***gila to jamane se hai***

by kaushikbhawna008 on July 30, 2008, 06:26:21 AM
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gila tujhse nahi koi jo tu mohobbat nibha na saka
gila to jamane se hai jisne tujhe nibhane na dia

hai yakin tu bhi bichadkar mujhse tadpa hoga
gila hai jamane se jo aakhri baar tujhe mujhse milne na dia

mein to maut ki god mein so chuki thi e-sanam
gila hai jamane se jo tujhe meri laash par aansu bahane na dia

yu to roya hoga tu bhi bohut meri tarah
gila hai jamane se jo gam ko chupane na dia

yu to kai gile kiye hamne jamane se tujhse bichad jaane k baad
par shukra hai is jamane ka k tujhe bewafaa keh mere pyaar ko tujhe bhulne na dia
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sidushale
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2008, 06:29:13 AM »
bhout achi ahi did u write this urself?
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2008, 06:36:31 AM »
ya  sid this is writen by me
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sidushale
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2008, 06:37:45 AM »
m so surprised....bohut achi hia
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kiiller_1
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2008, 07:31:18 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 30, 2008, 06:26:21 AM
gila tujhse nahi koi jo tu mohobbat nibha na saka
gila to jamane se hai jisne tujhe nibhane na dia

hai yakin tu bhi bichadkar mujhse tadpa hoga
gila hai jamane se jo aakhri baar tujhe mujhse milne na dia

mein to maut ki god mein so chuki thi e-sanam
gila hai jamane se jo tujhe meri laash par aansu bahane na dia

 dia

bhavna ji rote rote likha he kya
yaar rula diya hum ko
gr8 aalfash nahi milte kya likhu
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kiiller_1
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2008, 07:33:31 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 30, 2008, 06:26:21 AM
dia

jisne kabhi kisi se payr kiya hoga
aur woh usse se bichad gaya hoga
woh yaha jarur comment karega
point 10+10
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sweetie2210s
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2008, 12:14:13 PM »
It's too good bhawna didi,ankhon mein aansu aa gaye:(
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angel4u
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2008, 02:08:35 PM »
Bahut hi khoobsurat and simple lafzon mein likha hia,
dilko chhu gaye ek ek ashar.
Keep it up.
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2008, 06:58:14 AM »
shukriya ghanshyam ji, sweetie ji and angel ji
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2008, 10:31:19 AM »
Bohot Khoob Bhawna
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