gham mera bikta hua

by soudagar on May 11, 2012, 02:47:09 AM
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Qatl ke lagtaa hai mere - is qadar charche huye
ke tamaashayi pashemaN - saNg qaatil ke huye

bewfayi jaante the - is shahar ka hai chalan
har daghaa pe phir kaho tum - kyuN khafaa itne huye

daad khamoshi ki milti - kholne par lab sazaa
baat meri kyuN n dabti - hooNth tak aate huye

peeth bhi tai’yaar hai ab – nok e khanjar ke liye
baat koi yuN n karta - hai yahaaN haNste huye

kharch jeene ke jatan meiN – zindgi saree huyi
haNse ik muddat huyi hai - roye  bhii arse huye

gham mera biktaa huyaa maiN - paa rahaa bazar meiN
dekhtaa dukaan meiN gham - khwaar ko baithe huye

talkhee e duniya ka chaaraa - talkhee e baadaa rahi
ye bhi chhut jaayegee humse - usse chhut jaate huye

kucchh to qurbat hai ki tumko - shikwa e furqat bhii hai
warnaa karne to gilaa kya - aib kam mere huye

daam ik qatraa khushee bhii - khoob bikne ko mujhe
 Sharm bas aati hai "K" - mujhko ye kehte huye




pashemaaN - repentant
talkhee - bitterness
chaaraa - cure / remedy
baadaa - liquor
qurbat - nearness / affection
furqat - separation / distance
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2012, 03:08:39 AM »
bohut khub saudagar bhai
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2012, 03:44:32 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2012, 04:12:43 AM »
muaaf kariye janaab...........lekin ye ghazal kya aapki khud ki likhi hai?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh??
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2012, 05:43:49 AM »
waah janaaab waaah
behad umdaa ghazal
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daad daad daad

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
aate rahie
likhte rahie
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2012, 06:04:43 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2012, 10:52:26 AM »
waah vry nyc ....
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2012, 06:47:28 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on May 11, 2012, 02:47:09 AM
Qatl ke lagtaa hai mere - is qadar charche huye
ke tamaashayi pashemaN - saNg qaatil ke huye

bewfayi jaante the - is shahar ka hai chalan
har daghaa pe phir kaho tum - kyuN khafaa itne huye

daad khamoshi ki milti - kholne par lab sazaa
baat meri kyuN n dabti - hooNth tak aate huye

peeth bhi tai’yaar hai ab – nok e khanjar ke liye
baat koi yuN n karta - hai yahaaN haNste huye

kharch jeene ke jatan meiN – zindgi saree huyi
haNse ik muddat huyi hai - roye  bhii arse huye

gham mera biktaa huyaa maiN - paa rahaa bazar meiN
dekhtaa dukaan meiN gham - khwaar ko baithe huye

talkhee e duniya ka chaaraa - talkhee e baadaa rahi
ye bhi chhut jaayegee humse - usse chhut jaate huye

kucchh to qurbat hai ki tumko - shikwa e furqat bhii hai
warnaa karne to gilaa kya - aib kam mere huye

daam ik qatraa khushee bhii - khoob bikne ko mujhe
 Sharm bas aati hai "K" - mujhko ye kehte huye




pashemaaN - repentant
talkhee - bitterness
chaaraa - cure / remedy
baadaa - liquor
qurbat - nearness / affection
furqat - separation / distance



Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!

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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2012, 09:07:34 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2012, 02:18:11 AM »
shukriya mohm. rafi ji..
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2012, 09:43:26 AM »
Quote from: ufaq on May 11, 2012, 04:12:43 AM
muaaf kariye janaab...........lekin ye ghazal kya aapki khud ki likhi hai?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh??

ufaq ji .... apka andaza bilkul sahi hai. ye ghazal in sahab ne nahiin likhi hai .... kyunki ye ghazal meree likhi huwee hai. ap ise www. mein Dard-e-Dil section ke andar dekh sakte hain. wahaan par ghazal ka title maine matle ke misra e oolaa par diya hai "qatl ka lagta hai mere is qadar charche huwe"

ek aur baat ... yahaan par in sahab ne makte se mera takhallus (zarraa) delete kar ke "K" laga diya hai.asal mein makte ka misra e saanee tha "sharm bas aatee hai zarraa - mujh ko ye kehte huwe". hansee ki baat ye hai ki jab "zarraa" hataa kar "K" lagaya gaya to misra sarasar beher (meter) se baahar chalaa gaya hai.

beherhaal, bas yahee kehne ke liye haazir huwa tha ki aapkaa andesha sahi hai aur ye ghazal meree llikhi huwee hai.

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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2012, 09:55:40 AM »
the site I have originally posted this ghazal in is shayari . in (did not come out clearly in the previous message)
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2012, 01:56:44 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on May 11, 2012, 02:47:09 AM
Qatl ke lagtaa hai mere - is qadar charche huye
ke tamaashayi pashemaN - saNg qaatil ke huye

bewfayi jaante the - is shahar ka hai chalan
har daghaa pe phir kaho tum - kyuN khafaa itne huye

daad khamoshi ki milti - kholne par lab sazaa
baat meri kyuN n dabti - hooNth tak aate huye

peeth bhi tai’yaar hai ab – nok e khanjar ke liye
baat koi yuN n karta - hai yahaaN haNste huye

kharch jeene ke jatan meiN – zindgi saree huyi
haNse ik muddat huyi hai - roye  bhii arse huye

gham mera biktaa huyaa maiN - paa rahaa bazar meiN
dekhtaa dukaan meiN gham - khwaar ko baithe huye

talkhee e duniya ka chaaraa - talkhee e baadaa rahi
ye bhi chhut jaayegee humse - usse chhut jaate huye

kucchh to qurbat hai ki tumko - shikwa e furqat bhii hai
warnaa karne to gilaa kya - aib kam mere huye

daam ik qatraa khushee bhii - khoob bikne ko mujhe
 Sharm bas aati hai "ZAARA" - mujhko ye kehte huye




pashemaaN - repentant
talkhee - bitterness
chaaraa - cure / remedy
baadaa - liquor
qurbat - nearness / affection
furqat - separation / distance
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