gum ko bhi dekh(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on June 13, 2010, 05:36:24 AM
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Pehle apne dil mei jhak,phir mere dil ko dekh
meri khushi se jalne wale ,mere gum ko bhi dekh

Hai kya tere pass gar janna he chahata hai tu
to apne se amir ko nahi,kisi gareeb ko dekh

karti hai jo sauda aurate apne jism ka
jism nahi kabhi unki mazburiyo ko dekh

hai dukhi hamse bhi jyada manoj aur bhi log
dekhna hai gar to gumo se bahar nikal kar dekh


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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2010, 08:20:02 AM »
Wah Manoj ji bahut gaherai,sachai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,great creation. icon_salut Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2010, 08:34:54 AM »
bahut khoob manoj ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2010, 11:53:41 AM »
Nice poem Manoj=ji..... Applause Applause Applause



Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 13, 2010, 05:36:24 AM
Pehle apne dil mei jhak,phir mere dil ko dekh
meri khushi se jalne wale ,mere gum ko bhi dekh

Hai kya tere pass gar janna he chahata hai tu
to apne se amir ko nahi,kisi gareeb ko dekh

karti hai jo sauda aurate apne jism ka
jism nahi kabhi unki mazburiyo ko dekh

hai dukhi hamse bhi jyada manoj aur bhi log
dekhna hai gar to gumo se bahar nikal kar dekh


                  MANOJ(CSET)
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2010, 04:29:46 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 13, 2010, 08:20:02 AM
Wah Manoj ji bahut gaherai,sachai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,great creation. icon_salut Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2010, 04:30:57 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on June 13, 2010, 08:34:54 AM
bahut khoob manoj ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2010, 04:31:46 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 13, 2010, 11:53:41 AM
Nice poem Manoj=ji..... Applause Applause Applause





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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2010, 10:47:53 PM »
Nice one...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2010, 03:21:22 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on June 16, 2010, 10:47:53 PM
Nice one...!!!
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