ghazal

by laaiba on May 11, 2012, 11:54:12 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 14, 2012, 09:22:23 AM »
ghazal likhne kee koshish  Feared.
            ghazal
  dil K daaMan main koi to aas rehne do
  chaNd yaaDein mere bhi paas rehne do

  taluq to khatm ho hee chukay hain lekin
  pyar kee thoddi dil mein bass rehne do
  chalo tum bhool jaayo pyar kee baatein
  main hoo tanhaa to mujhe be aas rehne do
  rooh main muhabbat hee ko utaaraa tha
  baaqi ab dard kaa ehhsaas rehne do
  apni manzil ko paa kar meira mat socho
  kia hai meiraa mujhe uudaas rehne do....
  laaiba ali angel11

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«Reply #16 on: May 16, 2012, 09:29:22 AM »
  Laibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Masha Allaah jee kia kahne waaH jee waaH bahut khoob jee
bahut umdaa... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaas O khayaal gazab ke rahe jee.. kia kahne waaH
badi pyaari kalaam kahi hai.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rhaiye... aate rahiye...

HaaN dusre ashaar ka kafiyaa " bass" dusre kafiyoN meiN
shamil nahi hoNga so us sher ko dusre kafiye se badl dijiye.. Usual Smile


Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 


bohat bohat shukria parwaz sahab...
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«Reply #17 on: May 16, 2012, 09:30:29 AM »
bahut sundar laabiaji...


 Applause Applause Applause
bohat bohat shukria aapka...
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«Reply #18 on: May 16, 2012, 09:31:12 AM »
bohtu khub laiba jai likhte rahiye
bohat shukria...
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«Reply #19 on: May 26, 2012, 05:52:35 PM »
bahut acche
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«Reply #20 on: May 26, 2012, 08:14:27 PM »
bahut acche
thanku....
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