Ghav bas hare rahein

by saaz_haldwanvi on April 29, 2009, 01:09:17 PM
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Sookhi mitti ke gharonde
meri jid ki tarah rahein
main reth samet-ta raha
aur wo girte rahein,
                    
                   Waqt ke paron se
                   udkar koi jata hai
                   har kisi se milta hai
                   lekin khud akele rahein,

Yaadon ki barish se
aakhon ke pani tak
aisa bhi koi din ho
jab hum sookhe rahein,

                   Maine kab chaha ki waqt
                   ghavo ka marham bane
                   maine to chaha hai-
                   ghav bas hare rahein,

Aur kya pata ?
ek isi tarkib se
kuchch waqt aur sahi
hum-tum jude rahein...." saaz haldwani"


[quoted from my own 'marashim']

 
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2009, 01:46:57 PM »
Jab hum sookhe rahe.......Subhan_allah Saaz... bohat khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2009, 07:49:07 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2009, 08:23:09 PM »
Bohat Achche Saaz Ji,.
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2009, 10:19:32 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Saaz ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2009, 02:51:16 AM »
very nice Saaz ji.bahut pasand aaya.
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 02:54:39 AM »
Sookhi mitti ke gharonde
meri jid ki tarah rahein
main reth samet-ta raha
aur wo girte rahein,
                   
                   Waqt ke paron se
                   udkar koi jata hai
                   har kisi se milta hai
                   lekin khud akele rahein,

Yaadon ki barish se
aakhon ke pani tak
aisa bhi koi din ho
jab hum sookhe rahein,

                   Maine kab chaha ki waqt
                   ghavo ka marham bane
                   maine to chaha hai-
                   ghav bas hare rahein,

Aur kya pata ?
ek isi tarkib se
kuchch waqt aur sahi
hum-tum jude rahein...." saaz haldwani"


[quoted from my own 'marashim']

 

Bahut khoob Saaz ji..
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2009, 05:30:05 AM »
Sookhi mitti ke gharonde
meri jid ki tarah rahein
main reth samet-ta raha
aur wo girte rahein,
                   
                   Waqt ke paron se
                   udkar koi jata hai
                   har kisi se milta hai
                   lekin khud akele rahein,

Yaadon ki barish se
aakhon ke pani tak
aisa bhi koi din ho
jab hum sookhe rahein,

                   Maine kab chaha ki waqt
                   ghavo ka marham bane
                   maine to chaha hai-
                   ghav bas hare rahein,

Aur kya pata ?
ek isi tarkib se
kuchch waqt aur sahi
hum-tum jude rahein...." saaz haldwani"


[quoted from my own 'marashim']

 








VERIII NAAICE.............S H SB
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2009, 08:12:44 AM »
Bahut khoob saaz ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2009, 01:39:06 PM »
Beautifully written Saaz Ji...
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2009, 07:21:15 AM »
 is hosla afzai ke liye aap sabhi logo ka ahsaan mand hu_N
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2009, 07:55:02 PM »
Bohot Khoob Saaz Ji
thanx celmira ji
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