<>*Gazal sajati hai.*<> -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: November 23, 2010, 02:24:12 PM »

Anamika Ji Aapki Yeh Peshkash Waqai Behad khubsoorat hai.. Andaaz-e-bayan Humesha ki Tarah Lajawab raha.. Bahut khoooob..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #16 on: November 23, 2010, 04:53:51 PM »

taareef hi taareef kasak ji par ek kami hai shayad
wo bhi mere comments ki hai na...

par mere taraf se No comments only Compliments... bahut hi khubsurat hai... bahut hi achhe andaz...

na jaane kyon main tujhe mila karta hun is tanhaai mein
shayad mehfil mein jalti shamma hi mujhe parwaana kiye jaati hai.. !

Intezar !


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #17 on: November 25, 2010, 09:51:51 PM »

Bahut khoob sarkaar.....!!!

jab dil me jasbaaton ki aandhi aati hai,
eshaas shabd ban gazal ka roop le leti hai,

aansuon ki dhaara behti hai tab is qadar,
ki dil ke armaano ko wo doobo deti hai,

sukh jaate hain aansoo bhi kuch palon k baad,
aur khushi naya rang leke saamne aa jaati hai,

toofan jo uth_te hain dil me dabe dabe se,
ek roz tadap ke un deewaaron ko tod deti hai,

raat andheri hoti hai ye maaloom hai humein,
par har subah suraj andhere ko duur kar deti hai...


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #18 on: November 26, 2010, 04:28:09 AM »

Quote from: yasmeen khan on November 23, 2010, 07:43:40 AM

kafi dino baad aapse mulakat hui Dher saari daad kabool kijia

Din k hangamo m bhool gaye the tujhe
Raat hui to fik tera khayal aaya

Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 23, 2010, 07:52:27 AM

Bahut khoob likha hai kasak ji behetareen...

Quote from: Shihab on November 23, 2010, 11:09:35 AM

Bahut Khub Kasak Ji...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

shukriya yasmeen ji ....geet ji...aur shihab ji..meri ek aur koshihs ko padhne aur sarahne ka..umeed hai yunhi aapko psand aane wali rachna likhti rahungi aur kuch kami ho to bhi aap pasand karte rahege...


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #19 on: November 26, 2010, 04:30:20 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on November 23, 2010, 01:26:23 PM

Anamika di,

Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai..
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thnx bhai ..pasand karne aur tareef k liye


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #20 on: November 26, 2010, 04:32:07 AM »

Quote from: Mann on November 23, 2010, 02:24:12 PM

Anamika Ji Aapki Yeh Peshkash Waqai Behad khubsoorat hai.. Andaaz-e-bayan Humesha ki Tarah Lajawab raha.. Bahut khoooob..

**~** Mann **~**

Mann ji aapke comments hamesha hi bht himmat bandhate hain..pasand karne aur hausla afzai k liye dil se thnx ji..


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #21 on: November 26, 2010, 04:35:23 AM »

Quote from: Intezar on November 23, 2010, 04:53:51 PM

sahi kaha intezar ji..aapke reply k bina poem ka maza hi nahin aata...
and thnx for this lovely compliment...

ye mehfil me jalti shamma khud jal k roshan mehfil karti hai
khud bhi jalti hai sath parwane ko bhi apne jalaya karti hai


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #22 on: November 26, 2010, 04:49:46 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on November 25, 2010, 09:51:51 PM

Bahut khoob sarkaar.....!!!

kuch kahun to kaise kahun k kya kaha hai aapne
kai sur kai rang bikhere hain aaj aapne

aakar iss mehfil me kuch geet chhode hain aapne
aaj fir khud k bandhe hath khole hain aapne

uthakar kalam ko di hai pehchan fir ek nai
sach me bht hi khubsurat likha hai aapne.....


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #23 on: November 30, 2010, 08:18:21 AM »

likhne ka to ek bahaana hota hai,
bas kalam ko saath nibhaana hota hai,

aaj saath nahi hai meri kalam mere sach hai ye,
kuch palon ke baad syaahi ka khatam ho jana hota hai,

aaj bhi chaahta hoon likhun tere har geet k saath koi geet,
par kya karun, shabdon ka hothon pe aake ruk jaana hota hai....


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Re: <>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

«Reply #24 on: November 30, 2010, 08:21:31 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 23, 2010, 04:55:12 AM

<>*Gazal sajati hai.*<>

Jazbaaton ki aandhi jab gum k tufanon ko sath lati hai
Har raat ashkon se ye ek gazal nai likhwati hai

Umeedon ka rang nikharta hai fir dhundhla jata hai
Har raat indradhanush ko kaale rang me rang jati hai

Shor bht hota hai door kahin bahar kahin khidki k
Main sunna chahti hun to sirf sannate ki hi awaaz aati hai

Mere chaar su.n hai mehfilein jashn aur kaamyaabi
Lekin mujhe apni tasveer aaine me tanha hi nazar aati hai

Lehrein uthti hain mere dil me jo aakar dimag se takrati hai
Main tut kar bikhar jati hun jab ye yaadein mujhe aazmaati hain

Kaalima iss andhere ki na jane mujhse kya kehna chahti hai
Raat bhar mere hothon pe ye ek nayee dard me dubi gazal sajati hai...!!!

Good one ANU


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