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Jane kaisa ye dard hai jo hontho se bayaa.n na ho
kaheen in lafzo mein tere hi dard ki daastaa.n na ho
Palkein jhuka kar chalte hain hum unki gali se
ke phir unse milkar nigaahein pashemaa.n na ho
samet kar baahon mein unhe gujaar lete hain raat
karwat nahin badalte ke faasle phir darmaya.n na ho
Jalti saanso mein uljhi hain aahein kayi raaton se
magar ye jism jalkar bhi is aag mein dhuaa.n na ho
hum bhi kya nikle is bheegte mausam me tar laute
yun bhi aansuon me kisi ke dil ka aashiyaa.n na ho
wo samajhte hain ke hum juda ho chale hain unse lekin
aisa bi nahi k ab tak unke hotho pe mera nishaa.n na ho
wo aakar saahil par hi hume tabaah kar gaye ‘Intezar’
aur hum sochte the ki mazdhaar me kahin tufaa.n na ho… !
Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2011, 06:22:45 PM » |
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Manish ji bahut bahut Shukriya aapka... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2011, 07:05:24 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2011, 07:26:12 AM » |
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Jane kaisa ye dard hai jo hontho se bayaa.n na ho
kaheen in lafzo mein tere hi dard ki daastaa.n na ho
Palkein jhuka kar chalte hain hum unki gali se
ke phir unse milkar nigaahein pashemaa.n na ho
samet kar baahon mein unhe gujaar lete hain raat
karwat nahin badalte ke faasle phir darmaya.n na ho
Jalti saanso mein uljhi hain aahein kayi raaton se
magar ye jism jalkar bhi is aag mein dhuaa.n na ho
hum bhi kya nikle is bheegte mausam me tar laute
yun bhi aansuon me kisi ke dil ka aashiyaa.n na ho
wo samajhte hain ke hum juda ho chale hain unse lekin
aisa bi nahi k ab tak unke hotho pe mera nishaa.n na ho
wo aakar saahil par hi hume tabaah kar gaye ‘Intezar’
aur hum sochte the ki mazdhaar me kahin tufaa.n na ho… !
Shukriya
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bahut hi khub intezar ji |
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2011, 08:20:51 AM » |
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intzaar… mindblowing creation… karwat nahi bdalte… superb mahasuperbb line… end was amazing  hats off to u… jb b aate ho chaap chhod jate ho… daily aao yar… be happy god bless u |
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2011, 08:39:01 AM » |
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Suresh ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2011, 08:42:35 AM » |
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Rahim bhai aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aapne dil se padha aur pasand kiya bahut khushi huyi... aap hume bhoole nahi accha laga ... aap saath rehte ho humesha, achha lagta hai... aap humesha khush raho... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2011, 02:18:35 PM » |
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bht bht khoob intezar ji...
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«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2011, 01:01:28 PM » |
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Shukriya Anaam ji aap ne pasand kiya, tahe dil se shukriya... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #14 on: June 29, 2011, 01:02:33 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Marhoom bahayaat ji... Intezar !
bahut hi khub intezar ji
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