fir se.......

by SURESH SANGWAN on March 06, 2010, 02:00:03 PM
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puraani chot par dard uubhar aaya firse
aaj fir aankhon se meri sawan barse.

tumse ab wafa ki nahin uummeed
koi karam wafa ka na karna firse

shama jali hai arse baad andhere mein
aaj hi aandhiyan  nikli hain ghar se

sanam ban ke gale lagaane chali thi maut.
kyun zindagi aaj gujari hai idhar se.
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2010, 02:19:33 PM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI     SURESH SANWAN JI.....

KYUN AAJ TERI YAAD AAI HAI FIR SE
KYUN AANKHEN BHAR AAI HAI FIR SE
JAB KOI UMEED HI NAHI HAI TUM SE
KYUN NIKAL NAHI PATE TUMKO DIL SE...
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2010, 02:32:47 PM »
SHUKRIYA CARA JI.
WAHI SAWAAL SAAMNE HAI AAJ FIR SE.
CHAHKAR BHI JAATE NAHIN KYUN TUM DIL SE.

Quote from: cara on March 06, 2010, 02:19:33 PM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI     SURESH SANWAN JI.....

KYUN AAJ TERI YAAD AAI HAI FIR SE
KYUN AANKHEN BHAR AAI HAI FIR SE
JAB KOI UMEED HI NAHI HAI TUM SE
KYUN NIKAL NAHI PATE TUMKO DIL SE...
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2010, 03:07:00 AM »
Wah wah Suresh kay hi khoob creation hai. Shandaar, umdah. Do lines meri bhi dekhen:

Phir kabhi na dekh paaoge hamari soorat
Khali haath agar laut gaye tumhare dar se
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2010, 05:22:12 AM »
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RIYAZ JI.

AAPNE BHI KHOOB KAHA HAI. Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 07, 2010, 03:07:00 AM
Wah wah Suresh kay hi khoob creation hai. Shandaar, umdah. Do lines meri bhi dekhen:

Phir kabhi na dekh paaoge hamari soorat
Khali haath agar laut gaye tumhare dar se
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2010, 07:31:46 PM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 06, 2010, 02:00:03 PM
puraani chot par dard uubhar aaya firse
aaj fir aankhon se meri sawan barse.

tumse ab wafa ki nahin uummeed
koi karam wafa ka na karna firse

shama jali hai arse baad andhere mein
aaj hi aandhiyan  nikli hain ghar se

sanam ban ke gale lagaane chali thi maut.
kyun zindagi aaj gujari hai idhar se.

Waah, bahut khubsurat hai aap ka yaha kalaam, Suresh Ji...!

Har sher tareef-e-kaabil hai, my favourites are the two last ones...!

Fursat main aap ko aur paDheinge...!

Duaaon ke saath

Usual Smile
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2010, 02:14:15 PM »
shukriya amanushji.
Quote from: Amanush... on March 15, 2010, 07:31:46 PM
Waah, bahut khubsurat hai aap ka yaha kalaam, Suresh Ji...!

Har sher tareef-e-kaabil hai, my favourites are the two last ones...!

Fursat main aap ko aur paDheinge...!

Duaaon ke saath

Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2010, 02:19:24 PM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sach mein bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Jazbaati peshkash..
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2010, 02:28:43 PM »
TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA KHWAISHJI.
Quote from: khwaish on March 16, 2010, 02:19:24 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sach mein bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Jazbaati peshkash..
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2010, 02:44:34 PM »
Sureshji,
wakai pahali bar kuchh mahsoos kiya hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause[

Khwahishe buland karate rahen hum,
ummid ke sune mukampar.
Kismat hansati rahi muzpar,
aur apane intkam par.
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #10 on: March 16, 2010, 03:01:16 PM »
SHUKRIIIIIIIIIYA SANGLIKAR JI.
JO AAPKO KUCH MEHSOOS HUA.
AAPNE BHI BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI.
WAKAI BAHUT KHOOB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: sanglikar on March 16, 2010, 02:44:34 PM
Sureshji,
wakai pahali bar kuchh mahsoos kiya hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause[

Khwahishe buland karate rahen hum,
ummid ke sune mukampar.
Kismat hansati rahi muzpar,
aur apane intkam par.
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