Faisla.................mann

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“Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.”

Ye line khwaishji ki nazm se li gayi hai…..

Ye sara tanabana khwaishji ki likhi nazm ki ek line ke irdgird buna gaya hai….
Kuch samay pahle maine khwaish ji ki ek nazm padhi thi.. jisne mujhe dil tak chhua aur uski ek line mere dil main ghar kar gayi bahut dinon tak yahi socha ki ispar kuchh likha jaye….


Zindgi tujhse mujhe ladna hai ladna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tujhko main chhodke jaun to ab jaun kahan,
Jo tu nahin meri to koun hai ab mera yahan,
Tu jo thhukarayegi mujhko to fir marna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Raas aati nahin duniya ye raunaken iski,
Ishq main payin hain bas hamne jafayen uski,
Ye khata ki hai iska jurmana bhi bharna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tumhare shahar main patthar ke log rahte hain,
Mere aansu yahan dariya ki tarah bathe hain,
Mann” to shishe sa hai nazuk is darna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 12:17:37 PM »
Bahut khoob superbbbbbbbbbb creation Man sahab.........
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 03:29:50 PM »
wah mann ji wah bahut hi lajawab creation jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai..... bahut hi umda

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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 04:35:03 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 05:31:48 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 21, 2012, 11:46:50 AM
“Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.”

Ye line khwaishji ki nazm se li gayi hai…..

Ye sara tanabana khwaishji ki likhi nazm ki ek line ke irdgird buna gaya hai….
Kuch samay pahle maine khwaish ji ki ek nazm padhi thi.. jisne mujhe dil tak chhua aur uski ek line mere dil main ghar kar gayi bahut dinon tak yahi socha ki ispar kuchh likha jaye….


Zindgi tujhse mujhe ladna hai ladna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tujhko main chhodke jaun to ab jaun kahan,
Jo tu nahin meri to koun hai ab mera yahan,
Tu jo thhukarayegi mujhko to fir marna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Raas aati nahin duniya ye raunaken iski,
Ishq main payin hain bas hamne jafayen uski,
Ye khata ki hai iska jurmana bhi bharna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tumhare shahar main patthar ke log rahte hain,
Mere aansu yahan dariya ki tarah bathe hain,
Mann” to shishe sa hai nazuk is darna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Mann



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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2012, 01:01:37 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2012, 03:19:11 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2012, 03:16:18 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saini sahab...
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bahut bahut shukriya soudagarji
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2012, 03:26:00 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2012, 11:45:07 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2012, 12:09:30 PM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!


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Quote from: mann.mann on September 21, 2012, 11:46:50 AM
“Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.”

Ye line khwaishji ki nazm se li gayi hai…..

Ye sara tanabana khwaishji ki likhi nazm ki ek line ke irdgird buna gaya hai….
Kuch samay pahle maine khwaish ji ki ek nazm padhi thi.. jisne mujhe dil tak chhua aur uski ek line mere dil main ghar kar gayi bahut dinon tak yahi socha ki ispar kuchh likha jaye….


Zindgi tujhse mujhe ladna hai ladna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tujhko main chhodke jaun to ab jaun kahan,
Jo tu nahin meri to koun hai ab mera yahan,
Tu jo thhukarayegi mujhko to fir marna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Raas aati nahin duniya ye raunaken iski,
Ishq main payin hain bas hamne jafayen uski,
Ye khata ki hai iska jurmana bhi bharna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tumhare shahar main patthar ke log rahte hain,
Mere aansu yahan dariya ki tarah bathe hain,
Mann” to shishe sa hai nazuk is darna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Mann
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2012, 03:23:44 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khamoshji
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2012, 03:24:47 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya nandbabuji
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