Faisla.................mann

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«Reply #15 on: September 26, 2012, 03:26:47 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sanjeevji
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«Reply #16 on: September 26, 2012, 08:38:23 AM »
“Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.”

Ye line khwaishji ki nazm se li gayi hai…..

Ye sara tanabana khwaishji ki likhi nazm ki ek line ke irdgird buna gaya hai….
Kuch samay pahle maine khwaish ji ki ek nazm padhi thi.. jisne mujhe dil tak chhua aur uski ek line mere dil main ghar kar gayi bahut dinon tak yahi socha ki ispar kuchh likha jaye….


Zindgi tujhse mujhe ladna hai ladna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tujhko main chhodke jaun to ab jaun kahan,
Jo tu nahin meri to koun hai ab mera yahan,
Tu jo thhukarayegi mujhko to fir marna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Raas aati nahin duniya ye raunaken iski,
Ishq main payin hain bas hamne jafayen uski,
Ye khata ki hai iska jurmana bhi bharna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Tumhare shahar main patthar ke log rahte hain,
Mere aansu yahan dariya ki tarah bathe hain,
Mann” to shishe sa hai nazuk is darna hoga.
Ab kuchh to faisala mujhe karna hoga.

Mann




Mann Ji...Bahut bahut Khoooooooooooooob!!!!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Gehre Jazbaat..

Vakaai Lajawaab..Mujhe Khushi Hui Hai Ke Mera Koi Kalaam Kisi Ke kaam Aa sake..

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye....

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«Reply #17 on: September 26, 2012, 11:43:14 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwazji
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«Reply #18 on: September 26, 2012, 11:44:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.. is koshish ko pasand karne ke lie.. par aapki tarah khubsurat nahin likh sake.... shukriya aapka...
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