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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2012, 10:41:33 AM » |
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bahut khoob laaiba ji...
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2012, 12:22:48 PM » |
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my 1st effort in ghazal... 
heejr dil main nihaa.N ho jaayegaa
daRd had se seewaA ho jaayegaa
mohabbat par yakee.N kaise ho gaa
gar too yoonhi khafaa ho jaayegaa
pyar kitna sahee leikin ik din
too mujh say judaa ho jayegaa
dil ki shakhon par jo khila kab se
patta voh to haraa ho jaayegaa
dasht e hijran mein bhatke ga dil or
khatm har aik qissaa ho jaayegaa....
laaiba ali nice |
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2012, 12:26:56 PM » |
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my 1st effort in ghazal...
heejr dil main nihaa.N ho jaayegaa
daRd had se seewaA ho jaayegaa
mohabbat par yakee.N kaise ho gaa
gar too yoonhi khafaa ho jaayegaa
pyar kitna sahee leikin ik din
too mujh say judaa ho jayegaa
dil ki shakhon par jo khila kab se
patta voh to haraa ho jaayegaa
dasht e hijran mein bhatke ga dil or
khatm har aik qissaa ho jaayegaa....
laaiba ali nice |
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2012, 12:35:39 PM » |
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boht khoob
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2012, 04:48:18 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Laaiba jee i remember..u have made ur sensible efforts..very nice.. what a start..u deserve the real appreciation for this post..now i see you going ahead ..just keep writing..  |
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2012, 06:00:25 PM » |
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bahut khoob laaiba ji...
thnku dolly jee... |
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2012, 06:01:14 PM » |
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Laiba Jee Aadaab!
behad khoob aur achchi gazal rahi... 
sabhi ashaaroN ke ahsaas o khayaal kafi achche rahe...
aik khoob aur achchi koshish par humari dili daad o mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...
likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
aadab parwaz jee bohat bohat shukria aapka .... |
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2012, 06:01:40 PM » |
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nice
shukria aapka bhai.... |
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2012, 06:02:04 PM » |
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boht khoob
bohat shukria... |
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«Reply #12 on: March 30, 2012, 06:02:41 PM » |
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«Reply #13 on: March 30, 2012, 06:03:40 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Laaiba jee i remember..u have made ur sensible efforts..very nice.. what a start..u deserve the real appreciation for this post..now i see you going ahead ..just keep writing.. thanks alot vid my truely heart mkv ...so nyc of you.... |
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2012, 10:23:45 PM » |
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nice lines laaiba ji....
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