Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann:Shayri-E-Dard

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Ghayal ki peeda kya jano....

Ghayal ki peeda kya jano,
Tum ghao lagana jante ho.
Tum marham rakhna kya jano,
Tum teer chalana jante ho.

Kisse ab kya ummid kate,
Sab ek hi jaise log yahan.
Tum khushi lutana kya jano,
Tum dil tadpana jante ho.

Chhup chhup kar rona acha hai,
Tum aansu par hans dete ho.
Tum aansu pochhna kya jano,
Tum gham hi dena jante ho.

Dil ki ham tumse baat kahen,
Itni hai tumhe fursat hi kahan.
Tum paas aaoge bhi kaise,
Tum Chhod ke jana jante ho.

mann


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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2011, 06:44:54 AM »

Quote from: mann.mann on November 09, 2011, 06:16:11 AM

Ghayal ki peeda kya jano....

Ghayal ki peeda kya jano,
Tum ghao lagana jante ho.
Tum marham rakhna kya jano,
Tum teer chalana jante ho. Applause

Kisse ab kya ummid kare,
Sab ek hi jaise log yahan.
Tum khushi lutana kya jano, Applause

Tum dil tadpana jante ho.

Chhup chhup kar rona acha hai, Applause

Tum aansu par hans dete ho. Applause

Tum aansu pochhna kya jano,
Tum gham hi dena jante ho. Applause

Dil ki ham tumse baat kahen, Applause

Itni hai tumhe fursat hi kahan. Applause

Tum paas aaoge bhi kaise,
Tum Chhod ke jana jante ho. Applause

mann

Bahut khoob Mann ji
Likhte rahiye, khush rahiye.


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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2011, 06:52:35 AM »

:clap:mann ji dil ko chhootee hui is rachnaa ke liye badhaai


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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2011, 10:54:08 AM »

acha laga ise ek sur me gunguna kar parhna--

wakai me khoob kalaam kahi aapne--
kisi par janaab kuch naraaz se lagte hain aap!!
anyways--
muskurate rahen
khus rahen
Daad kubul karen
Usual Smile

zakhmoN ko sahlana nhi acha
hum zakhm kurenda karte hain
jo ghav lage hain dil par
hum unko udheda karte hain
pehchaan humara na puchna tum
hum muskurate ashq dikhaya karte hain

!
chupp chupp ke rona gar acha
jeete ji kafan sajaya karte hain
!
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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2011, 03:10:20 AM »

sarahne k liye bahut dhanyawad mkvji


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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2011, 03:13:36 AM »

bahut dhanyawad sainiji


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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2011, 03:16:36 AM »

bahut dhanyawad sarfiraji aapne bahut hi sundar likha hai.

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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2011, 06:33:20 PM »

Mann Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. aapke khayaal kafi
tez aur taNziyaa rahe .. lafz bhi achche kahe hai aapne daad..

Waise kalaam kafi taNziyaa rahi janab.. par rawaani meiN kafi
khoob adaa huyi hai...

" bharat ka rahne wala huN "
Is geet ke meter meiN yeh kalaam kafi achchi lagi..
par aapki kalaam meiN aik takhta kam hai par isi adygi meiN
aa raha hai daad

To chaliye aapki kalaam par aate haiN..

Quote from: mann.mann on November 09, 2011, 06:16:11 AM

Ghayal ki peeda kya jano....

Ghayal ki peeda kya jano,
Tum ghao lagana jante ho.
Tum marham rakhna kya jano,
Tum teer chalana jante ho.

Achcha taNziyaa khayaal hai aur sidhe se kaha hai
aapne daad..

Kisse ab kya ummid kare,
Sab ek hi jaise log yahan.
Tum khushi lutana kya jano,
Tum dil tadpana jante ho.

Achcha kaha hai janab kafi tez raha aapka khayaal
par aapne to rukh sabhi ki aur kar diyaa ...
Ab kia kaheN hum..

Chhup chhup kar rona acha hai,
Tum aansu par hans dete ho.
Tum aansu pochhna kya jano,
Tum gham hi dena jante ho.

Kia baat hai bahut khoob..

Dil ki ham tumse baat kahen,
Itni hai tumhe fursat hi kahan.
Tum paas aaoge bhi kaise,
Tum Chhod ke jana jante ho.

Bahut khoob achcha hai daad..
HaaN highlighted word ki zarurat nahi hai wahaaN
so nikal dijiye.. rawaaN ho jayeNga misra..

mann

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Aur itne taNziyaa kalaam na kahiye ke jiske liye likha hai
hai janab padh kar aur bikhar jaye..

Khuda Hafez..


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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2011, 04:37:22 AM »

dhanyawad parwaazji....

aapke comnts bahut kuchh sikhate hain... islie hi aapke comnt ka intzar rahta hai. har chhoti badi kami aap batate hain jise sudhar kar rachna ko behtar banaya ja sakta hai.

apni har rachna par aapke comnts ke intzar main... ye mann hamesha rahega..


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Re: Ghayal ki peeda kya jano... mann

«Reply #9 on: November 12, 2011, 11:26:24 AM »

pasand karne ke lie bahut bahut dhanyawad shihabji...


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