Ghav*****

by baadal102 on November 18, 2008, 06:29:21 AM
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Kar ke yakee us bewafa ka hum,
Ghav khud ke sine mai banate rahe,

Hum rote rahe us ke intzaar mai,
Aur wo gairo ki banho mai sote rahe,

Aur wo gairo ki banho mai sote rahe.........




Baadal tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2008, 06:46:12 AM »
nice lines baadal ji
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2008, 01:04:15 PM »
Bahot Achche Baadal Ji,.
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2008, 02:49:34 PM »
Nice one Baadal
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2008, 04:06:31 PM »
Nice work baadal
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2008, 07:40:00 AM »
thanx a lot
Bhawna ji
jaan ji
celmira ji
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ghayal ji





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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2008, 08:56:56 AM »
Good Work Baadal Ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2008, 12:35:48 PM »
thanx mahiya ji




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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2008, 06:52:05 PM »
mar kar khud ka dil hum dusron ke dil jodte rahe,
pee kar khud ka khoon hum dusron ko sharab pilate rahe,
rehte andheron ki duniya main aur hassi rakhi thi chehre pe,
chod kar apna sacha pyar hum uss bewaffa par marte rahe...
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«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2008, 06:58:58 PM »
do line main he bahoot gahra dard bayan kar gaye app baadal ji!!

nice lines DH !!


tanhaai main ghav dil ke jala kare
peer itani hai ki, samjh na ayye hum kaya kiya kare
kabhi hans diye rone ki baat per
to kabhi rone per hum hans diya kare
log kahe Pooja hui deewani
hum soche, pyar ka kaya yahi anjaam, dunia diya kare
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2008, 05:53:00 AM »
mar kar khud ka dil hum dusron ke dil jodte rahe,
pee kar khud ka khoon hum dusron ko sharab pilate rahe,
rehte andheron ki duniya main aur hassi rakhi thi chehre pe,
chod kar apna sacha pyar hum uss bewaffa par marte rahe...


 Applause Applause
bahut khoob heart ji


Baadal
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«Reply #11 on: November 20, 2008, 05:59:46 AM »
tanhaai main ghav dil ke jala kare
peer itani hai ki, samjh na ayye hum kaya kiya kare
kabhi hans diye rone ki baat per
to kabhi rone per hum hans diya kare
log kahe Pooja hui deewani
hum soche, pyar ka kaya yahi anjaam, dunia diya kare


bahut hi khoob likha hai aap ne pooja ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thora likhne ki koshish ki hai pooja ji
galti ho to maaf kar dijiyega


Anjaam-e-mahobat dunia ka hum ne dekha hai,
sab jhoot hai koi sacha nahi dekha hai,

Jo sach tha wo itihaas ban chuke hai,
Aaj laila ko gairo ka humsafar bante dekha hai......






Baadal
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«Reply #12 on: November 20, 2008, 06:01:50 AM »
NICE ONE BAADAL JI,
KEEP GOING,
BY. K.SHAEL

MOHABBAT KA KYA HASEEN HAMNE TOHFA PAAYA HAI,
HAR GHAAV DIYA HUA DILBAR KAA SINNE ME SAJAYA
HAI,JISM KE JHAKHAM TO SOOKH JAATE HAI EK DIN
ISI LIYE HAR JHAKAM HAMNE DIL PE KHAAYA HAI...
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: November 20, 2008, 06:06:49 AM »
bahoot khoob baadal ji...
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«Reply #14 on: November 20, 2008, 06:10:41 AM »
gud one badal ji......
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