***GUNEHGAAR*** -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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«Reply #15 on: August 05, 2008, 07:38:27 AM »

bahut bahut sukriya Muhammed ji

Baadal


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #16 on: August 05, 2008, 08:06:38 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on August 04, 2008, 11:13:12 AM

EXCELLENT WORK BAADAL JI,
KYA BAAT HAI BAHUT DINO KE BAAD
AAYE PAR AATE HI CHAA GAYE AAP TO,
BAHUT DARD HAI AAPKE KALAM ME....
KEEP GOING....
BY. K.SHAEL

KAASH KI USS DIN KUCH KEH PATE HAM UNSE,
TO DIL ME U LAAKH BAATE CHUPI NA REH JAATI,

KAASH KI KUCH POOCH PATE HAM UNSE,
TO AANKHON ME U ANGINAT SAWAL NA REHTE,

KAASH KI UNHE APNI HALAT BATA DETE TO,
U JANAJA HAMARA TANHA NA CHALTA,

KAASH KI ISS DUNIYA SE JANE KA SABAB BATA DETE,
TO SHAYAD MERI MAYIYAT PE NAMI KI KAMMI NA HOTI,

KAASH KI USS DIN UNSE LIPAT KAR SAMBHL JATE
TO HAM U BIKHARE NA HOTE,

KAASH KI BASS JAATE USS DIN UNN KI ROOH ME,
TO AAJ UNSE ITNI DOOR NA HOTE....

shael ji kuch likha hai umeed hai
aap ko pasand aayega

Kaash us din wo dil ki baat keh jaate,
Gale lagate use or mil ke sambhal jaate,

Yun akeli na hoti un ki mayiyat,
Apni mayiyat un ke saath sajate,

Rooh mai basa ke un ko,pyar bahut ker jaate,
Door na rehne dete,khud mai unhe sama lete,

Ankho ke unginat sawal hum suljha jaate,
Haalat un ke samaj ke,khud ka haal bata.te,

Kaash us din wo dil ki baat keh jaate,
Kami un ki icchaon ki hum poori ker jaate,

Kami un ki icchaon ki hum poori ker jaate.....

Baadal


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k.shael

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #17 on: August 05, 2008, 08:21:07 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on August 05, 2008, 08:06:38 AM

BAHUT KHOOB REPLY KIYA BAADAL JI,
HAMARI TARAF SE KI GAYI CHOTTI SI KOSHISH
KABOOL KARIYEGA....

WO BHI KYA DIN THE,JAB HAR RAAJ TUMSE
JAHIR KIYA KARTE THE,
KABHI AANSOO TO KABHI KHUSHIYO SE SAATH
-2 JIYA KARTE THE,

DEKHTE HI DEKHTE JANE KYUN TU ITNI DOOR
CHALA GAYA,
KI AAB TO HAR AANSOO HAR GAM TANHAI KO
AKELE SAHA KARTE HAI,

TU HI TO EK RAAJDAA.N MERA KI AAB TO JAISE
HAR RAAH ME BHATKA KARTE HAI,
GUNHEGAAR TU BHI KAISE HO SAKTA HAI YE
TO HAMARI BADNASIBI HAI KI KABHI KHUSH THE,
TERE SANG,

AAJ TERE BAIGAIR KHUSH HONE KI KOSHISH KIYA
KARTE HAI
JANE KYUN TU BADAL GAYA HAI ITNA PAR HAM'
TO AAJ BHI TUJHE AE RAAJDAA.N DOONDA
KARTE HAI....
BY. K.SHAEL


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #18 on: August 05, 2008, 11:10:21 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on August 05, 2008, 08:21:07 AM

bahut hi aacha likha hai shael ji
koshish karenge aap ki in lines ko
poora karni ki

Baadal


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ANKIT RAO

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #19 on: August 05, 2008, 03:04:01 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAIN BAADAL JI.


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #20 on: August 05, 2008, 03:09:01 PM »

thanx a lot ankit ji

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #21 on: August 05, 2008, 03:21:57 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on August 05, 2008, 05:40:26 AM

jayada nahi bas thora
sa likh paaya umeed hai jawab
pasand aayega aapko.

Kabhi na bane the ajnabi hum,
Sada bas ek tare rahe the hum,

Khamoshi tod dete to aacha hota,
Tare har sawal se aaj wakif hote hum,

Zindgee or mitti dono hi naseeb hoti,
Gar ek baar mare sine se lipte hote tum,

Ek baar to yakeen kiya hota mera,
Sawal ka tere har jawab dete hum,

Rakh ke har baat dil mai apne,
Ajnabi khud hi banaya tha tune hume,

Ek baar to dil ka haal sunaya hota,
Tare har ashq ki kimat chukate hum,

Tare har ashq ki kimat chukate hum........

Baadal

wah kaya baat hai baadal ji, bahoot khoob!! jaise he kuch waqat milta hai, jawab main kuch likhne ki koshish karugi!!


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k.shael

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #22 on: August 06, 2008, 05:33:54 AM »

THANX BAADAL JI,
INTZAAR RAHEGA AAPKE REPLY KA,
SHUKRIYA....
BY. K.SHAEL


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #23 on: August 06, 2008, 06:10:04 AM »

waah baadal ji bohut acha likha hai aapne


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #24 on: August 06, 2008, 09:18:50 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on August 06, 2008, 05:37:37 AM

bohat khoob Badal ji
guzre zamaane ki yaad dila di
aapki is rachna ne hume aapka fan bana diya
sachme bohat bohat khoob farmaaya aapne..kee it up dear.

thanx a lot shihab ji

Baadal


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #25 on: August 06, 2008, 09:21:04 AM »

bhawna ji thanx a lot
aap itna aacha likhti hai
2-4 lines likhti to bahut aacha lagta

Baadal


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honeyrose

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #26 on: August 07, 2008, 06:43:05 AM »

Bohat khoob likha hai baadal ji..

Bohat khoob likha hai dosto...


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diya786

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #27 on: August 07, 2008, 07:36:00 AM »

bahut hi accha likha hai aapne baadalji
aur aapne bhi bahut hi accha reply kiya hai shally
great work from both of u...


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Pooja

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #28 on: August 07, 2008, 04:36:51 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on August 05, 2008, 05:40:26 AM

Jo kahna pade, usse kaise hum payar maan le
Jo mangna pade, use kaise apna haq jaan le

Dil ne to kiya her pal yaad tujhe e-jaan-tamnna
Jo pukarna pade hume, kaise tujhe phir apna jaan le

Yakeen mere per jab tujhe he na raha vishwaas
Aise zajbaato main, kaise koi jawab de

Gunahgaar ho gaya her ek wo beeta pal
Aise mai kaise, isse tera pyar maan le!!


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #29 on: August 08, 2008, 05:41:47 AM »

thanx a lot honey ji

Baadal


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