Gunaah

by angel4u on July 29, 2008, 03:04:45 AM
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Sabr Har Baar Kiya Ikhtiyaar Kiya,
Humse Hota Nahi Hazaar Kiya,

Aadatan Tumne Kar Diye Waade,
Aadatan Humne Aitbaar Kiya,

Humne Aksar Tumhari Raahon Mein,
Ruk Ke Apna Hi Intezaar Kiya,

Phir Na Mangenge Zindagi Ya Rab,
Ye Gunah Humne Ek Baar Kiya...
{Gulzaar}


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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2008, 03:24:32 AM »
Phir Na Mangenge Zindagi Ya Rab,
Ye Gunah Humne Ek Baar Kiya...

 Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob angel...nice sharing
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2008, 05:56:04 AM »
Sabr Har Baar Kiya Ikhtiyaar Kiya,
Humse Hota Nahi Hazaar Kiya,
{Gulzaar}

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angle..Ji (aapka Naam shayad bhool Gaya )aap Ka First Two Line Wala Ash'aar Bahot Khoob Hai.
Aksar aapki post sharing Hoti Hai...alfaz bhi saaf hote hai
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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2008, 06:17:38 AM »
Sabr Har Baar Kiya Ikhtiyaar Kiya,
Humse Hota Nahi Hazaar Kiya,

Aadatan Tumne Kar Diye Waade,
Aadatan Humne Aitbaar Kiya,

Humne Aksar Tumhari Raahon Mein,
Ruk Ke Apna Hi Intezaar Kiya,

Phir Na Mangenge Zindagi Ya Rab,
Ye Gunah Humne Ek Baar Kiya...
{Gulzaar}


NM

really nice sharing angel ji
bahut hi acche aur simple lafz hain
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2008, 02:22:57 PM »
Thanks a lot bekarar ji Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2008, 02:23:52 PM »
angle..Ji (aapka Naam shayad bhool Gaya )aap Ka First Two Line Wala Ash'aar Bahot Khoob Hai.
Aksar aapki post sharing Hoti Hai...alfaz bhi saaf hote hai

aksar sharing hoti hia, actually aajkal likhne ka wakt nahi mil paata.
thanks pasand karne ke liye Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2008, 02:24:32 PM »
really nice sharing angel ji
bahut hi acche aur simple lafz hain


Thanks diya Usual Smile
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