~ Ghar yaad ata hai mujhe ~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 09, 2013, 03:15:35 AM
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Satyamev Jayate main ek geet suna tha kabhi titled 'ghar yaad ata hai mujhe'..Meri iss kalam ka title bhi yehi hai..

Padhai kay liye ghar se dhoor aya hoon aur ek ajeeb sa, tanha sa ehsaas hai kay maa-baap dhoor hai..dost toh yahan bhi banenge aur wahan bhi thhe mager maa-baap ki koi replacement nahin hoti..

Khwaish dost ki kalam parri aur usme ek baat bahaut dil ko choo gayi kay maa baap apni zindagi ki jama punji hume de dete hai bina yeh soche kay aulad kya karegi kal..Salaam karta hoon main Khwaish dost ki kalam ko aur especially akhri do lines ko..

Mama..Papa..I love you a lot..aur meri yeh kalam ap dono kay naam hai!!

"Kash yeh dua mere Khuda ko sunaai de,
Kay maa-baap ko aulad se na kabhi judaai de,
Doulat aur shohrat mohobat se badkar nahin hote,
Ae Rabb mujhko bas meri maa ki godd ki thandi raazai de"

Maa kay haath ka khana bahaut yaad ata hai mujhe,
Dil sisk sisk kay kehta hai ‘ghar yaad ata hai mujhe’..

Dinn toh guzar leta hoon kaam karte mager sham,
Akele uss kamre ka san’nata bahaut rulata hai mujhe..

Har kisi ko ajnabion se baat karte, naye dost banate dekhta hoon,
Meri zaat main yeh kami ka hona bahaut khal jata hai mujhe..

Ae Rabb, ae Khuda na tujse kal gila tha na aj shikwa hai koi,
Tu hi toh hai jo mushkilon main agey badata hai mujhe..

Ager maa-baap saath hai toh hasso, izzat karo aur khush raho,
Badtameezi ka har woh lamha yaad aa kar bahaut satata hai mujhe..

O nadaan parinde ghaar aaja, gun-gunata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager baap kay paise jiss sapne pe lage hai woh pura karke lautna hai,
Har pal bas yehi ek baat dil yaad dilata hai mujhe..

Dhooriyon par ehsaas hota hai kay maa-baap ki shaksiyat kya hai, ehmiat kiya hai,
Isiliye kehta hoon pas hai woh toh izzat karo, pyaar karo, khush raho,
‘Khamosh’ kay ashkon se nikli hai yeh kalam kay ghaar bahaut yaad ata hai mujhe,
Ghar bahaut yaad ata hai mujhe…

~ Rahim ~ A Silent Heart ~
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2013, 03:50:06 AM »
NICE Sharing..!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2013, 08:54:01 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2013, 11:24:56 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2013, 11:30:15 AM »
RAHIM BHAI BAHUT HEE KHUBSURAT RUMANI QALAAM HAI AAPKA SIDHA DIL MEIN UTAR GAYE LAFZ.... IS QALAAM KE LIYE HARDHIK SHUBHKAMNAYEIN SATH HEE YAHI DUA KI JALD HEE AAP APNI PADHAI PURI KAR APNO SE MILEIN


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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2013, 11:40:10 AM »
beautifull very nice lines dear
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2013, 11:40:53 AM »
So moving !...aapke kalaam ne to rula diya...izhaar-e-ehsaas  zabardast hai...khuda kare har bachche ko maa-baap ki ahmiyat ka ehsaas ho aur voh unke liye apne faraaez bakhubi anjaam de sake (aameen)...  bahut bahut mubaarak aur dheron daad-o-duaaen!
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2013, 02:30:12 PM »
Rahim ji aapki ghazal bahut bahut bahut hi achchi hai...aur dil ko choo gayi... aankhein nam ho gayi.. bas pahele misre ke liye kahna chahoongi ke.... Allah ki zaat ko aap dil mein bhi yaad kar lo toh woh sunta hai....uski hiqmat wohi behtar jaanta hai...likhte rahiye... dheron daad...
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2013, 03:39:48 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2013, 09:06:23 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 09, 2013, 03:50:06 AM
NICE Sharing..!!
Sharing nahin dost, khud ki kalam hai..
Khush rahiye.!

Quote from: sksaini4 on October 09, 2013, 08:22:55 AM
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Bahaut shukriya Saini jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: nandbahu on October 09, 2013, 08:54:01 AM
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Bahaut shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 09, 2013, 11:24:56 AM
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Kapil dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: soudagar on October 09, 2013, 11:30:15 AM
RAHIM BHAI BAHUT HEE KHUBSURAT RUMANI QALAAM HAI AAPKA SIDHA DIL MEIN UTAR GAYE LAFZ.... IS QALAAM KE LIYE HARDHIK SHUBHKAMNAYEIN SATH HEE YAHI DUA KI JALD HEE AAP APNI PADHAI PURI KAR APNO SE MILEIN


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Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Ameen..
Kuch sapne pure karne aya hoon bas..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: saahill on October 09, 2013, 11:40:10 AM
beautifull very nice lines dear
Bahaut shukriya Saahill jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: shara63 on October 09, 2013, 11:40:53 AM
So moving !...aapke kalaam ne to rula diya...izhaar-e-ehsaas  zabardast hai...khuda kare har bachche ko maa-baap ki ahmiyat ka ehsaas ho aur voh unke liye apne faraaez bakhubi anjaam de sake (aameen)...  bahut bahut mubaarak aur dheron daad-o-duaaen!
Kisi ki kalam par ager ashk nikal aye, toh shayar kay liye bahaut badi baat hoti hai..
Apka tahe dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: aqsh on October 09, 2013, 02:30:12 PM
Rahim ji aapki ghazal bahut bahut bahut hi achchi hai...aur dil ko choo gayi... aankhein nam ho gayi.. bas pahele misre ke liye kahna chahoongi ke.... Allah ki zaat ko aap dil mein bhi yaad kar lo toh woh sunta hai....uski hiqmat wohi behtar jaanta hai...likhte rahiye... dheron daad...
Yehi kahunga kay kalam par ashkon ka ana bahaut badi hoti hai shayar kay liye..
Tahe dil se shukriya..
Allah wakei sab janta hai..koi shaq nahin..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: Iqtedar on October 09, 2013, 03:39:48 PM
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2013, 09:12:51 PM »
waaahhhhhhh

yaqeen maaniye rulaa diyaa aapki kavita ne rahim.. sach ye dukh to jhelna hi padtaa hai, khaaskar ke ladkiyon ko, hum kaafi acche se samajh sakte hain aapke dard ko.. Aur Allah se yahi duaa rahegii ke aapke dard ko sukoon pahoche..

God bless you.

Sidra
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2013, 03:23:55 AM »
Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 09:12:51 PM
waaahhhhhhh

yaqeen maaniye rulaa diyaa aapki kavita ne rahim.. sach ye dukh to jhelna hi padtaa hai, khaaskar ke ladkiyon ko, hum kaafi acche se samajh sakte hain aapke dard ko.. Aur Allah se yahi duaa rahegii ke aapke dard ko sukoon pahoche..

God bless you.

Sidra
Sidra jee,
Apka tahe tahe dil se shukriya..
Meri kalam ko iss kadar samja kay ashq agaye, toh wakei dil ki baat ponchi ap tak..
Khush rahiye..!
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