Geet: aey Khudaa !! tuu itnaa bataaa....!

by DhavalRami on September 03, 2009, 05:41:05 AM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

NamaskaaR aur Aadaab!

ik roz dil aur ehsaas donoN ne saath diyaa to kuch lafz zeh'n meiN aayeN aur uN lafzoN ko maiN gungunaa rahaa thaa tou usse maine ik chhoTe se Geet meiN Dhaal diyaa! aor aik Geet liKhane kii adnaa sii koShiSh kar dii,, ummid kartaa huuN ab tak jo aapka saath milaa hai wo aaj bhee mileNgaa...aur aapko merii yeh koShiSh pasaNd aayeNgii.. aapke jawaab aur sujhaavo kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa!

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" ziNdagee merii jo maiNe liKhi thee naam usske .. waQt aur kismat donoN kaa saath Shaayad use na milaa..! ziNdagee ko muHaabat kaa kuch alag hi silaa milaa,, haaN muhhabat kaa kuch alag hi silaa milaa... !"


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aey Khudaa !! tuu itnaa bataa
kyuuN mujhe yuuN taNhaa kiyaa-[2]

kyaa thi Khataa,mili jo sazaa
ke kismat Khafaa ho ga'ii
wo hi to Shab thi meri subHaa
kyuuN mujhse judaa ho ga'ii

aaj huN maiN biKhraa huaa
kyaa karuuN ab tu hi bataa

aey khudaa! tuu itnaa bataa
kyuuN mujhe yuuN taNhaa kiyaa-[2]

o hoho ho ho ho ! o hoho ho ho!

taNhaa’ii ke pal kaTte nahiiN
muHabbat sazaa ho ga’ii
baahoN meiN uski kal tak jo thi
ziNdagee kyaa se kyaa ho ga’ii

jaau.n to mai.n jaau.n kahaa.n
bin uske naa jeenaa yahaa.n

aey khudaa! tuu itnaa bataa
kyuuN mujhe yuuN taNhaa kiyaa-[2]

kyuuN mujhe YuuN taNhaa kiyaa...

o hoho ho ho ho ! o hoho ho ho!


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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2009, 03:31:31 PM »
Applause Applause Applause
Dhaval ji bahut pyara geet likha hai aapne. Wah wah...Daad kabul kijiyega zarur  icon_thumleft
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2009, 05:47:57 AM »
Waah waah Kya baat hai Dhval ji.. Bahoot Bahoot khubsoorat geet hai yea... acha laga pad kar... bahoot hi sunder alfaso se aapne is Bazm ko sajaya hai.. lovely !
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2009, 12:14:10 PM »

Dhavalji...bahut he dil ko chhoo lene wala dardila geet hai aapka..... Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: Dhaval on September 03, 2009, 05:41:05 AM
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

NamaskaaR aur Aadaab!

ik roz dil aur ehsaas donoN ne saath diyaa to kuch lafz zeh'n meiN aayeN aur uN lafzoN ko maiN gungunaa rahaa thaa tou usse maine ik chhoTe se Geet meiN Dhaal diyaa! aor aik Geet liKhane kii adnaa sii koShiSh kar dii,, ummid kartaa huuN ab tak jo aapka saath milaa hai wo aaj bhee mileNgaa...aur aapko merii yeh koShiSh pasaNd aayeNgii.. aapke jawaab aur sujhaavo kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa!

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" ziNdagee merii jo maiNe liKhi thee naam usske .. waQt aur kismat donoN kaa saath Shaayad use na milaa..! ziNdagee ko muHaabat kaa kuch alag hi silaa milaa,, haaN muhhabat kaa kuch alag hi silaa milaa... !"


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aey Khudaa !! tuu itnaa bataa
kyuuN mujhe yuuN taNhaa kiyaa-[2]

kyaa thi Khataa,mili jo sazaa
ke kismat Khafaa ho ga'ii
wo hi to Shab thi meri subHaa
kyuuN mujhse judaa ho ga'ii

aaj huN maiN biKhraa huaa
kyaa karuuN ab tu hi bataa

aey khudaa! tuu itnaa bataa
kyuuN mujhe yuuN taNhaa kiyaa-[2]

o hoho ho ho ho ! o hoho ho ho!

taNhaa’ii ke pal kaTte nahiiN
muHabbat sazaa ho ga’ii
baahoN meiN uski kal tak jo thi
ziNdagee kyaa se kyaa ho ga’ii

jaau.n to mai.n jaau.n kahaa.n
bin uske naa jeenaa yahaa.n

aey khudaa! tuu itnaa bataa
kyuuN mujhe yuuN taNhaa kiyaa-[2]

kyuuN mujhe YuuN taNhaa kiyaa...

o hoho ho ho ho ! o hoho ho ho!


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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2009, 12:30:51 PM »
very very very very nice dhaval ji.. marvelous ... great..

jasbir singh
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2009, 12:37:21 PM »
Wah wah Dhaval ji bahut khoob,beautiful song ,mindblowing creation,excellent,
 Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
  Take care.God bless you dear. Usual Smile
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2009, 04:27:11 PM »
Dhaval Bhaiiiiiiiiii.. Kya Kahun Dost..? Aapke Likhe Qalaam Ke Ki Taareef ke liye to Mujhe Lafz Nahi milte yaar.. Aapka Likhe Alfaaz Itne Unche Hote hain Ki Taareef Ke Lafz Unke saamne Bahut chote Nazar aate Hain... Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash hai dost.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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DhavalRami
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2009, 02:09:53 PM »
Quote from: Roja on September 04, 2009, 03:31:31 PM
Applause Applause Applause
Dhaval ji bahut pyara geet likha hai aapne. Wah wah...Daad kabul kijiyega zarur  icon_thumleft

Rojaa jee:

namaste!

merii ee ChhoTii sii koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h!

yuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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