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Gam ki aas

by vinery on September 26, 2015, 06:33:42 PM

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vinery

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Dil me mera koi armaan na rakhna
Ab mujhse koi pehchaan na rakhna
Kuch aisi baatein unki yaad aa gayi aaj
Aur tum puchh rahe ho hamse gam ka raaz
Jaanti hun gam baatne se kam hota hai lekin
Unka diya hua gam hi hai ek meri aas
Agar woh bhi baat du to unka kya rahega mere paas!


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Shikha sanghvi

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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2015, 07:50:56 PM »

Nice pooja


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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2015, 08:44:40 PM »

Quote from: vinery on September 26, 2015, 06:33:42 PM

Dil mein meraa koi armaan naa rakhnaa
Ab mujhse koi pehchaan na rakhnaa
Kuchh aisi baatein unki yaad aa gayi aaj
Aur tumh poochh rahe ho hamse gham ka raaz
Jaanti hun gham baatne se kam hota hai lekin
Unhkaa diyaa huaa gham hi hai ek meri aas
Agar woh bhi baant dun to unhkaa kyaa rahegaa mere paas!

Pooja jee bahut hee khoobsurat likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa. Maain ne aapke likhe huey laafzon ko sound ke hisaab se change kiyaa hai jo main neechey note kar rahaa hoon.
mera = meraa na = naa rakhna = rakhnaa
Kuch = Kuchh
tum = tumh puchh = poochh gam = gham
unka = unhkaa diya = diyaa
baat = baant du = dun


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vinery

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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2015, 04:15:45 AM »

Thank you so much, Shikha ji.


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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2015, 04:18:00 AM »

Thank you so much, Surindar ji.
Thank you for your help. I will keep these things in mind.


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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2015, 09:36:44 AM »

वाह वाह खुबसूरत पेशकश


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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2015, 11:01:36 AM »

bohat khubsurat pooja ji waaaaahhhhhhh


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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2015, 03:52:51 AM »

Thank you so much, Rastogi jee.


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Re: Gam ki aas

«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2015, 07:53:00 AM »

Thank you so much, Jeet jee.


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