Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur..... -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

Sonia01

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«Reply #30 on: June 03, 2008, 02:18:34 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on June 02, 2008, 08:45:10 PM

I am not sure, if these lines make any sense for anyone... just a reply after reading khawaish's poem!!
Adat se majboor, jo man mai ayya ek saans mai likh diya!!

Kisi ki kaya talash, khud ko bhool chuki hu
Apne he ansuo main, apne ansoo bhool chuki hu
Kisi ki banu main kaise, khud ki jab main na ban paai
Ek insaan ke dard main, insaaniyat bhool chuki hu

Muhobbat se lagta hai dar, khud per vishwaas nahi hai
Itne diye imteehan, ke khud ka rasta bhool chuki hu
Kis ke liye tlaashu, her talaash ab adhuri
Zindagi ki chaht main, ajj Pooja ko maar chuki hu!!

Wow... yeh ek saans main likha hai aapne toh jab aap aaram se
likhti toh sab ki chutti ho jayegina...... bahut accha likha hai aapne
Pooja didi Simple good with simple wordings...


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #31 on: June 03, 2008, 09:03:54 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 02, 2008, 08:31:20 PM

Rehne de aasman, zameen ki talaash kar
sab kuch yehi hai,
naa kahin aur kuch talaash kar....
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shaayd kyonki mujhko talaash he
isliye he yeh dil hataash he
gum ho jaaye meri hasratein
pur isme bhee to 'kaash' he!

hur baar talaasha kuch naya
pur woh nahi apna bhaya
kaise kahu khud ko main johri
mere heroon mein daag he!

Prateek


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Pooja

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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #32 on: June 03, 2008, 09:22:17 PM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on June 03, 2008, 02:18:34 AM

Wow... yeh ek saans main likha hai aapne toh jab aap aaram se
likhti toh sab ki chutti ho jayegina...... bahut accha likha hai aapne
Pooja didi Simple good with simple wordings...

Thanks Sonia dear!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #33 on: June 03, 2008, 09:23:48 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on June 03, 2008, 09:03:54 PM

kaise kahu khud ko main johri
mere heroon mein daag he!

Prateek

wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji.. sabhi lines bahoot achi likhi.. magar yah do line bahoot man ko bha gai!!!


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #34 on: August 04, 2009, 11:20:01 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on June 03, 2008, 09:23:48 PM

wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji.. sabhi lines bahoot achi likhi.. magar yah do line bahoot man ko bha gai!!!

Aapko acchi lagi yeh panktiyaan, jaan ke accha laga pooja ji.


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madhuwesh

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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #35 on: August 04, 2009, 11:36:40 AM »

Wah wah bahut khoob Prateek ji,Pooja ji,Syednaami ji,Khwaish ji
mindblowing creation.bahut acha likha aap sabne,excellent. icon_thumleft


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Pooja

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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #36 on: August 11, 2009, 05:39:49 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on August 04, 2009, 11:20:01 AM

Aapko acchi lagi yeh panktiyaan, jaan ke accha laga pooja ji.

Apki likhi her ek kavita apne app mai kamaal hoti hai Prateek ji... magar app pratiksha bahoot karwate hai...


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Pooja

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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #37 on: August 11, 2009, 06:07:36 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 04, 2009, 11:36:40 AM

Wah wah bahut khoob Prateek ji,Pooja ji,Syednaami ji,Khwaish ji
mindblowing creation.bahut acha likha aap sabne,excellent. icon_thumleft

shukaria Madhu ji


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Re: Gaaz gire ya raaz khule hur.....

«Reply #38 on: February 25, 2010, 04:09:55 PM »

Phir se Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Prateekji aur pooja..

Missing You A Lot!!!!


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