gayee ho

by janumanu on November 18, 2012, 04:38:16 AM

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janumanu

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Lekar meri jaan gayee ho
Tum bhi ab ye maan gayee ho

Teri yaad mai bheeguN hardam
Kaisi chhatri taan gayee ho

Aaine se phair liya munh
kya khud ko pahchaan gayee ho

Jane ki thaani thi pahle
Ab aaogi na thaan gayee ho

kitna mushkil aaye thi tum
aur kitna asaan gayee ho

dekhogi to dar jaaogi
chhod ke yuN hairaan gayee ho

Aankh hi nikle ye na nikle
Bhar kar jo lobaan gayee ho


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Aarish

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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2012, 04:58:58 AM »

kya baat hai umda ghazal hai, daaad qubool karen.


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2012, 05:42:42 AM »

Quote from: janumanu on November 18, 2012, 04:38:16 AM

nice


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2012, 04:12:41 PM »

very nice


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2012, 04:31:37 PM »

bahut khoob....... Applause


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2012, 05:10:41 PM »

Quote from: janumanu on November 18, 2012, 04:38:16 AM

bahut khoob sir, kya khoob qafia istemaal kiya hai aapne


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Kaushal Sharma

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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2012, 05:53:15 AM »

Bahut Khoob Behad Shandaar Cration.........


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2012, 06:04:14 AM »


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ParwaaZ

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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2012, 09:22:37 AM »

Vikas Bhai Aadaab!

WaaH Bhai waaH kia gazal kahi hai choti si bher meiN umda
khayaaloN ko khoob bayaaN kiya hai ....

Behad gehre aur umdaa sher rahe janab... Meri dheroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kjiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2012, 12:35:29 PM »

nyc 1 vikas ji ,......acha qafia o radeef ,bohat c daad,.....


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2012, 12:41:11 PM »

Quote from: Aarish on November 18, 2012, 04:58:58 AM

kya baat hai umda ghazal hai, daaad qubool karen.

shukriyaa janaab ........ aapko pasand aayee


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #11 on: December 06, 2012, 04:11:07 PM »

Quote from: janumanu on November 18, 2012, 04:38:16 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa h janaab waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Clapping Smiley


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2012, 09:27:19 AM »

Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in Dec-2012 Yoindia Shayariadab newsletter.

You can visit link given above to get more information about it.


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janumanu

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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2012, 12:26:30 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 19, 2012, 09:22:37 AM

Shukriyaa janaab ..


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Re: gayee ho

«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2012, 12:27:38 PM »

Quote from: iAdmin on December 28, 2012, 09:27:19 AM

Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in Dec-2012 Yoindia Shayariadab newsletter.

You can visit link given above to get more information about it.

Shukriyaa sir