**Ghamon Ke Dastan**

by honeyrose on November 10, 2008, 02:34:06 PM
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Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke hansna bhool gaye
Ghamon ke dastan na bhula paaye kuch aise dard mile   

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke jeena bhool gaye
Pehle rulate kyun ho phir hansate kis liye

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke hansna bhool gaye
Dard badh gaye sailaab banker dil mein uttar gaye

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke zindagi se ruksat hogaye
Kuchh haseen palon ko aaj bhi humare dil mein dabaye rakhe 
 tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2008, 02:49:52 PM »
Waah Didi jaan,.
Bahoot Badhiya,.
Yunhi Likhte Rehna,.
Inshallah Hum Bhi Jawab Dene Ki Koshish karenge,.
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«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2008, 04:16:25 AM »
Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne ne Honey Ji
Aise hi likhte rahna hame bhi prerna milta hai
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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2008, 08:50:25 AM »
Mere Ghamon Ki Dastaan Kisi Jaakar Sunaaoon Main,.
SabKe Haath Mein Patthar Hain, Kisi Zakham Dikhaaoon Main,.

Koi Nahi Hai Mera, Jo Mujhe Hausla De Jeena Ka,.
Ab Aise Shehar Mein Bolo,Toota Dil Lekar Kahaan Jaaoon Main,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2008, 11:52:31 AM »
Shukriya Bhai...

Shukriya Rajesh ji

Bohat khoob likha hai Bhai...
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«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2008, 11:53:26 AM »
Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke hansna bhool gaye
Ghamon ke dastan na bhula paaye kuch aise dard mile   

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke jeena bhool gaye
Pehle rulate kyun ho phir hansate kis liye

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke hansna bhool gaye
Dard badh gaye sailaab banker dil mein uttar gaye

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke zindagi se ruksat hogaye
Kuchh haseen palon ko aaj bhi humare dil mein dabaye rakhe 
 tearyeyed
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really it very nice
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«Reply #6 on: November 11, 2008, 11:55:11 AM »
Thank you saloni......
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«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2008, 12:15:50 PM »
Achha likha hai Honey Ji.. Usual Smile
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: November 11, 2008, 01:10:42 PM »
Achha likha hai Honey Ji.. Usual Smile

Thank you Mahiya....
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«Reply #9 on: November 11, 2008, 06:08:57 PM »
Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke hansna bhool gaye
Ghamon ke dastan na bhula paaye kuch aise dard mile   

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke jeena bhool gaye
Pehle rulate kyun ho phir hansate kis liye

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke hansna bhool gaye
Dard badh gaye sailaab banker dil mein uttar gaye

Kaise muhabbat dikhaye tumne ke zindagi se ruksat hogaye
Kuchh haseen palon ko aaj bhi humare dil mein dabaye rakhe 
 tearyeyed
____________honeyrose___________


...good one Honey...it was nice reading it...








 
 
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honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: November 12, 2008, 12:43:58 PM »
Thank you just,,,
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: November 12, 2008, 01:28:25 PM »
...you are welcome...

Shayad kahi to meri mohabbat bhi zinda hogi kisike dil mein,
Shayad kahi to meri izzat bhi nilaam ho rahi hogi mehfil mein...
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«Reply #12 on: November 12, 2008, 01:33:04 PM »
...you are welcome...

Shayad kahi to meri mohabbat bhi zinda hogi kisike dil mein,
Shayad kahi to meri izzat bhi nilaam ho rahi hogi mehfil mein...


Very nice Just.....

Yaqeen se kahete hai uske dil mein muhabbat na tha
Dard ke aage uski zindagi mein khushyon ka daman na tha..
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«Reply #13 on: November 12, 2008, 01:42:15 PM »
Daman ko to luta diya humne uska sar ucha rakhne ke liye,
Bas thode aansu bacha ke rakhe hai gum mein chakhne ke liye...
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«Reply #14 on: November 12, 2008, 01:45:58 PM »
...you are welcome...

Shayad kahi to meri mohabbat bhi zinda hogi kisike dil mein,
Shayad kahi to meri izzat bhi nilaam ho rahi hogi mehfil mein...

nice line Hate jii

Ghamon ka dastan na poocho toh accha hai
Kabhi din dhala toh khaber na huyi
Kab raat huyi ye bi khaber na huyi
Koyi ye bata de zara mujhko
Mohabbat kya meri bi be-asar huyi
 
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