Gum-e-tanhaai !

by deepika_divya on October 19, 2009, 03:09:35 PM
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deepika_divya
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Mile Gum e tanhaai hame saugaat me pyaar ke
Ke  ab  ankho se sabd e tanhaai bataai nahi jaati

Hum tho ummed pe beite the unke didaar ko
Par sarhad e lakir haatho se mitaai nahi jaati

Ruswa hue ham Mohabaat mea unke iss kadar
Zindgai ki kasti chah ke bhi aage badaai nahi jaati

Kaid kar le agar apni gum ko mutti mea bhi
Par  Anso.on ki daar chehre se mitaai nahi jaati

Kisko kasoor doo Main ab iss halat ki “Divya”
Kudh ke  armaano ki chitha ab  utaai nahi jati
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2009, 07:02:41 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on October 19, 2009, 03:09:35 PM
Mile Gum e tanhaai hame saugaat me pyaar ke
Ke  ab  ankho se sabd e tanhaai bataai nahi jaati

Hum tho ummed pe beite the unke didaar ko
Par sarhad e lakir haatho se mitaai nahi jaati

Ruswa hue ham Mohabaat mea unke iss kadar
Zindgai ki kasti chah ke bhi aage badaai nahi jaati

Kaid kar le agar apni gum ko mutti mea bhi
Par  Anso.on ki daar chehre se mitaai nahi jaati

Kisko kasoor doo Main ab iss halat ki “Divya”
Kudh ke  armaano ki chitha ab  utaai nahi jati


KYA BAAT HAI  SOPHI JI....

MILI JO GUM-E-TANHAAI TUJHKO SAUGAAT ME PYAAR KE,
US TANHAAI KO MITANE,
HAM TUMHARE HUMSAFAR BANNE CHALE AAYE.

TUM TOH UMEED PE BEITHE THEY UNKE DIDAAR KO,
WO TO NAHIN AAYE,
DEKHO HAM TUMHARE DIDAAR KARNE CHALE AAYE.

RUSWA HUE TUM MOHABBAT MEA UNKE IS KADER,
KI TUM JAAN DENE  NIKLE THEY,
AUR HAM TUMHE NAYI ZINDAGI DENE AAYE.

KAID KYUN KARTI HO APNE GUMON KO MUTTI MEA,
KAID KARO APNI BAAHON MEA MUJHKO,
HUM TUMHE NAYI KHUSHIYAN DENE AAYE.

KIS KO KYUN KASOOR DETI HO AB ISS HALAT KI "DIVYA"
JAB WO TUMHARA THA HI NAHIN,
HAM HAI TUMHARE,TUJH MEA SAMAANE AAYE.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2009, 07:05:22 AM »
Wah bahut bahut khoob Sophi ji and Cara ji,very touching and marvelous creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2009, 02:11:57 PM »
Quote from: cara on October 20, 2009, 07:02:41 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  SOPHI JI....

MILI JO GUM-E-TANHAAI TUJHKO SAUGAAT ME PYAAR KE,
US TANHAAI KO MITANE,
HAM TUMHARE HUMSAFAR BANNE CHALE AAYE.

TUM TOH UMEED PE BEITHE THEY UNKE DIDAAR KO,
WO TO NAHIN AAYE,
DEKHO HAM TUMHARE DIDAAR KARNE CHALE AAYE.

RUSWA HUE TUM MOHABBAT MEA UNKE IS KADER,
KI TUM JAAN DENE  NIKLE THEY,
AUR HAM TUMHE NAYI ZINDAGI DENE AAYE.

KAID KYUN KARTI HO APNE GUMON KO MUTTI MEA,
KAID KARO APNI BAAHON MEA MUJHKO,
HUM TUMHE NAYI KHUSHIYAN DENE AAYE.

KIS KO KYUN KASOOR DETI HO AB ISS HALAT KI "DIVYA"
JAB WO TUMHARA THA HI NAHIN,
HAM HAI TUMHARE,TUJH MEA SAMAANE AAYE.

Thank you so much Cera ..

And also written Very Nice Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2009, 02:13:42 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on October 20, 2009, 07:05:22 AM
Wah bahut bahut khoob Sophi ji and Cara ji,very touching and marvelous creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so much Madhu ji Usual Smile
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2009, 04:37:22 PM »
Divya jee:

namaste!

aapne bahot hi Khoob liKhaa haii.. ehsaas beHteriN lageN.. yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2009, 02:34:18 AM »
Quote from: Dhaval on October 21, 2009, 04:37:22 PM
Divya jee:

namaste!

aapne bahot hi Khoob liKhaa haii.. ehsaas beHteriN lageN.. yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Dhaval ji ..Apko mera likha pasand aaya ")
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2009, 03:24:27 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on October 19, 2009, 03:09:35 PM
Mile Gum e tanhaai hame saugaat me pyaar ke
Ke  ab  ankho se sabd e tanhaai bataai nahi jaati

Hum tho ummed pe beite the unke didaar ko
Par sarhad e lakir haatho se mitaai nahi jaati

Ruswa hue ham Mohabaat mea unke iss kadar
Zindgai ki kasti chah ke bhi aage badaai nahi jaati

Kaid kar le agar apni gum ko mutti mea bhi
Par  Anso.on ki daar chehre se mitaai nahi jaati

Kisko kasoor doo Main ab iss halat ki “Divya”
Kudh ke  armaano ki chitha ab  utaai nahi jati



bahut bahut Khooob Sophi..

