***GUNEHGAAR*** -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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«Reply #30 on: August 08, 2008, 05:42:45 AM »

Quote from: diya786 on August 07, 2008, 07:36:00 AM

bahut hi accha likha hai aapne baadalji
aur aapne bhi bahut hi accha reply kiya hai shally
great work from both of u...

thanx a lot diya ji

Baadal


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #31 on: August 08, 2008, 05:45:05 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2008, 04:36:51 PM

Jo kahna pade, usse kaise hum payar maan le
Jo mangna pade, use kaise apna haq jaan le

Dil ne to kiya her pal yaad tujhe e-jaan-tamnna
Jo pukarna pade hume, kaise tujhe phir apna jaan le

Yakeen mere per jab tujhe he na raha vishwaas
Aise zajbaato main, kaise koi jawab de

Gunahgaar ho gaya her ek wo beeta pal
Aise mai kaise, isse tera pyar maan le!!

bahut lhoob pooja ji
ek baar fir umda lines

Baadal


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #32 on: August 08, 2008, 05:59:21 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on August 05, 2008, 08:21:07 AM

BAHUT KHOOB REPLY KIYA BAADAL JI,
HAMARI TARAF SE KI GAYI CHOTTI SI KOSHISH
KABOOL KARIYEGA....

WO BHI KYA DIN THE,JAB HAR RAAJ TUMSE
JAHIR KIYA KARTE THE,
KABHI AANSOO TO KABHI KHUSHIYO SE SAATH
-2 JIYA KARTE THE,

DEKHTE HI DEKHTE JANE KYUN TU ITNI DOOR
CHALA GAYA,
KI AAB TO HAR AANSOO HAR GAM TANHAI KO
AKELE SAHA KARTE HAI,

TU HI TO EK RAAJDAA.N MERA KI AAB TO JAISE
HAR RAAH ME BHATKA KARTE HAI,
GUNHEGAAR TU BHI KAISE HO SAKTA HAI YE
TO HAMARI BADNASIBI HAI KI KABHI KHUSH THE,
TERE SANG,

AAJ TERE BAIGAIR KHUSH HONE KI KOSHISH KIYA
KARTE HAI
JANE KYUN TU BADAL GAYA HAI ITNA PAR HAM'
TO AAJ BHI TUJHE AE RAAJDAA.N DOONDA
KARTE HAI....
BY. K.SHAEL

shael ji aap ka reply dene ki koshish ki hai umeed hai pasand aayega

Bita har din or raat ek tare liye,
Jiye har pal sirf ek tare liye,

Har gum or khushi thi sirf tare liye,
Chale gaye jindgi se wo bhi sirf tare liye,

Raajdaan tha ek sirf tu mera,
Fir aaj badal gaya tu kis ke liye.....

Baadal


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #33 on: August 08, 2008, 06:31:21 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2008, 04:36:51 PM

pooja ji aap jitna aacha to nahi likh paaya lakin koshish ki hai

Gunahgaar hu mai ye maloom hai hume,
Pyar tera sacha tha ye guma hai hume,

Na to kahne ki na hi mangne ki jarurat thi,
Sab sirf tera tha ye maloom hai tumhe,

Aaj bhi jab wo beeta pal yaad aata hai,
Bhiga daaman wo tera yaad aata hai hume,

Maana ki pyar wo nahi jo keh.na pade,
Lakin guma-e-yakeen tera maloom hai hume,

Vishwaas tera har pal kiya maine,
Lakin ek dar sine mai sat.ta tha hume,

Kho na du kanhi dunia ki bheed main,
Issliye har pal tuhjhe sun.na tha hume,

Jaan lo bas itna ki aaj bhi hai tare,
Gunehgaar hu lakin, sirf cha.te hai tumhe........

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #34 on: August 08, 2008, 01:45:09 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... Last line bahoot touching hai... yah niche likhi lines bahoot he kamal ki likhi hai apne!! bahoot khoob!

Gunahgaar hu mai ye maloom hai hume,
Pyar tera sacha tha ye guma hai hume,

Na to kahne ki na hi mangne ki jarurat thi,
Sab sirf tera tha ye maloom hai tumhe

Jaan lo bas itna ki aaj bhi hai tare,
Gunehgaar hu lakin, sirf cha.te hai tumhe........


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baadal102

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Re: ***GUNEHGAAR***

«Reply #35 on: August 09, 2008, 07:10:59 AM »

thanx a lot pooja ji

Baadal


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