Gumnam

by Neel1525 on January 12, 2010, 05:09:03 AM
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Kitna gumnam tanha hai har aadmi
sukhi dariya ki taraha hai har aadmi

kaun marta hai gam me kise fikra hai
apne gam me hi dooba hai har aadmi

rafta rafta sabhi benakaab ho gaye
dekho rakhta hai kitni khabar aadmi

khud ko kehta hai banda khuda ka fazar
apne dil me chupaaye zehar aadmi...
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2010, 05:16:51 AM »
Wah wah Neel Ji bahut umdah aur haqeeqat par mabni ghazal appne munazzam ki hai. Nice creation. Keep it up.
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2010, 07:23:45 AM »
Shukriya Riyaz bhaaijaan...
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shab
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2010, 07:37:14 AM »
hmmm...
Neel ji
bahut khoob
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2010, 09:01:34 AM »
its to good........
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2010, 01:58:24 PM »
Bahut Khub Neel Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Aapne
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2010, 06:30:24 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2010, 10:44:37 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Neel Ji
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