Bahut Khoobsurat Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Acha Caraji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2009, 06:41:14 AM »
Divya Dear.. Bahut Hi Dard Bhare Alfaaz Likhe hain Yaar.. Har ek Jumla apni Kahani si Kahata nazar aaya.. Sirf Poori Rachna Me Hi Nahi, Is Rachna Ka Har ek Lafz Tanha Nazar aaya Mujhe.. Bahut Hi Khbooob Yaaaaaaaaar... Applause Applause


Gar Meri Har Khushi Ka Main Akela Hi Haqdaar Hota,
To Tere Haathon Ko Thaam, Apna Hi Bana Gaya Hota.....

Par Ab Saansen Hi Meri, Mujhse Bewafaai Kar Rahi Hain,
Kaise Main Yeh Gam-e-Tanhaai, Tere Naam Kar Gaya Hota...

Aisa Nahi Ki Mujhe Tujhse Ishq Nahi E-Jaan-e-Jaana,
Kaash Mera Ek Aansoo, Mera Dil-e-Haal Bata Gaya Hota....

Aaj Yeh Bebas "Mann", Khud Apna Hi Nahi Raha "Divya",
Tu Hi Bata, Phir Khud Ko Tere Naam Kaise Gar Gaya Hota...!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2009, 06:43:38 AM »
Quote from: cara on October 20, 2009, 07:02:41 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  SOPHI JI....

MILI JO GUM-E-TANHAAI TUJHKO SAUGAAT ME PYAAR KE,
US TANHAAI KO MITANE,
HAM TUMHARE HUMSAFAR BANNE CHALE AAYE.

TUM TOH UMEED PE BEITHE THEY UNKE DIDAAR KO,
WO TO NAHIN AAYE,
DEKHO HAM TUMHARE DIDAAR KARNE CHALE AAYE.

RUSWA HUE TUM MOHABBAT MEA UNKE IS KADER,
KI TUM JAAN DENE  NIKLE THEY,
AUR HAM TUMHE NAYI ZINDAGI DENE AAYE.

KAID KYUN KARTI HO APNE GUMON KO MUTTI MEA,
KAID KARO APNI BAAHON MEA MUJHKO,
HUM TUMHE NAYI KHUSHIYAN DENE AAYE.

KIS KO KYUN KASOOR DETI HO AB ISS HALAT KI "DIVYA"
JAB WO TUMHARA THA HI NAHIN,
HAM HAI TUMHARE,TUJH MEA SAMAANE AAYE.

Bahut Khooooooob Cara Ji.. Humesha Ki Tarah lajawab Jawab diya hai Dost.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2009, 07:37:29 AM »
Wah wah Mann ji,very touching and mindblowing lines,great creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #11 on: October 24, 2009, 10:03:17 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Madhu Ji.. aapki Taareef Bahut Hausla Badhaati hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



**~** Mann **~**
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2009, 10:07:06 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 22, 2009, 03:24:27 PM
bahut bahut Khooob Sophi..

Bahut Khoobsurat Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Acha Caraji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so so Much Khwaish ji Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #13 on: October 24, 2009, 10:26:41 AM »
Quote from: Mann on October 24, 2009, 06:41:14 AM
Divya Dear.. Bahut Hi Dard Bhare Alfaaz Likhe hain Yaar.. Har ek Jumla apni Kahani si Kahata nazar aaya.. Sirf Poori Rachna Me Hi Nahi, Is Rachna Ka Har ek Lafz Tanha Nazar aaya Mujhe.. Bahut Hi Khbooob Yaaaaaaaaar... Applause Applause


Gar Meri Har Khushi Ka Main Akela Hi Haqdaar Hota,
To Tere Haathon Ko Thaam, Apna Hi Bana Gaya Hota.....

Par Ab Saansen Hi Meri, Mujhse Bewafaai Kar Rahi Hain,
Kaise Main Yeh Gam-e-Tanhaai, Tere Naam Kar Gaya Hota...

Aisa Nahi Ki Mujhe Tujhse Ishq Nahi E-Jaan-e-Jaana,
Kaash Mera Ek Aansoo, Mera Dil-e-Haal Bata Gaya Hota....

Aaj Yeh Bebas "Mann", Khud Apna Hi Nahi Raha "Divya",
Tu Hi Bata, Phir Khud Ko Tere Naam Kaise Gar Gaya Hota...!!



**~** Mann **~**

Thanks a lot Vicky .. Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooo Much for liking my creation,,,,

Waah Waah Kya baat hai mar jaavan.. Kya kamaal ka likha hai .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob
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«Reply #14 on: October 25, 2009, 02:01:12 PM »
kya baat hai sophi dino din nikhaar aata jaa raha hai shayari main lagta hai aajkal mujhe yaad kar k likhte ho  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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