Ghazal: Khaak hu_aa wujud mi'raa sirf bachaa dhuaaN dhuaaN....!

by DhavalRami on August 28, 2009, 04:24:34 AM
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Mehfil-e-yaaraaN:

Aadaab!!

apni aik koShiSh ko liye bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa saath Zaruur mileNgaa..! apnii Qeemtee raa'ey Zaruur deejiYe.ngaa..! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!

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saath mi're tu rehti haii jaata huN maiN jahaaN jahaaN
khaaB banii jo aati ho aaNKheiN lagii wahaaN wahaaN

teri adaa pe dil fi_daa ho gaya yuuN mi're "sanam"
deKhataa jab bhi huuN tujhe lagta huN maiN jawaaN jawaaN

Khaa-m-Khaa yuuN Qarib na aa naZdikiyaaN baRhaa na tuu
hoNgi aSar se baahOn ke dhaRkaneN phir rawaaN rawaaN

dooba maiN yuuN naShe meiN ab har su mujhe bas tu diKhe
aayi tu jo mujhe lage maikade saa samaaN samaaN

dard diyaa tune mujhe taShna hu_aa ti're liye
taShnagi kii wo daasataaN kaise huwii bayaaN bayaaN

koyi nahiiN "dhaval" ti'raa raKh na jhuThii tu KhwaahiSheN
Khaak hu_aa wujud mi'raa sirf bachaa dhuaaN dhuaaN

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 05:22:58 AM »
Wah wah Dhaval ji,really touching ,bahut khoob mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 12:10:14 PM »
Kya baat hai Dhavaj Ji.. SubanAllah kya umda Bazm pesh kiya hai.. Bahoot acha laga pad kar.. True emotions made it Awesome one...

Good Work Dhaval ji
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 04:22:16 PM »
dhaval ji
aapki ghazal ne dil khush kar diya Applause Applause Applause Applause
aise hi anokhi ghazalein likhte rahiye
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2009, 07:12:12 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob Dhaval ji!!
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smardia
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2009, 07:53:41 PM »
achha kalam hai aap ka... Applause



Mehfil-e-yaaraaN:

Aadaab!!

apni aik koShiSh ko liye bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa saath Zaruur mileNgaa..! apnii Qeemtee raa'ey Zaruur deejiYe.ngaa..! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!

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saath mi're tu rehti haii jaata huN maiN jahaaN jahaaN
khaaB banii jo aati ho aaNKheiN lagii wahaaN wahaaN

teri adaa pe dil fi_daa ho gaya yuuN mi're "sanam"
deKhataa jab bhi huuN tujhe lagta huN maiN jawaaN jawaaN

Khaa-m-Khaa yuuN Qarib na aa naZdikiyaaN baRhaa na tuu
hoNgi aSar se baahOn ke dhaRkaneN phir rawaaN rawaaN

dooba maiN yuuN naShe meiN ab har su mujhe bas tu diKhe
aayi tu jo mujhe lage maikade saa samaaN samaaN

dard diyaa tune mujhe taShna hu_aa ti're liye
taShnagi kii wo daasataaN kaise huwii bayaaN bayaaN

koyi nahiiN "dhaval" ti'raa raKh na jhuThii tu KhwaahiSheN
Khaak hu_aa wujud mi'raa sirf bachaa dhuaaN dhuaaN

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mistufer
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2009, 02:50:28 AM »
dard diyaa tune mujhe taShna hu_aa ti're liye
taShnagi kii wo daasataaN kaise huwii bayaaN bayaaN

dhaval JSK
bahut dilko choone wale ehsaason se kalam band kiya hai
badhai
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2009, 06:18:01 AM »
Dhaval Bhai.. Humesha Ki Tarah Aapka Qalaam padh ke Dil se Yehi Alfaaz Nikle Hain Ki Subhan-Allah..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Bahut Bahut Bahut Hi Umda Alfaazon ko Yahan Bikhera hai aapne.. Dil se Daad Kubool karen...!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2009, 10:15:21 AM »
...its a nice one Dhaval...keep it up...
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2009, 09:46:50 AM »
Wah wah Dhaval ji,really touching ,bahut khoob mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Madhuwesh jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

Ghazal ki pasaNdagee ke liye aapka bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h ... aap yahaaN aayeN mujhe be-Had KhuShii hu'ii!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2009, 05:25:29 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Dhaval Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2009, 05:41:23 AM »
Kya baat hai Dhavaj Ji.. SubanAllah kya umda Bazm pesh kiya hai.. Bahoot acha laga pad kar.. True emotions made it Awesome one...

Good Work Dhaval ji

divya jee:

aapne merii koShiSH ko apnaa Qeemtee waQt diyaa be-had khuShii hu'ii.. saath dete raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN..apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2009, 04:41:14 PM »
bahot hi dil se likha hai aapne Dhawal ji
behad achi ghazal,daad kubool karen
Allah khair karen,khush rahiye
KaaSh jee:

namaste!

maiN aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN.. yuuNhi saath dete raheN!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #13 on: November 01, 2009, 06:40:16 PM »
dhaval ji
aapki ghazal ne dil khush kar diya Applause Applause Applause Applause
aise hi anokhi ghazalein likhte rahiye

saaHeb:

namaste!

merii KhuShkismatee hai kii aapne merii Ghazal ko dil se paRhaa aur apne dil meiN jaGah dii.. yuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee!

ShuKriyaa'h!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: November 02, 2009, 02:34:55 PM »
Mehfil-e-yaaraaN:

Aadaab!!

apni aik koShiSh ko liye bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa saath Zaruur mileNgaa..! apnii Qeemtee raa'ey Zaruur deejiYe.ngaa..! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!

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saath mi're tu rehti haii jaata huN maiN jahaaN jahaaN
khaaB banii jo aati ho aaNKheiN lagii wahaaN wahaaN

teri adaa pe dil fi_daa ho gaya yuuN mi're "sanam"
deKhataa jab bhi huuN tujhe lagta huN maiN jawaaN jawaaN

Khaa-m-Khaa yuuN Qarib na aa naZdikiyaaN baRhaa na tuu
hoNgi aSar se baahOn ke dhaRkaneN phir rawaaN rawaaN

dooba maiN yuuN naShe meiN ab har su mujhe bas tu diKhe
aayi tu jo mujhe lage maikade saa samaaN samaaN

dard diyaa tune mujhe taShna hu_aa ti're liye
taShnagi kii wo daasataaN kaise huwii bayaaN bayaaN

koyi nahiiN "dhaval" ti'raa raKh na jhuThii tu KhwaahiSheN
Khaak hu_aa wujud mi'raa sirf bachaa dhuaaN dhuaaN

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Bohot hi khoob Dhaval Ji....Sorry bohot der se jawab diya hai......Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal Applause Applause Applause
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