Ghar garibon ka fir se jalaaya gaya...... mann

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Unke shahar ko raushan banaya gaya.
Ghar garibon ka fir se jalaaya gaya.

Har taraf fir se chhayin hain surkhiyan,
Khoon fir se kahin par bahaaya gaya.

Ham nibhate rahe har wafa ki kasam,
Fir bhi beiman hamko bataaya gaya.

Badguman hain sabhi jante the magar,
Sach hai kya na hamse chhupaya gaya.

Hamko ahsas tha chhod jayenge wo,
Unko hamraah fir bhi banaaya gaya.

Log the bewafa dost the bewafa,
Jo the kamzor unko sataaya gaya.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2012, 09:09:43 AM »
mashaa allah lajwaab aur behatreen pesh kash is par hazaron daad bheee kam rau pahle hee de chuke kash aur dene kee chhoot hotee
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2012, 09:13:15 AM »
janab sainiji.... bahut bahut shukriya....


aapki daad mil gayi yahi kafi hai.... bas sath dete rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2012, 09:15:19 AM »
Waaaaaaah Mann jee
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2012, 09:20:36 AM »
baht achi theame aur rythem me aapki kalaam bahot khoob hai.
umda kalaam Mann ji
daad daad daad

han agr aap personol dard iss kalaam se duur rakhti to aur bhi behtareen hota ye kalaam.
khair ye mera manna h bas.

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2012, 10:36:13 AM »
awesome.........maja aa gaye
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2012, 11:00:38 AM »
dhanyawad anahitaji.....
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2012, 11:02:52 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad sarfiraji....

sarfiraji har dard apna dard hai.... maine har dard ko mahsus kiya hai.....
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2012, 05:05:38 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khooob Mann ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2012, 05:52:55 PM »
laajawab dost bahut achha kalaam pesh karne par dili mubaraqbaad aur rau sweakarya ho.
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2012, 02:49:40 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad pawanji..
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2012, 03:07:06 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2012, 03:21:15 AM »
bahut shukriya soudagarji...
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2012, 07:23:24 AM »
Bahut khoob Mann jee
shaandaar peshkash Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2012, 11:53:37 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya ahujaji
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