-----/// Ghazab poochhte hain ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 17, 2013, 05:54:44 PM
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hai ehsaas hi nahi unko ki kitne tanhaa hai hum unke jaane ke baad aur woh har baar humse hamaari haalat poochhte hain, jaante hain ki ji nahi sakte hum unke binaa magar baar baar hum kaise ji rahe hain poochhte hain....

woh  har  sawaal  hi  to ajab poochhte hain
hamaari haalat  humi  se  ab  poochhte hain

woh chheen kar sab kuch hamaaraa hum se
ab hamaare ghum kaa sabab poochhte hain

chhod  aaye  majdhaar mein hamaari kashti
doobi kahaan woh kashti ab poochhte hain

thaa  nahi  poochaa   dil  lagaane   se  pehle
ab hum se hamaaraa mazhab poochhte hain

ehsaas  hi  nahi   un  ko lootaa jisne humein
hain hum  kitne  tanhaa  sab poochhte hain

tayyar  hain   baithe  chhodne   yeh duniyaa
hamaari  razaamandi ab  rab  poochhte hain

jisne  bhi  hai maangaa  has ke diyaa sab ko
dene se pehle kuch hum kab poochhte hain

har  baar  haan  mein  hain  sar hilaate hum
jab bhi un  ke  kaanpte  lab  poochhte hain

kyaa humein  ab bhi  un hi se mohabbat hai
aji dekhiye woh kyaa ghazab poochhte hain



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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2013, 06:31:11 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2013, 07:03:48 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 17, 2013, 05:54:44 PM

hai ehsaas hi nahi unko ki kitne tanhaa hai hum unke jaane ke baad aur woh har baar humse hamaari haalat poochhte hain, jaante hain ki ji nahi sakte hum unke binaa magar baar baar hum kaise ji rahe hain poochhte hain....

woh  har  sawaal  hi  to ajab poochhte hain
hamaari haalat  humi  se  ab  poochhte hain

woh chheen kar sab kuch hamaaraa hum se
ab hamaare ghum kaa sabab poochhte hain

chhod  aaye  majdhaar mein hamaari kashti
doobi kahaan woh kashti ab poochhte hain

thaa  nahi  poochaa   dil  lagaane   se  pehle
ab hum se hamaaraa mazhab poochhte hain

ehsaas  hi  nahi   un  ko lootaa jisne humein
hain hum  kitne  tanhaa  sab poochhte hain

tayyar  hain   baithe  chhodne   yeh duniyaa
hamaari  razaamandi ab  rab  poochhte hain

jisne  bhi  hai maangaa  has ke diyaa sab ko
dene se pehle kuch hum kab poochhte hain

har  baar  haan  mein  hain  sar hilaate hum
jab bhi un  ke  kaanpte  lab  poochhte hain

kyaa humein  ab bhi  un hi se mohabbat hai
aji dekhiye woh kyaa ghazab poochhte hain



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waaah bohat khoob hirday ji ,............bohat c daaad,...
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2013, 07:14:25 PM »

Hriday Jee Aadaab....!


Bahut khoob janab... badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai... achche ahsaas O khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne...

Aakhri ashaaroN meiN khoob lutf aaya... is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2013, 07:21:56 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji....!!!

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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2013, 07:25:25 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Prashad ji....!!!

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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2013, 07:26:19 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Laaiba ji....!!!

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waaah bohat khoob hirday ji ,............bohat c daaad,...
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2013, 07:27:42 PM »
hum aapkaa tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karte hain jo aapne hamaari is koshish ko waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaa, bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji...!!!


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Hriday Jee Aadaab....!


Bahut khoob janab... badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai... achche ahsaas O khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne...

Aakhri ashaaroN meiN khoob lutf aaya... is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2013, 08:41:32 PM »
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superbbbbbbbbb hriday ji.. bahut hi kamaal ki peshkash rahi. sabhi ashaar bahut bahut khoob hai.. dard bhi muhabbat bhi hai badi achchi peshkash rahi. hazaron hazaron dili daad is khoob kalaam par....
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2013, 08:50:21 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2013, 09:23:39 PM »
waah waah hriday bhai, hats off to u.
behad khubsurat kalaam.
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2013, 12:16:16 AM »
waah bahut khoob.....
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waah waah waah waah hriday jee kya kehne behad khoobsurat,laajawab peshkash hai..dhero daad..happy9
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