GUMNAMI KE ANDHERO MAI.......

by akela on September 03, 2004, 05:04:04 PM
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #150 on: December 03, 2004, 10:41:54 PM »
wah bahot khoob akela ji!

very nice wrk!!!


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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #151 on: December 03, 2004, 10:43:14 PM »
ghum chupane ki koi zarrorat nahin
aur aazmane ki koi zarrorat nahin

dil naa umeed ho ke baitha hai
ise bahlane ki koi zarrorat nahin

aitbaar ilm pe ab na raha ziyada
hunar dikhane ki koi zarrorat nahin

dum nikalte hi baant lete hain
vasiyat likhwane ki koi zarrorat nahin

"noor" dafna ke tujhko kahte hain
shokh manane ki koi zaroorat nahin.....



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akela
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«Reply #152 on: December 04, 2004, 08:02:18 PM »
bahoot khoob myheart ji
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #153 on: December 04, 2004, 08:10:09 PM »
thnx a lot dear...


Woh Hatho Se Pilaye To Mein Kya Karu
Woh Aankho Se Pilaye To Mein Kya Karu
Mein To Pine Ka Bilkul Aadi Nahin
Jam Khud Chal Ke Aaye To Mein Kya Karu


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akela
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«Reply #154 on: December 04, 2004, 09:16:03 PM »
nice
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #155 on: December 04, 2004, 09:21:46 PM »
thnx akela ji!!!


ummeedein hamein dekhkar chhup jaati hain
bikhar jaate hain armaan sabhi
yeh kiski nazar lagi hai khushiyon par
yaa hamein pyar ki pehchaan na thi
sab ilzaam mujhpar chhod kar
wo bedaag chaadar oodh gaye hain ....
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akela
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«Reply #156 on: December 10, 2004, 09:12:05 AM »
bahoot khoob myheart ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #157 on: December 10, 2004, 05:13:45 PM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
thnx akela ji!!!


ummeedein hamein dekhkar chhup jaati hain
bikhar jaate hain armaan sabhi
yeh kiski nazar lagi hai khushiyon par
yaa hamein pyar ki pehchaan na thi
sab ilzaam mujhpar chhod kar
wo bedaag chaadar oodh gaye hain ....


bahoot khoob!!! khas kar yah line>>
yeh kiski nazar lagi hai khushiyon par
yaa hamein pyar ki pehchaan na thi !!!!

last ke do lines adhoori lagi hai so jo dil mai ayya likh rahi hu!!!

sab ilzaam mujh per chor kar, wo badaag ho gaya hai
bas yahi ek daag hai dil mai, aor koi baat nahi!!!!!

----------------sara ek baar phir likh rahi hu------

ummeedein hamein dekhkar chhup jaati hain
bikhar jaate hain armaan sabhi
yeh kiski nazar lagi hai khushiyon par
yaa hamein pyar ki pehchaan "nahi"
sab ilzaam mujh per chor kar, wo badaag ho gaya hai
bas yahi ek daag hai dil mai, aor koi baat nahi!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #158 on: December 11, 2004, 08:44:29 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
thnx akela ji!!!


ummeedein hamein dekhkar chhup jaati hain
bikhar jaate hain armaan sabhi
yeh kiski nazar lagi hai khushiyon par
yaa hamein pyar ki pehchaan na thi
sab ilzaam mujhpar chhod kar
wo bedaag chaadar oodh gaye hain ....


bahoot khoob!!! khas kar yah line>>
yeh kiski nazar lagi hai khushiyon par
yaa hamein pyar ki pehchaan na thi !!!!

last ke do lines adhoori lagi hai so jo dil mai ayya likh rahi hu!!!

sab ilzaam mujh per chor kar, wo badaag ho gaya hai
bas yahi ek daag hai dil mai, aor koi baat nahi!!!!!

----------------sara ek baar phir likh rahi hu------

ummeedein hamein dekhkar chhup jaati hain
bikhar jaate hain armaan sabhi
yeh kiski nazar lagi hai khushiyon par
yaa hamein pyar ki pehchaan "nahi"
sab ilzaam mujh per chor kar, wo badaag ho gaya hai
bas yahi ek daag hai dil mai, aor koi baat nahi!!!!!


excellent work heart.........pooja...................

Ye Safed Phool Ki Chadarein Resham Ki Dor Se Buna Hua Kafan
Mujhe Kuch Na Do Yahin Rahne Do Ki Isi Gali Ki Main Khaak Hoon.......
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akela
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«Reply #159 on: December 14, 2004, 08:29:23 PM »
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bahoot khoob pooja ji ,waheed ji
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #160 on: December 15, 2004, 08:28:48 AM »
ur welcome akela....................... tongue3  tongue3
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akela
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«Reply #161 on: January 17, 2005, 01:23:18 PM »
nayi kirne aayenge shayad iss raat ke baad 'akela'
har aane wali shaam hume yahi isshara karte hai
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