geele panne pe likhi thi

by aru12 on February 14, 2013, 03:16:02 PM
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Geele panne pe likhh thi ibarat apni,
Uske mitne se pehle koi mita na saka,

Likha tha chattan pe naam apna,
Uske tootne se pehle koi hata na saka,

Chamkta tha sooraj kee tarah pyaar apna,
Uske doobne se pehle koi duba na saka,

jungle mein aag kee tarah thi tadap apni,
Uske jalne se pehle koi bujha na saka,

Seep mein moti jaise jasbaat apne,
Uske panapne se pehle koi bata na saka,

Bizli see giri pyaar pe apne,
Uske chamakne  se pehle koi bacha na saka.
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2013, 03:53:21 PM »
Quote from: aru12 on February 14, 2013, 03:16:02 PM
Geele panne pe likhh thi ibarat apni,
Uske mitne se pehle koi mita na saka,

Likha tha chattan pe naam apna,
Uske tootne se pehle koi hata na saka,

Chamkta tha sooraj kee tarah pyaar apna,
Uske doobne se pehle koi duba na saka,

jungle mein aag kee tarah thi tadap apni,
Uske jalne se pehle koi bujha na saka,

Seep mein moti jaise jasbaat apne,
Uske panapne se pehle koi bata na saka,

Bizli see giri pyaar pe apne,
Uske chamakne  se pehle koi bacha na saka.

bahut khoob aru jee
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2013, 04:12:48 PM »

Beautiful Lines.
 Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2013, 05:22:09 PM »
Quote from: aru12 on February 14, 2013, 03:16:02 PM
Geele panne pe likhh thi ibarat apni,
Uske mitne se pehle koi mita na saka,

Likha tha chattan pe naam apna,
Uske tootne se pehle koi hata na saka,

Chamkta tha sooraj kee tarah pyaar apna,
Uske doobne se pehle koi duba na saka,

jungle mein aag kee tarah thi tadap apni,
Uske jalne se pehle koi bujha na saka,

Seep mein moti jaise jasbaat apne,
Uske panapne se pehle koi bata na saka,

Bizli see giri pyaar pe apne,
Uske chamakne  se pehle koi bacha na saka.

bahut khoob.....!
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2013, 05:56:56 PM »
wha wha ji wha
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aqsh
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2013, 03:30:17 AM »
kya baat hai. bahut bahut khoob. dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2013, 03:48:02 AM »
bohut khub likha hai aapne aru ji waah
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2013, 06:51:31 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2013, 12:40:05 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on February 14, 2013, 03:53:21 PM
bahut khoob aru jee
Thanx suman jee....
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2013, 02:35:10 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2013, 03:22:19 AM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on February 14, 2013, 04:12:48 PM

Beautiful Lines.
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Thanx advo. Ra jee..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2013, 07:22:37 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar Aru ji.....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2013, 07:38:40 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on February 14, 2013, 05:22:09 PM
bahut khoob.....!
Thanx sheba jee......
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2013, 04:09:39 PM »
Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 14, 2013, 05:56:56 PM
wha wha ji wha
Thanx rajan jee.....
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«Reply #14 on: February 19, 2013, 04:59:01 PM »
thanx aqsh jee...
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