Galat Kiya Tumne

by K Gogia on November 24, 2012, 05:37:20 AM
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Usko ApnaBanakar , Galat Kiya Tumne,
Apne seene se lagakar, Galat Kiya Tumne.

Hum Jahan Se kahin, A Ja na sake,
Mukam ij aise lakar, Galat Kiya Tumne.

Jo Sher se kisi Shayar Ka dard na jaane,
Usko Gazlen Sunakar, Galat Kiya Tumne.

Hum Tumhare liye, Jahan Chor Jayenge,
Aise Vaadon Mein Phansakar, Galat Kiya Tumne.

Jisne Di Hai, Tumhen Pehchaan,
Ger usko hi Batakar, Galat Kiya Tumne.
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2012, 05:45:54 AM »
bahut shandaar likha hai...  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2012, 05:50:07 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2012, 05:59:43 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
sooooooooo nice....
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2012, 07:06:17 AM »
Nice
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«Reply #5 on: November 24, 2012, 09:03:30 AM »
Gogia Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob badi achchi kavish kahi hai aapne..
behad umdaa khayaal aur khoob ashaar kahe haiN... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2012, 02:49:34 PM »
behatreen. kya kahne
wah wah wah wah
dhero daad is umda peshkash ke liye
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2012, 10:49:55 AM »
wah wah
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