ghayal kiya jab..:Shayri-E-Dard

isha_verma7

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Ghayal kiya jab apno na, toh gairon sa gilaa kya kare,
Uthaye hai khanjer jab apno na, toh zindagi ki tamaana kya kare
dil tha ek kaanch ka ghar, so aakhir woh bhi toot gaya,
kismat main likhey hai jab ghum, toh Raab sa gilaa kya karen
taraste rahi zindagi bhar jin sachay rishoty ke liya,
jab unhon ne hee thukra diya, toh gairon sa shikwa kya kare
jis ko samjha tha apna, jis ko banayaa tha apna raazdaan,
ussi na jab dil thoda diya, toh gairon ko apnaa kar kya karna
muskurana jo bhool gaye hont toh kya hua,
ghum ko banaa liya hai pana, toh muskura ka ab kya karna(nm)


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nikki

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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2006, 07:39:39 PM »

nice one Isha


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Aryaan

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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2006, 12:31:50 AM »

Bohat khoob Isha...


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Pooja

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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2006, 06:31:40 AM »

Good one Isha//

bahoot pahle mai jahan se lout aai hu,
ajj muje wahan bulaty kayun ho!!
chal nahi sakaty jab sang mere
mere pass chal kar atty kayun ho!!!!

Yaad bhi nahi rakhana chahati
aor bhool bhi nahi sakati mai!!
dard jo mit nahi sakata
uski yaad dilaty kayun ho!!!

Wafa ke do pal bhi, de nahi sakaty
Meri wafa ko itana Rulaty kayun ho
na hi sawal hai koi, na hi jawab manga hai
Ankho se ansuoo ki jhari, ajj bahaty kayun ho!!!


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myheart_ursonly

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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2006, 05:06:52 PM »

bahot khoob isha and pooja ji Usual Smile

keep writing, keep writing and keep writing glasses2


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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2006, 05:14:44 PM »

Nice choice Isha,very nice pooja ji.


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tushar_4u_im

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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2006, 12:49:34 PM »

ghayal hume dekh ker tum uf tak na ker sake.....
o pyar k sagar me kashti chalane wale kabhi to tujhe bhi dard ka humare aandaza hoga.....


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Pooja

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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2006, 06:49:03 PM »

Thanks Nidhi and Amit, per yah kaya app dono bina kuch likhy hi chale gai.....


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isha_verma7

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ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2006, 09:18:53 PM »

very nice pooja and nidhi........gr8.......keep it up gurlz

pooja, the line/para that touch my heart is "yaad bhi nahi.....dilayte kyon ho"

nidhi the best line is " koi mujhe sambhaale, ye ehsaas dilaaye, ki main abhi zinda hoon, maari nahi hoon"......yeh line dil ko chuu gayi


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: ghayal kiya jab..

«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2006, 06:43:05 PM »

Quote from: "isha_verma7"

bahot khoob Isha......... wonderfull........ Nice Pooja sis.........


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