Guanah!!! (neel)

by neelgold on April 06, 2010, 10:16:59 PM
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Kya khain  aur kya na khain,
Yeh gunah hum aaj b kiye ja rehe hai
Tume bhulne ka dava karte hai hum,
Par fir b tume Yaad ajj b kiye ja rehe hai
Khmosh the , khmosh hai aur kmosh hi rehnge,
Na bolne ki kasam hum aaj b liye ja rehe hai
Miloge tum kabhi to kissi mod pe hume,Yakin hai hume...
Issliye tera Intzaarhum Ajj b kiye ja rehe hai............

Yeh Gunah Hum Baar baar kiye ja rehe hai !!!!!!!!!!!
Bhool bhool kar fir tume yaad kiye ja rehe hai!!!!!!!!
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nazar ghouri
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2010, 10:32:25 PM »
very nice n simply superb ...
Quote from: neelgold on April 06, 2010, 10:16:59 PM
Kya khain  aur kya na khain,
Yeh gunah hum aaj b kiye ja rehe hai
Tume bhulne ka dava karte hai hum,
Par fir b tume Yaad ajj b kiye ja rehe hai
Khmosh the , khmosh hai aur kmosh hi rehnge,
Na bolne ki kasam hum aaj b liye ja rehe hai
Miloge tum kabhi to kissi mod pe hume,Yakin hai hume...
Issliye tera Intzaarhum Ajj b kiye ja rehe hai............

Yeh Gunah Hum Baar baar kiye ja rehe hai !!!!!!!!!!!
Bhool bhool kar fir tume yaad kiye ja rehe hai!!!!!!!!
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neelgold
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2010, 10:42:18 PM »
Thanx Nazar shaib.... relly thnx
Quote from: nazar ghouri on April 06, 2010, 10:32:25 PM
very nice n simply superb ...
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2010, 03:01:04 AM »
wah kya baat hai        neelgold ji.....


Tum jitna door  hamse jaa rahe ho
utna paas ham tumhare aana chah rahe hai
tumne toh saaf kahe diya hai ki tum hamare nahi ho paaounge
phir bhi na jaane kyun ye "GUANAH" bar bar ham kiye jaa rahe hai....
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2010, 05:21:20 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Neel ji and Cara ji,marvelous creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2010, 05:43:29 AM »
Quote from: neelgold on April 06, 2010, 10:16:59 PM
Kya khain  aur kya na khain,
Yeh gunah hum aaj b kiye ja rehe hai
Tume bhulne ka dava karte hai hum,
Par fir b tume Yaad ajj b kiye ja rehe hai
Khmosh the , khmosh hai aur kmosh hi rehnge,
Na bolne ki kasam hum aaj b liye ja rehe hai
Miloge tum kabhi to kissi mod pe hume,Yakin hai hume...
Issliye tera Intzaarhum Ajj b kiye ja rehe hai............

Yeh Gunah Hum Baar baar kiye ja rehe hai !!!!!!!!!!!
Bhool bhool kar fir tume yaad kiye ja rehe hai!!!!!!!!


Bahut khoob Neel Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2010, 07:13:10 AM »
Wah wah Neel ji bahut achha likha hai apne. Nice creation. Keep writing.
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neelgold
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2010, 09:41:28 PM »
Thanx a lot Madhu ji ...
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 07, 2010, 05:21:20 AM
Wah bahut khoob Neel ji and Cara ji,marvelous creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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neelgold
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2010, 09:49:43 PM »
Thanx a lot Cara Ji...

Hum Jitna door jate hai, tum utna hi pass bula lete ho...
Hamri khosih rehi hai ki koi khata na ho hum se
Tum fir b kissi na kissi GUNAH ka ehsas karva hi jate ho..
Milna mumkin nahi tha to kya karte hum,
Tum fir bi kasoorvar hume hi bana jate ho
Quote from: cara on April 07, 2010, 03:01:04 AM
wah kya baat hai        neelgold ji.....


Tum jitna door  hamse jaa rahe ho
utna paas ham tumhare aana chah rahe hai
tumne toh saaf kahe diya hai ki tum hamare nahi ho paaounge
phir bhi na jaane kyun ye "GUANAH" bar bar ham kiye jaa rahe hai....
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neelgold
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2010, 09:54:39 PM »
Thanx a lot Riyaz & Rajesh Harish ...
Lot of Thnx .....its all u ppl inspire me to write sumthing.....

I really wants to Thanx all Gr8 ppl hre.......
Riyaz Ji, Madhu Ji , Geet Ji, Rahim ji , Kapil, Nazar shib, & all othr ppl also who's inspiring me Lyk Rajesh Ji, Cara ji & evryone hre.......

Tons of Thanxxxxxxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOD bless u all...........
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neelgold
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2010, 09:55:24 PM »
APp ko kya bolo rajesh / Harish Huh???
Its 2 names 2ghtr
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 07, 2010, 05:43:29 AM
Bahut khoob Neel Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2010, 07:38:51 PM »
Maan gaye Neel ji aapki kalam ko... bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki ye... mehboob k intzaar ke meethe dard ko bahut ki khoobsurti se aapne apne shabdon k mala me piroya hai... lajawaab Neel ji... aapke hi shabdon me kehte hai... aapne "KAMAAL" kar diya... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Do panktiyaan maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hain...

ab to gunah karne ki hamari aadat si ho gayi hai,
roz tumko yaad karne ki chahat si ho gayi hai,
khaamoshi teri roz aake kaano me kuch keh jaati hai,
kaise kahen teri har khamoshi ab sangeet si ho gayi hai,

ab to tere intezaar ki aadat si ho gayi hai,
har ghadi raah takne ki chahat si ho gayi hai,
ab to meri saanso me bhi tera hi basera hai,
lagta hai ki jaise tujhse preet si ho gayi hai...
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2010, 08:30:26 PM »
Wah Neel ji ek baar phirse bahut khoob likha aapne.bahut achi lagi ye lines,hum
jitna dhoor jaate hai, tum utna paas bhula lete ho.Aur Kapil se aapne bhi kamaal ke likha.lovely work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2010, 08:45:19 PM »
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne Madhu ji... Neel ji ne bahut hi badiya likha hai... !!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 08, 2010, 08:30:26 PM
Wah Neel ji ek baar phirse bahut khoob likha aapne.bahut achi lagi ye lines,hum
jitna dhoor jaate hai, tum utna paas bhula lete ho.Aur Kapil se aapne bhi kamaal ke likha.lovely work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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neelgold
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2010, 08:57:00 PM »
Thanx a lot Madhu Ji !!!!!!!!!!

U Guys r my real Inspiration who pushes me to to write ......

Thnx alllllllll
& kapil Ji to gr8 hai hi nahi .....
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 08, 2010, 08:30:26 PM
Wah Neel ji ek baar phirse bahut khoob likha aapne.bahut achi lagi ye lines,hum
jitna dhoor jaate hai, tum utna paas bhula lete ho.Aur Kapil se aapne bhi kamaal ke likha.lovely work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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