Ghazal: har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii...!

by DhavalRami on August 12, 2009, 05:24:43 AM
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Deepati
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«Reply #30 on: August 17, 2009, 04:52:05 AM »
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

bazm meiN apnii ik ChhoTii sii koShiSh ke saath haaZir ho rahaa huuN... aapki qeemtee raa'ey aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulaa'iizaa famaayeN...!

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har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii
jazbaat-e-bahr dil meiN dabaa hotaa haii

bahr: darya ,samaNdar

kyaa kyaa naa jaane iShq meiN hotaa haii
haal aaShiqoN ka bahot buraa hotaa haii

wo kehte haiiN hum kyaa hai tuMhaare
maiNe kahaa ki tu mi'raa Khudaa hotaa haii

maulaa mere !! yeh iShq bhee kyaa Khuub haii
haNs ke ko_ii kaisey fanaa hotaa haii

jab yaad "Dhaval" ko aati beeteN kal kii
kabhi iShq ,kabee Khud se Khafaa hotaa haii

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Wah Wah Dhaval Ji... Kamaal ka likha hai!  Bahut Bahut Khoob!  Daad qabool karein! Applause Applause
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Jiya
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«Reply #31 on: August 17, 2009, 04:58:38 PM »
har shaks mein shayar chhipa hota hai,
kyunki sabhi ko zindagi mein pyaar hota hai,
shayar bana deta hai pyaar aashiko ko,
kyun ki har shayari mein unka yaar hota hai.

......................................  Jiya ...


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Pooja
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«Reply #32 on: August 17, 2009, 05:12:06 PM »
nice lines Jiya
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #33 on: August 18, 2009, 12:00:32 PM »

Wah Wah Dhaval Ji... Kamaal ka likha hai!  Bahut Bahut Khoob!  Daad qabool karein! Applause Applause


Deepati jee:

namaste!

Ghazal ki pazeerA'ii ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaah! darKhaaSt yahee hai kii yuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee! ... aapki daad sar'aaNKhoN par..! KhuSh raheN.... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #34 on: August 18, 2009, 12:03:25 PM »
har shaks mein shayar chhipa hota hai,
kyunki sabhi ko zindagi mein pyaar hota hai,
shayar bana deta hai pyaar aashiko ko,
kyun ki har shayari mein unka yaar hota hai.

......................................  Jiya ...




Jiya jee:

aapko merii Ghazal pasaNd aayiiN.. baRii KhuShii hu'ii .. aapne bhee bahot Khuub saath nibhaayaa haii..! Khuub liKhaa hay ... daad qabUl farmaayeN.! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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Jiya
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«Reply #35 on: August 19, 2009, 05:37:52 PM »
shukriya Daval ji... Usual Smile
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anmolarora
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«Reply #36 on: September 01, 2012, 02:11:28 PM »
very nice
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