Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin

by Ricky on December 09, 2007, 06:36:46 AM

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Here is a poem which may appear twisted, still I am posting here. If any doubt about any line.Please ask.

Khamoshi gehri hai, kuch tadap raha hai,
Kahin saazish ye mujhpe hi na karde !!

Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin,
Inteha ho, yeh kahin mujhpe baarish naa karde !!

Kuwwat meri mere saath shiddat se per ab kahin,
Naraaz ho mujhse, dagha naa karde !!

Mere lavzon mein hai bharipan,
kahin ye aur dard naa bhardein !!

Behoshi sa aalam har pal, per hain saansein,
Bojhil ho toot jayen aur sharminda naa karden… !!


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Roja

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Re: Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin

«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2007, 06:54:53 AM »

bahut khoob... bahut dino k baad aapne likha hai.. accha laga padkar
esp...the following lines..

Khamoshi gehri hai, kuch tadap raha hai,
Kahin saazish ye mujhpe hi na karde !!

Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin,
Inteha ho, yeh kahin mujhpe baarish naa karde !!

God Bless....


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punam

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Re: Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin

«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2007, 07:01:12 AM »

too good ricky ji...


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Shikha12

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Re: Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin

«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2007, 09:09:22 AM »

Bahut hi achha likha hai Ricky..

Quote

"Behoshi sa aalam har pal, per hain saansein,
Bojhil ho toot jayen aur sharminda naa karden… !!"

Yeh sher bahut hi khoobsurat laga, ismein ek saath bahut si baatein keh di gayi hai.. Usual Smile

In all.. A Very lovely composition...

By the way, I had one doubt too.. (Because My urdu is so weak). Please tell me..What does "Kuwwat" means???


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deepika_divya

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Re: Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin

«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2007, 06:57:08 AM »

hmmmm bahoot hi kuch baat keh gai aapke sabd.. like jaise kamoshiyan ka aalam har pal kuch halchal macha rahi ho.. kuch kehna chah rahi ho,kuch sandesha dena cha rahi ho sahyar ko par sahad samaj nahi pa rahe hai ki kya .....

Realy liked it Ricky sir... keep writing sir