Fir teri yaad aayi.... -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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«Reply #15 on: May 10, 2008, 08:23:40 AM »

Thanks for Appreciation... icon_smile


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Rajbir

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #16 on: May 10, 2008, 12:21:24 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 10, 2008, 06:42:22 AM

dard jo sine mei uthta aaj b hai
lagta hai use mujhse juda hone ka ehsaas aaj b hai
ye jo bin mausam ho jaati hain barsaatein
lagta hai mujhe yaad kar wo aansu bahata aaj b hai

Bhawna

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Rajbir

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #17 on: May 10, 2008, 12:23:29 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 10, 2008, 08:02:43 AM

Ek chhoti si koshish...

Neend gumsum ho ke shayad machal gayi hogi...
Ya phir Barsaat ki boondon si bikhar gayi hogi...

Laut.ti saanson ne kai sawaal uthaaye hon.ge,
Sab bahaaane khaali khaali nazar aaye hon.ge...
Mere khat seene se jo tumne lagaaye hon.ge,
Aur likhawat apne aansuon se bachhaayi hogi...

Kamre ki Khidki ko khula tumne chhoda hoga,
Ghar ki Dewaaron par aks koi lehraaya hoga...
Hazaar chehron mein bhi mujhko talashaa hoga,
Aur Naam leke mera palakein na jhapkaayi hogi...

Har ek karwat pe naya dard ubhar aaya hoga,
Ghabra ke seene se takiyaa koi lagaaya hoga...
Andhere mein neendon ko laakh bulaaya hoga,
Raat aankhon aankhon mein hi guzar gayi hogi...

Neend gumsum ho ke shayad machal gayi hogi...
Ya phir Barsaat ki boondon si bikhar gayi hogi...

Mahiya

Bahut khoob ! Applause

Tum aisi chhoti chhoti si koshish karti raha karo Usual Smile


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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #18 on: May 10, 2008, 12:31:13 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 10, 2008, 08:02:43 AM

bahut khoob mahiya..

aap ne bhi bahut acha likha hai natural bro..


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Shikha12

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #19 on: May 10, 2008, 12:37:16 PM »

Thanks a lot Rajbir ji and Khwaish... icon_smile


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punam

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #20 on: May 10, 2008, 03:07:47 PM »

wah Nattu bhaiya kya baat hai..bahot hi acha likhe..

shikha di really wounderful..bahot acha..


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Roja

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #21 on: May 10, 2008, 05:24:51 PM »

Quote from: natural on May 09, 2008, 11:39:22 AM

Mere ghar ki udaasi se ghabra gayi hogi,
Tanhaayi shayad tumhare ghar aa gayi hogi....
Yahan to tumhari yaadon ka shor hai bahut,
Tumhari sangat shayad usey bha gayi hogi....

Nikal aaya hoon bahut duur tere daaman se
Jise lehra ke hawa tumko chaunka gayi hogi....
Kuch lamhe jo saath mein bitaaye thhe kabhi,
Unhi pal.on ko yaadon mein dohra gayi hogi....

Nam hui hon.gi sharaarti aankhein tumhaari,
Ishq ki Gazalon mein dardgi chha gayi hogi....
Mere ghar ki udaasi se ghabra gayi hogi,
Tanhaayi shayad tumhare ghar aa gayi hogi....

Natural ji bahut accha likha hai aapne.


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Roja

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #22 on: May 10, 2008, 05:26:47 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 10, 2008, 08:02:43 AM

Wah Shikha di, bahut accha likha hai aapne b


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_Vicky_

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #23 on: May 12, 2008, 06:10:40 AM »

Quote from: natural on May 09, 2008, 11:39:22 AM

Oye Nattu sab Kushal mangal to Hai Na.. Kya Hua Tujhe..??

Wah Wah Wah.. Kya Baat hai.. Behad Khubsoorat Alfaaz Likhe Hain mere dost.. icon_king

Haath kahan hai Tere.. Tere Haath Choomne de Yaar.. !! Winking

**~** Mann **~**


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honeyrose

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #24 on: May 12, 2008, 06:23:26 AM »

Bohat acha likha hai aapne Mahiya sis bohat ehsaas
hai aapki shayari main ..

Aapne Ghar Ki Diwaaron Se Na Justjoo Ki Jiye Sanam
Aapne Mohabatt Koh Apne Dil Se Na Door Ki Jiye Sanam

Jee Rahe Hai Hum Tumari Ankhon Ko Dekh kar
Mujhe Tanha Karke Na Jaa Payoge Sanam

Ik Dard Sa Dil Main Liye Jaa Rahe Hai
Kuch Pal Ki Yaadon Ka Faisla Tha Na Door Ki Jiye Sanam

Paas Na Hoon Phir Bhi Dil Ke Kareeb Hote Ho Tum Sanam
Aapne Ghar Ki Diwaaron Se Na Justjoo Ki Jiye Sanam

**$honeyrose$**


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_Vicky_

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #25 on: May 12, 2008, 06:29:39 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 10, 2008, 08:02:43 AM

Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Mahiya ji.. BehaD pyaare lafz likhe hain.. Good One yaar.. !! Usual Smile

Bahut dino baad kuch accha padhne Ko Mila.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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Shikha12

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #26 on: May 12, 2008, 06:43:25 AM »

Shukriya Punam, Roja, HoneyRose aur Mann...

Nice Lines Honey... icon_smile


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #27 on: May 13, 2008, 08:19:36 PM »

Quote from: natural on May 09, 2008, 11:39:22 AM

Natural ji,

har ek pankti agli har pankti se ktni judi hui he,sampoorn kavita.gehri kavita.andaaz khoobsurat.

tere ghar ki udaassi se na ghabrai thi
tanhai bahut guzaarishon se mere ghar aayi thi
meri khudgarzi ka charcha khud kaise kahu
jahhan meri yaadon ka jamghat laga he
wahan kisi aur ki maujudgi kaise sahu!

tere aane ki to aas toot chuki sub
tanahai jo kuch ghari tujhe chookar aayi thi
use choo choo kar teri har baat yaad aayi thi
kasam se,maanle isme na koi bewafai thi
tere ghar ki udaasi se na ghabrai thi
tanhaai bahut guzaarishon se mere ghar aayi thi!

Prateek


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syednaami

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #28 on: May 13, 2008, 08:30:08 PM »

Atti bhaavuk rachna prateek mitr, lagta hai ki hum bhool se aagaye iss nirashavaadi ko aashavaadi banaane.
Sundar laga.


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Fir teri yaad aayi....

«Reply #29 on: May 13, 2008, 08:48:04 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 13, 2008, 08:30:08 PM

Atti bhaavuk rachna prateek mitr, lagta hai ki hum bhool se aagaye iss nirashavaadi ko aashavaadi banaane.
Sundar laga.

syeednaami ji,

shukriya,aapko dard pasand aaya.niraashavaadi mein bhee to aashavaadi chupa he,aapke aane ki aas se he to hauslon mein bulandgi aati he.

Prateek


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