Geet sare ab juban se dur hain.........mann

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Geet sare ab juban se dur hain.
Ho gaye kuch is tarah majbur hain.

Ek khushi bhi hath main aayi nahin,
Gham magar hamko mile bharpur hain.

Dur se dikhte nahin to kya hua,
Teeste pal pal bahut nasur hain.

Jhuth sach ab kuch nazar aata nahin,
Behaya aise nashe main chur hain.

Har kisi ko dard wo hain bantte,
Shahar main wo islie mashhur hain.

Chain ke pal ek pal main furr huye,
Sab sukun “mann” ho gaye kafur hain.

Mann  
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2012, 12:21:07 PM »
Maan ji bahut khoob ........
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 12:23:42 PM »
very nice ji...
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 01:25:28 PM »
kya baat hai mann jee
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 01:39:36 PM »
Wah wah wah Mann jee
kamaal ka likha hai aapne..
sabhee khayaal badee khoobsurti se piroye hai aapne.
umda adaaigee ka namoona jhalak raha hai.
bahut bahut pyaari ghazal hai.
sabhee ashaar ek se badhkar ek..
jabardast connectivity..
Bahut bahut daad aur mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 01:49:14 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2012, 07:27:17 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on December 13, 2012, 11:57:11 AM
Geet sare ab juban se dur hain.
Ho gaye kuch is tarah majbur hain.

Ek khushi bhi hath main aayi nahin,
Gham magar hamko mile bharpur hain.

Dur se dikhte nahin to kya hua,
Teeste pal pal bahut nasur hain.

Jhuth sach ab kuch nazar aata nahin,
Behaya aise nashe main chur hain.

Har kisi ko dard wo hain bantte,
Shahar main wo islie mashhur hain.

Chain ke pal ek pal main furr huye,
Sab sukun “mann” ho gaye kafur hain.

Mann  


bahut khoob......!
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2012, 07:43:43 PM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH bahut khoob... Dard e zindagi bayaaN ho toH
aise ho.. behad khoob khayaalON ko khoobsurat lafzoN meiN
dhaala hai janab... Usual Smile

Bade hi achche ashaar rahe... sabhi ashaar qabil e daad
haiN... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rhaiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2012, 12:54:06 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2012, 03:21:20 AM »
shukriya gayatriji
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2012, 04:27:03 AM »
wah
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 10:12:37 AM »
shukriya riteshji
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2012, 10:27:15 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on December 13, 2012, 11:57:11 AM
Geet sare ab juban se dur hain.
Ho gaye kuch is tarah majbur hain.

Ek khushi bhi hath main aayi nahin,
Gham magar hamko mile bharpur hain.

Dur se dikhte nahin to kya hua,
Teeste pal pal bahut nasur hain.

Jhuth sach ab kuch nazar aata nahin,
Behaya aise nashe main chur hain.

Har kisi ko dard wo hain bantte,
Shahar main wo islie mashhur hain.

Chain ke pal ek pal main furr huye,
Sab sukun “mann” ho gaye kafur hain.

Mann 


achi behr nibhayee hai ..
doosre sher main ek ko ik kar lena .. typo hai shayed ..

keep up
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2012, 06:22:50 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: December 15, 2012, 05:43:51 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya mukeshji
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