Ghazal- Chiraag isliye jalana hai.

by Sudhir Ashq on February 17, 2013, 07:05:07 AM
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Mujhhe bhi Roshni me aana hai.
Chiraag isliye jalana hai.

Tum hi batlayo kisko apnaaun,
Idhar ho tum,Udhar jamana hai.

Diya na mila to Dil jala liya humne,
Jashn ujaalon ka to manana hai.

Sahta hu hunste- hunste unke sitam,
Ishq ki rasm to nibhana hai.

Kaun jaane ki kis pe aa jaye,
Doston, Dil ka kya thhikana hai.

Phool Khilkar bikhar gaya koi,
Bus ye hi Ashq ka fasana hai.

                - Sudhir Ashq
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2013, 07:59:57 AM »
khoob rahi ye peshkash, pehla sher kuch correction mangta hai shayad
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2013, 08:29:13 AM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 17, 2013, 07:05:07 AM
Mujhhe bhi Roshni me aana hai.
Chiraag isliye janana hai.

Tum hi batlayo kisko apnaaun,
Idhar ho tum,Udhar jamana hai.

Diya na mila to Dil jala liya humne,
Jashn ujaalon ka to manana hai.

Sahta hu hunste- hunste unke sitam,
Ishq ki rasm to nibhana hai.

Kaun jaane ki kis pe aa jaye,
Doston, Dil ka kya thhikana hai.

Phool Khilkar bikhar gaya koi,
Bus ye hi Ashq ka fasana hai.

                - Sudhir Ashq

wah wah wah ashk sb umda aur rawaN ghazal kahi hai bohit khoob dheerroN DAAD qubool karen ......sabhi ashaar khoob rahe...pehle shaie ke dusre misre men spelling mistake hai correction kar lijiyega....
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2013, 08:53:06 AM »
bahut hee sunder
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2013, 10:32:54 AM »
Bohat Khub!!! Par Chiraag isliye janana hai ya Chirag Jalana hai?
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2013, 11:39:54 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2013, 01:09:38 PM »
ghazal bht achi hai
likhnewale ko dher saari daad
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2013, 01:59:24 PM »
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Bahut khoob...
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2013, 03:07:08 PM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 17, 2013, 07:05:07 AM
Mujhhe bhi Roshni me aana hai.
Chiraag isliye janana hai.

Tum hi batlayo kisko apnaaun,
Idhar ho tum,Udhar jamana hai.

Diya na mila to Dil jala liya humne,
Jashn ujaalon ka to manana hai.

Sahta hu hunste- hunste unke sitam,
Ishq ki rasm to nibhana hai.

Kaun jaane ki kis pe aa jaye,
Doston, Dil ka kya thhikana hai.

Phool Khilkar bikhar gaya koi,
Bus ye hi Ashq ka fasana hai.

                - Sudhir Ashq

wah wah sudhir jee behat khoobsurat ghazal likha hai aapne. bahut bahut daad.
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2013, 05:22:03 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob, bahut hi achhi ghazal, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur YoIndia pe aate rahiye.
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2013, 12:55:11 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2013, 04:18:39 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2013, 12:27:34 PM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 17, 2013, 07:05:07 AM
Mujhhe bhi Roshni me aana hai.
Chiraag isliye jalana hai.
waise charaag ki roshni bhi ab roshni maage hai ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Tum hi batlayo kisko apnaaun,
Idhar ho tum,Udhar jamana hai.
bahut khashmakash mein ho ab kya bataaon main bhi aise hi ek doraahe pe khadi hoon icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Diya na mila to Dil jala liya humne,
Jashn ujaalon ka to manana hai.
aisi qurbaani achi nahin hai Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Sahta hu hunste- hunste unke sitam,
Ishq ki rasm to nibhana hai.
main sitam nahin karti kisi pe .ye sara sar ilzaam hai mujh pe BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead
Kaun jaane ki kis pe aa jaye,
Doston, Dil ka kya thhikana hai.
dil to pagal hai icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
Phool Khilkar bikhar gaya koi,
Bus ye hi Ashq ka fasana hai.

itna badaa fasanaa aur sirf do line mein icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

                - Sudhir Ashq


bahut khoob...........!
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«Reply #13 on: March 13, 2013, 02:48:08 AM »
Bahut Khoob.,
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