Fasle itne hue

by tamanna.pt on April 03, 2010, 05:54:41 AM
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FASLE ITNE HUE DARMIYAN,
NAZDIKIYON KI AADAT NA RAHI ,
KUCH IS KADAR MASROOF THA USME MAIN,
MUJHE APNI KHABAR NA RAHI,
KISI AUR KO CHAHU YE BAS ME NAHI MERE,
YE DIL MERA AB MERI SUNTA HI NAHI,
KUCH IS TARAH BHULA DIYA TERE INKAAR KO MAINE,
JAISE WO MAINE KABHI SUNA HI NAHI,
KAISE MAANU K NAHI SAMJHI HAI WO DIL KI BAAT KO,
ITNI NASAMAJH WO HAI BHI TO NAHI.
                         (Tamanna original)
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2010, 05:58:18 AM »
Bahut acha likhti hai aap Tamanna ji.mindblowing creation.keep it up. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2010, 07:11:22 AM »
Good one Tamanna Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2010, 07:18:28 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Tamannaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2010, 12:29:40 PM »
Tammana-bhai aapne achhi kavita likhi hai...
Apne Dil k jajbaaton ko b-khubi pradershit kiya hai......... Applause Applause Applause

Na do dosh uss naari ko
Usse nahi tha pyaar aapse
Kiya bhi tha inkaar aapse
Aap he to bekhbar madhosh they
Asliyat se jaankar anjaan they
Fasle to darmiyan hone he they
Nazdikiyen jab kabhi nahi thee
Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 03, 2010, 05:54:41 AM
FASLE ITNE HUE DARMIYAN,
NAZDIKIYON KI AADAT NA RAHI ,
KUCH IS KADAR MASROOF THA USME MAIN,
MUJHE APNI KHABAR NA RAHI,
KISI AUR KO CHAHU YE BAS ME NAHI MERE,
YE DIL MERA AB MERI SUNTA HI NAHI,
KUCH IS TARAH BHULA DIYA TERE INKAAR KO MAINE,
JAISE WO MAINE KABHI SUNA HI NAHI,
KAISE MAANU K NAHI SAMJHI HAI WO DIL KI BAAT KO,
ITNI NASAMAJH WO HAI BHI TO NAHI.
                         (Tamanna original)
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2010, 12:55:51 PM »
Welcome to yoindia tamanna ji..bahut khoob likha hai apne..

KUCH IS TARAH BHULA DIYA TERE INKAAR KO MAINE,
JAISE WO MAINE KABHI SUNA HI NAHI,

ye line sidha dil ko chhu gayi...keep writtng....
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2010, 04:55:04 PM »
Bahut achha likha hai Tamnna ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2010, 01:08:19 PM »
       Bahut-bahut shukriya madhuveshji,rajeshji,koyalji,khwaishji,riyazji aur broken by luv. umeed hai aage bhi aap sabko meri koshishein pasand aayengi. Usual Smile
       
        GUNAH HAI ISHQ,TO GUNAHGAAR THI MAIN,
        HASRAT ITNI HAI,K SAZA BAS TUJHSE MILE.
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2010, 01:54:38 PM »
Thanks Tamannaji....You are welcome.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Aapki nari k virudh....
Purush ne likhi ho aysee ye kavita padh kar
Mai tou aapko Bhai samajh baithee thee.... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 04, 2010, 01:08:19 PM
      Bahut-bahut shukriya madhuveshji,rajeshji,koyalji,khwaishji,riyazji aur broken by luv. umeed hai aage bhi aap sabko meri koshishein pasand aayengi. Usual Smile
      
        GUNAH HAI ISHQ,TO GUNAHGAAR THI MAIN,
        HASRAT ITNI HAI,K SAZA BAS TUJHSE MILE.
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2010, 02:46:37 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tamanna ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2010, 07:00:33 AM »
 Bahut Shukriya Klaskar ji. khushi hui k aapko pasand aaya.
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2010, 09:49:58 AM »
Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 04, 2010, 01:08:19 PM
       Bahut-bahut shukriya madhuveshji,rajeshji,koyalji,khwaishji,riyazji aur broken by luv. umeed hai aage bhi aap sabko meri koshishein pasand aayengi. Usual Smile
       
        GUNAH HAI ISHQ,TO GUNAHGAAR THI MAIN,
        HASRAT ITNI HAI,K SAZA BAS TUJHSE MILE.


ur welcome tamnna ji aur dil selikhi har baat sidha dil pe asar zarur karti hai...

GUNAH HAI ISHQ,TO GUNAHGAAR THI MAIN,
        HASRAT ITNI HAI,K SAZA BAS TUJHSE MILE.

ek baar phir kam alfazo mein bahut hi umda likha hai...
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2010, 09:56:41 AM »
Koyal ji aur Geet ji aap dono ne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2010, 02:02:32 PM »
Thanks Madhu-di...... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Fasle kitne bhi ho Fiji aur India k beech
Madhu-di utni he karib hai humdono se

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 06, 2010, 09:56:41 AM
Koyal ji aur Geet ji aap dono ne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2010, 12:33:10 PM »


  Shukriya shihab ji. Khushi hui aapko pasand aaya.
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