Ghayel lajawab hoga......

by Nafseeyati_Mareez on April 20, 2010, 08:41:39 PM
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Matla bhi achcha hoga, na Makta kharaab hoga
Sher meri ghazal ka koi, jo tera jawab hoga

Upar padi dhool par, na aitbaar karna
Jo dil me agar jhako, pyaar behisaab hoga

Chehre ki khoobsurti, se behtar hain amal
Jo seerat haseen hogi, chehra aaftab hoga

Sath har subah ke, jo ban jaye haqeeqat
Muflis ka nahi yaro, vaziro ka khwaab hoga

Meri khubiyaa.N ho chahe, badnamiyaa.N ho meri
Chahe jaha se samjho, Ghayel lajawaab hoga

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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2010, 08:46:18 PM »
Wah..Bahaut khoob... Applause Applause
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neelgold
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2010, 11:10:50 PM »
Wah ji wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bhut hi khoob kaha
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2010, 10:50:11 AM »
Wah wah Ghayal Sb. bahot hi khoobsurat takhleeq hai aapki jo bahot achhi lagi. Bahot achhe aur waseetar khayalaat ka izhaar aapne kiya hai. Marhaba. Dua hai ho zore-qalam aur zyada.
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 12:20:00 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2010, 02:03:24 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah wah Ghayal Sb. bahot hi khoobsurat takhleeq hai aapki jo bahot achhi lagi. Bahot achhe aur waseetar khayalaat ka izhaar aapne kiya hai. Marhaba. Dua hai ho zore-qalam aur zyada.
Wah ji wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bhut hi khoob kaha
Bahut Umda Sajid Bhai Applause Applause Applause
Dil Bagh Bagh Ho Gaya Parhke

Hazaaron Da'd Hazir Hai, Kabul Farmaye.

Welcome Back...Achcha Laga Aapko Dubara Dekhkar

Yun Hi Mehfil Ki Raunaq Afazaai Karte Rahiye...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Wah..Bahaut khoob... Applause Applause

Khwaish Saheb, Riyaz Jee, Neelgold jee, Shihab Jee, Rahim mere bhai aaj aap sabne meri aakhe nam kardi. Aaj ek zamane baad mujhe mere gharwalo ne mere naam se pukara. Bohat dino se apni galtiyo ki saza bhugat raha hu aur ab to yeh bhi pata nahi ke saza ki muddat kab khatm hogi.

Yeh Yoindians ka pyaar hi tha jisne mujhe is kabil banaya ke aaj main thoda bohat likh leta hu. Aur yahi pyaar hai jo mujhe baar baar majboor karta hai ke main aap sab ke beech me chala aata hu. Main nahi chahta main is wahiyaat ID se aap sabko mukhatib karu. Main to hamesha Ghayel tha aapka Ghayel aur hamesha wahi bana rehna chahta hu. Par jab tak Admin saheb aur monitors ijazat na de shayed yeh mumkin nahi.

Allah se dua hai ke hamare dilo me jo purani ranjishe aur galatfehniya hain woh khatam ho jaye aur hum phir se ek naye khoobsurat safar ki shuruaat kare.

Yu to kaiee baar main dohra chuka hu par aaj ek baar phir main sare members monitors aur Admin saheb se apni galtiyo ki mafi mangta hu. Please mere purane ID ko phir se zinda karde bohat si yadein judi hai us id se woh sirf ek ID nahi meri zindagi hai.

Allah hum sabko duniya aur aakhirat me kamyabi ata kare...AAMEEN

Ghayel.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2010, 02:14:04 PM »
Wah! Ghayel Ji bahut hi umda peshkash hai aap ki
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Nafseeyati_Mareez
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2010, 02:29:47 PM »
Wah! Ghayel Ji bahut hi umda peshkash hai aap ki

Bohat shukriyaa.N Rajesh Bhai, waise abhi to school ki chuttiya chal rahi hogi....kahiye kaise waqt beet raha hai.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2010, 02:42:43 PM »
U R Most  Welcome Banner  Ghayel Bhai

Chuttiyan 30 April se shuru hongi Fiji mein
Abhi to Term End Exam hai bachchon ka
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2010, 02:46:42 PM »
Wah Ghayel ji  wah..... aapka firse bahut  bahut swagat hai....

Na zameen maangta hai na aasman maangta hai
aap sab se apni galtiyon ki mafi maangta hai
jis naam se jaana jaata tha ye "GHAYEL" bas wah hi naam maangta hai...
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2010, 07:49:16 PM »
Wah Ghayel ji  wah..... aapka firse bahut  bahut swagat hai....

Na zameen maangta hai na aasman maangta hai
aap sab se apni galtiyon ki mafi maangta hai
jis naam se jaana jaata tha ye "GHAYEL" bas wah hi naam maangta hai...

Badi meharbani CARA jee aapka andaz hamesha se yuhi josh se bhara raha hai...........aur aaj aapne jis tarah se mere man ki baat bayaa.N ki dil khush kar diya aapne.

Allah aapka damen duniya ki tamam khushiyo se bhar de.....AAMEEN
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dead heart
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2010, 08:30:03 PM »
Na zameen maangta hai na aasman maangta hai
aap sab se apni galtiyon ki mafi maangta hai
jis naam se jaana jaata tha ye "GHAYEL" bas wah hi naam maangta hai...
Bahaut bahaut khoob Cara jee...Kya baat kehdi!
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