Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!:Shayri-E-Dard

DhavalRami

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sabhee ko meraa Namaskaar aur Aadaab..!

aaj mai.n aap sab se merii aik Pooraani Ghazal baaNT rahaa huuN jo ik arse pehle liKhi thee aur kaaGaz par hi reh ga'ii thii.n... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa pyar aur saath mujhe zaruur mile.ngaa! mulA'iizaa farmaaye.N...!

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KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa
har Khwaab ko maine til til marte huye deKhaa

ho ga'i aadat ab tou andhero.n mei.n jeene kii
muHabbat kaa sUraj bhee Dhalte huye deKhaa

kyaa paayaa kyaa Khoyaa nah pataa dil ko mi're yaaro.N
Khud ke armaa.N ko dafan jo karte huye deKhaa

laaKhoN the bahaaye aaNsu mi're GhaaNv par jiss ne
nafz-e-waapasi mei.n uss ko hi ha.nste huye deKhaa

beeteN kal kii yaado.n se Khud ko nahi.n nikaalaa fir
jab sach kee kaDwaahaT ko baDhte huye deKhaa

haalat deKh mi'ree akCar meHfil kaheN mujH_se
kyaa Shab ko subHaa se kabhi milte huye deKhaa?

Khud kaa Ghum meHfil mei.n maine sunaayaa tou
sab ke haatho.n ko maine malte huye deKhaa

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ख्वाबों की दुनिया को जब जलते हुए देखा
हर ख्वाब को मैने तिल तिल मरते हुए देखा

हो गई आदत अब तो अंधेरों मे जीने की
मुहब्बत का सूरज भी ढलते हुए देखा

क्या पाया क्या खोया न पता दिल को मेरे यारों
खुद के अरमां को दफ़न जो करते हुए देखा

लाखों थे बहाए आँसू मेरे घाव पर जिसने
नफ़ज़-ए-वापसी मे उसको ही हंसते हुए देखा

बीतें कल की यादों से खुद को नहीं निकाला फिर
जब सच की कड्वाहट को बढ्ते हुए देखा

हालत देख मेरी अक्सर महफ़िल कहे मुझ से
क्या शब को सुबहा से कभी मिलते हुए देखा?

खुद का गम महफ़िल में मैने सुनाया तो
सब के हाथों को मैने मलते हुए देखा

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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 08:40:34 AM »

waah waah bahoot bahoot umda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne ,,, Bahoot gehrai mea chupe dark ko bayaan kiya ho jaise... Bahoot Khoob !


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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 08:54:58 AM »

DIL CHHU GAI AAPKI GAZAL DHAVAL JI.....ITS TOOOO GOOD


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 02:32:53 PM »

Wah wah Dhaval Saheb......terrific work.


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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 04:52:32 PM »

Dhaval Bhai.. Humesha ki Tarah Behad Khubsoorati se Dard Ko Lafzon Me Utaara hai aapne.. Ek ek Lafz Apni Kahani Si Kahata Nazar aaya.. Baar baar aapki Yeh Poem Padhi... Aur Har Baar Dard Ko ek Naye Roop Me Mehsoos Kiya..

Behad khubsoorat aur Umda Peshkash Hai.. Dil se Daad Kubool karen...

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 06:36:09 PM »

bahut khoob Dhaval ji...!!!


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2010, 07:08:02 PM »

Dhaval Jee bahut achchi gazal kahi hai aapne.......... Dil se daad kabool kijiye.... Kuch ek ashaar dil ke kafi kareeb rahe ....


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Anshumali

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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2010, 02:56:34 AM »

Dhaval Ji.....Happy BirthDay ! Bahut hi khoob rahi aapki yeh peshkash...matle se maqte tak ... har ashaar dil ko chhoo kar nikal jaata hai.....bahut khoob ...very nice creation.....dil se daad hazir hai...khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...


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DhavalRami

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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2010, 11:29:15 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on August 15, 2010, 08:40:34 AM

waah waah bahoot bahoot umda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne ,,, Bahoot gehrai mea chupe dark ko bayaan kiya ho jaise... Bahoot Khoob !

Dear Divya jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

ik arse baad aapse ru-ba-ru ho rahaa huu.n.. Ghazal ki pasandagee ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h.. saath dete rahen aage bhee!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval


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dead heart

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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2011, 08:39:39 PM »

Kya baat hai Dhaval bhai..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!


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Yaash

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Re: Ghazal: KhwaaboN kii dunyaa ko jab jalte huye deKhaa...!

«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2011, 07:34:18 AM »

Bohat Khoob Janab Dhaval Sahab


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