ghazal

by laaiba on March 30, 2012, 10:36:57 AM
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my 1st effort in ghazal... angel11
  heejr dil kaa naseebA ho jaayegaa
  daRd had se seewaA ho jaayegaa
mohabbat par yakee.N kaise ho gaa
gar too yoonhi khafaa ho jaayegaa
   pyar kitna sahee leikin ik din
   too mujh say judaa ho jayegaa
   dil ki shakhon par jo khila kab se
   patta voh to haraa ho jaayegaa
   dasht e hijran mein bhatke ga dil or
    khatm har aik qissaa ho jaayegaa....
   laaiba ali angel11
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2012, 10:41:33 AM »
bahut khoob laaiba ji...
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2012, 12:09:04 PM »
Laiba Jee Aadaab!

behad khoob aur achchi gazal rahi... Usual Smile
sabhi ashaaroN ke ahsaas o khayaal kafi achche rahe...

aik khoob aur achchi koshish par humari dili daad o mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2012, 12:22:48 PM »
my 1st effort in ghazal... angel11
  heejr dil main nihaa.N ho jaayegaa
  daRd had se seewaA ho jaayegaa
mohabbat par yakee.N kaise ho gaa
gar too yoonhi khafaa ho jaayegaa
   pyar kitna sahee leikin ik din
   too mujh say judaa ho jayegaa
   dil ki shakhon par jo khila kab se
   patta voh to haraa ho jaayegaa
   dasht e hijran mein bhatke ga dil or
    khatm har aik qissaa ho jaayegaa....
   laaiba ali angel11

nice
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2012, 12:26:56 PM »
my 1st effort in ghazal... angel11
  heejr dil main nihaa.N ho jaayegaa
  daRd had se seewaA ho jaayegaa
mohabbat par yakee.N kaise ho gaa
gar too yoonhi khafaa ho jaayegaa
   pyar kitna sahee leikin ik din
   too mujh say judaa ho jayegaa
   dil ki shakhon par jo khila kab se
   patta voh to haraa ho jaayegaa
   dasht e hijran mein bhatke ga dil or
    khatm har aik qissaa ho jaayegaa....
   laaiba ali angel11

nice
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2012, 12:35:39 PM »
boht khoob
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2012, 12:41:44 PM »
my 1st effort in ghazal... angel11
  heejr dil main nihaa.N ho jaayegaa
  daRd had se seewaA ho jaayegaa
mohabbat par yakee.N kaise ho gaa
gar too yoonhi khafaa ho jaayegaa
   pyar kitna sahee leikin ik din
   too mujh say judaa ho jayegaa
   dil ki shakhon par jo khila kab se
   patta voh to haraa ho jaayegaa
   dasht e hijran mein bhatke ga dil or
    khatm har aik qissaa ho jaayegaa....
   laaiba ali angel11



Bahut Bahut Khooob Laaiba ji

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur gehre Khayaal..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2012, 04:48:18 PM »
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
i remember..u have made ur sensible efforts..very nice..

what a start..u deserve the real appreciation for this post..now i see you going ahead ..just keep writing..

Applause Applause
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laaiba
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2012, 06:00:25 PM »
bahut khoob laaiba ji...
thnku dolly jee...
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laaiba
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2012, 06:01:14 PM »
Laiba Jee Aadaab!

behad khoob aur achchi gazal rahi... Usual Smile
sabhi ashaaroN ke ahsaas o khayaal kafi achche rahe...

aik khoob aur achchi koshish par humari dili daad o mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



aadab parwaz jee
bohat bohat shukria aapka ....
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laaiba
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2012, 06:01:40 PM »
nice
shukria aapka bhai....
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laaiba
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2012, 06:02:04 PM »
boht khoob
bohat shukria...
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laaiba
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«Reply #12 on: March 30, 2012, 06:02:41 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khooob Laaiba ji

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur gehre Khayaal..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bohat bohat shukria aapka....
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«Reply #13 on: March 30, 2012, 06:03:40 PM »
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
i remember..u have made ur sensible efforts..very nice..

what a start..u deserve the real appreciation for this post..now i see you going ahead ..just keep writing..

Applause Applause
thanks alot vid my truely heart mkv ...so nyc of you....
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2012, 10:23:45 PM »
nice lines laaiba ji....

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