Fanah kiya...

by brokenbyluv on July 19, 2009, 05:02:49 PM
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Dil-e-nadan ne pyar karne ka gunah kiya,
us zalim ki bato mein khudko tabah kiya,
socha tha k kabhi na kabhi vo merra ho jayega..
maut ka tohfa deke usne mujhe zamane bhar mein fanah kiya...... tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2009, 05:03:36 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 19, 2009, 05:02:49 PM
Dil-e-nadan ne pyar karne ka gunah kiya,
us zalim ki bato mein khudko tabah kiya,
sochta tha k kabhi na kabhi vo merra ho jayega..
maut ka tohfa deke usne mujhe zamane bhar mein fanah kiya......

Nice 1 broken ji 
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2009, 05:24:58 PM »
but roja ji its my creation...
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2009, 05:27:53 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 19, 2009, 05:24:58 PM
but roja ji its my creation...

Nice lines indeed  Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2009, 05:29:17 PM »
thnk u..
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2009, 06:33:36 AM »
Wah Bbl ji,bahut khoob wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2009, 05:06:16 PM »
 Thankyou !
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