Gum dekhe hai... -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

brokenbyluv

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«Reply #15 on: March 01, 2010, 10:24:59 AM »

Thnx madhu ji n ur welcome too...


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Re: Gum dekhe hai...

«Reply #16 on: March 01, 2010, 10:41:10 AM »


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Gum dekhe hai...

«Reply #17 on: March 01, 2010, 10:48:37 AM »

thnx think ji...


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Gum dekhe hai...

«Reply #18 on: December 06, 2010, 10:14:40 PM »

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 26, 2010, 03:25:23 PM

Iss chhoti si umar mein bahut se mausam dekhe hai,
kabhi khushi bepanah tou kabhi dard bhare gum dekhe hai,

pal mein jism se juda hoti ruho k maatam dekhe hai,
kabhi khushi bepanah tou kabhi dard bhare gum dekhe hai,

Barasti hui bundo mein bhi kayi registan nam dekhe hai,
kabhi khushi bepanah tou kabhi dard bhare gum dekhe hai,

APNO K SAAYE MEIN DIL KO DEHELA DENE WALE ZULM-O-SITAM DEKHE HAI,
kabhi khushi bepanah tou kabhi dard bhare gum dekhe hai......

Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai Geet Ji


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Gum dekhe hai...

«Reply #19 on: December 07, 2010, 08:58:57 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji...


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Re: Gum dekhe hai...

«Reply #20 on: December 07, 2010, 09:06:59 AM »

bahut bahut khoob Geet ji.. main yahan nahi aake jaane kya miss kar raha tha.. aaj aapka likha hau ye post padha .. bahut achcha laga aur bahut pasand aayaa.. kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine.. utna achcha nahi bana par fir bhi jo dil me aaya aur jo flow me bana bas likh diya ... ek baar fir kahunga bahut khoob likha hai aapne....

ye jeewan hai kabhi hasaati hai to kabhi rulaati hai,
kabhi sukoon deti hai to kabhi bahut sataati hai,

raahi hain hum is jeewan me, humein manzil bulaati hai,
chalna hamaara kam hai, sukh dukh to jeewan ka saathi hai,

mumkin hi nahi ki har lamha ho bas khushiyon se bharaa,
ek pal pyaar hota hai to kabhi dard bhare geet sunati hai,

ye jeewan hai mere dost, kabhi hasaati hai, kabhi rulati hai,
aur kabhi kabhi hamaare dard ko dekh ye khud muskuraati hai,

ye jeewan hai kabhi hasati hai to kabhi rulaati hai,
kabhi sukoon deti hai to kabhi bahut sataati hai....


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Gum dekhe hai...

«Reply #21 on: December 07, 2010, 11:30:32 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 07, 2010, 09:06:59 AM

Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji...aur shukriya merri kavita pasand karne k liye...

Samjhe hai aaj iss zindgi ka matlab,
jab kuch kuch khoya aur kuch kuch paya hai,

aksar aesi raho per le jati hai ye hamein,
jahan bahut mushkil daur mein isne hamko azmaya hai,

waqt ka rukh ye modti hai sahi rasto se hamein jodti hai,
kabhi maan jati hai ek pal mein kabhi isne bahut sataya hai,

dekha tou nhi aaj tak iska chehra maine,
per isi zindgi k sath main apni zindgi ka har pal bitaya hai.........


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Re: Gum dekhe hai...

«Reply #22 on: September 22, 2011, 07:21:49 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!! Maafi chahunga main iska reply nahi kar paaya... aajkal waqt hi nahi milta ya keh sakte hain flow hi khatam ho gaya hai...!!! Aur meri kavita pasand karne k liye bahut bahut shukriya...!!!


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