aapko hum apne iss dil ki Mallika bana denge...
Kisi aur ki ho na jaana...yeh Khawab hamare na tod jaana...
Warna aapki doli k barabar se hum apna Janaza Uthwa denge...
Agar Ungli uthayi is poore jahan me kisi ne bhi...
Toh Khuda Paak Kasam poori Dunia ko Hum shamshaan bana denge...
Yeh Elaan hai hamari mahobbat ka....Zara dhyan se padna...
Sach me bahut Nasha hai aapke pyar me...hum zaroor kuch kar jayenge........
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2006, 04:45:34 AM »
wah sonu ji apko kai dino baad parane ko milla, magar bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai!!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2006, 05:17:24 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Bahoot khoob BD JI,, waise agar app last line mai jayengy ki jagah dengy kar de to rythem bilkul sahi rahegi aor arth bhi same hi rahega.....
Bahoot acha likha hai apne!!!!

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Ikraar jo kardo tum apne pyar ka.....
Toh hum apni jindagi Gul-O-Gulistaan se saja denge....
Haath jo thaam lo ek baar hamara....
Toh hum bhi apne pyar k liye Taz Mehel se kuch behetreen bana denge....
Aap ek baar hamari Jindagi me aane ka wada toh karo....
Aapki kasam hum khuda Saahil toh aapko Kinara bana denge....
Leni na hogi aapko kisi se bhi Izazat....
Aapko hum apne iss dil ki Mallika bana denge...
Kisi aur ki ho na jaana...yeh Khawab hamare na tod jaana...
Warna aapki doli k barabar se hum apna Janaza Uthwa denge...
Agar Ungli uthayi is poore jahan me kisi ne bhi...
Toh Khuda Paak Kasam poori Dunia ko Hum shamshaan bana denge...
Yeh Elaan hai hamari mahobbat ka....Zara dhyan se padna...
Sach me bahut Nasha hai aapke pyar me...hum zaroor kuch kar jayenge........


Thnx for suggestion and for appriciation........aap theek keh rahi ho.....denge sahi rahega wahan..... Puzzled !
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Sonu
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2006, 05:45:35 AM »
shukriya pooja ji... bus yeo hi time nahi lega... pooja ji app mujhey sirf sonu khey sakti hai... thanks so much apko shayri achi lagi..

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wah sonu ji apko kai dino baad parane ko milla, magar bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2006, 05:51:06 AM »
ok Sonu, thanks BS JI!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2006, 05:55:04 AM »
mahubatt gazel hai, gazel hai mahubatt,
koi taja khilta kevel hai maubatt.
hakikat hia keya ahow tum ko batayeh,
sadiyaao pey bhair hai mahubatt.
mahubatt ka koi badel he nahi hia,
ager hai badel, vo badel hai mahubatt.
badeltey hai musem, badelta hai ahlem,
jhaa mey hameysha atel hai mahubatt.
yea zezba, yea ehsaas herdem naya hai,
key kel bhi thi, aahj bhi hai mahubatt.
bedaa husen hai 'ashk' es hadso mey,
dilo key milen ka amel hai mahubatt
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2006, 06:24:10 PM »
Wow,kya baat hai,bohat khoob BD and sonu ji,gr8 work.
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2006, 05:42:52 AM »
wah wah kya elan hai bahtu khob gaurav ji jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai bahut hi badiya...
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«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2006, 05:46:26 AM »
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Wow,kya baat hai,bohat khoob BD and sonu ji,gr8 work.


thanks nidhi ji...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #13 on: February 14, 2006, 03:15:46 PM »
thnx nidhi and Gesu........ :wink:
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«Reply #14 on: February 14, 2006, 04:48:07 PM »
Aye Duniawalon Badnaam na kehna mahobbat Ko meri.........
Apne Pyar k baare mein hum kuch sunn nahi sakte.....
Cheen k is dunia ki har khushi luutaa dunga tumpe.......
Kyunki Udaas hum aapko dekh nahi sakte.....
Aaj meri Jindagi ka Saagar khamosh hee sahi......
Par is khamosh sailab ko hum or kuch dinn rok nahi sakte......
Elaan kar denge hum apni Mahobbat ka ek dinn.....
Abhi bebas hai hum kuch is tarah ki tumhe kuch bata nahi sakte......
Izhaar karne se darte hain hum kabhi kabhi......
Ikraar toh sahi hai....par inkaar sunn k aapka hum jee nahi sakte.........
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