Guzar jayenge!

by salma786 on April 18, 2009, 12:00:16 PM
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salma786
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Khud ko mitakar bhi hum unhe paa na sake,
Karne chale the sauda zindegi ka maut se,
Kya tha malum hume ishq me hashr ye hota hai,
Shauk tha unka khelna ishq ke jazbaat se!

Yun to sadiyaa lag jati hai manzil ko pane me,
Hum to haar kar bhi manzil ke kareeb the,
Jise manzil samajh rahe the ab talak,
Aaj jana hum kitne badnaseeb the!

Hadso me jab pyar karne wale juda ho jate hai,
Tadap tadap kar jab apni jaan wo gawate hai,
Yahi hota hai kissa ishq ke baazar ka,
Ishq ke kisse yun hi nahi mashoor hojate hai!

Laila,Heer ke kisso ki daud me kabhi,
Hum bhi sab ka dil behlate nazar ayenge,
Waqt kya malham lagayega zakhmo pe hamare,
Waqt se pehle hum hi guzar jayenge!
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2009, 12:32:54 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on April 18, 2009, 12:00:16 PM
Khud ko mitakar bhi hum unhe paa na sake,
Karne chale the sauda zindegi ka maut se,
Kya tha malum hume ishq me hashr ye hota hai,
Shauk tha unka khelna ishq ke jazbaat se!

Yun to sadiyaa lag jati hai manzil ko pane me,
Hum to haar kar bhi manzil ke kareeb the,
Jise manzil samajh rahe the ab talak,
Aaj jana hum kitne badnaseeb the!

Hadso me jab pyar karne wale juda ho jate hai,
Tadap tadap kar jab apni jaan wo gawate hai,
Yahi hota hai kissa ishq ke baazar ka,
Ishq ke kisse yun hi nahi mashoor hojate hai!

Laila,Heer ke kisso ki daud me kabhi,
Hum bhi sab ka dil behlate nazar ayenge,
Waqt kya malham lagayega zakhmo pe hamare,
Waqt se pehle hum hi guzar jayenge!
nice creation salma.........wonderful sequence ........touchy at the same time near to reality..simply a awesome creation
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ANAAM
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2009, 01:32:38 PM »
Lagta hai chot bahut gahri khayee hai aapne... tearyeyed crybaby2 crybaby2

Sauda he bade ghate ka kiya aapne
Zindegi ko maut se tol diya aapne
Paane ko kisi ko khud marna pade
Wo ek pal ki khushi bhi kya khusi
Jab jawani mai he guzar jayenge aap
Quote from: salma786 on April 18, 2009, 12:00:16 PM
Khud ko mitakar bhi hum unhe paa na sake,
Karne chale the sauda zindegi ka maut se,
Kya tha malum hume ishq me hashr ye hota hai,
Shauk tha unka khelna ishq ke jazbaat se!

Yun to sadiyaa lag jati hai manzil ko pane me,
Hum to haar kar bhi manzil ke kareeb the,
Jise manzil samajh rahe the ab talak,
Aaj jana hum kitne badnaseeb the!

Hadso me jab pyar karne wale juda ho jate hai,
Tadap tadap kar jab apni jaan wo gawate hai,
Yahi hota hai kissa ishq ke baazar ka,
Ishq ke kisse yun hi nahi mashoor hojate hai!

Laila,Heer ke kisso ki daud me kabhi,
Hum bhi sab ka dil behlate nazar ayenge,
Waqt kya malham lagayega zakhmo pe hamare,
Waqt se pehle hum hi guzar jayenge!
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2009, 02:48:31 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on April 18, 2009, 12:00:16 PM
Khud ko mitakar bhi hum unhe paa na sake,
Karne chale the sauda zindegi ka maut se,
Kya tha malum hume ishq me hashr ye hota hai,
Shauk tha unka khelna ishq ke jazbaat se!

Yun to sadiyaa lag jati hai manzil ko pane me,
Hum to haar kar bhi manzil ke kareeb the,
Jise manzil samajh rahe the ab talak,
Aaj jana hum kitne badnaseeb the!

Hadso me jab pyar karne wale juda ho jate hai,
Tadap tadap kar jab apni jaan wo gawate hai,
Yahi hota hai kissa ishq ke baazar ka,
Ishq ke kisse yun hi nahi mashoor hojate hai!

Laila,Heer ke kisso ki daud me kabhi,
Hum bhi sab ka dil behlate nazar ayenge,
Waqt kya malham lagayega zakhmo pe hamare,
Waqt se pehle hum hi guzar jayenge!

bohat khoob salma ji, behtareen khayal. Applause Applause
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2009, 12:11:52 AM »
Bohat khoob Salma...
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salma786
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2009, 04:30:13 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on April 18, 2009, 12:32:54 PM
nice creation salma.........wonderful sequence ........touchy at the same time near to reality..simply a awesome creation
Thanks lot salil ji!
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salma786
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2009, 04:32:45 AM »
Quote from: ANAAM on April 18, 2009, 01:32:38 PM
Lagta hai chot bahut gahri khayee hai aapne... tearyeyed crybaby2 crybaby2

Sauda he bade ghate ka kiya aapne
Zindegi ko maut se tol diya aapne
Paane ko kisi ko khud marna pade
Wo ek pal ki khushi bhi kya khusi
Jab jawani mai he guzar jayenge aap

Ji apne saraha shukriya ... or apne acha likha hai!
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pandit
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2009, 04:35:35 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on April 18, 2009, 12:00:16 PM
Khud ko mitakar bhi hum unhe paa na sake,
Karne chale the sauda zindegi ka maut se,
Kya tha malum hume ishq me hashr ye hota hai,
Shauk tha unka khelna ishq ke jazbaat se!

Yun to sadiyaa lag jati hai manzil ko pane me,
Hum to haar kar bhi manzil ke kareeb the,
Jise manzil samajh rahe the ab talak,
Aaj jana hum kitne badnaseeb the!

Hadso me jab pyar karne wale juda ho jate hai,
Tadap tadap kar jab apni jaan wo gawate hai,
Yahi hota hai kissa ishq ke baazar ka,
Ishq ke kisse yun hi nahi mashoor hojate hai!

Laila,Heer ke kisso ki daud me kabhi,
Hum bhi sab ka dil behlate nazar ayenge,
Waqt kya malham lagayega zakhmo pe hamare,
Waqt se pehle hum hi guzar jayenge!

TOUCHING LINES SALMA JEE...
NICE WORK....
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Sonu
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2009, 04:51:21 AM »
wow sabne bahut acha likha hai keep up the wonderful work dosto
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salma786
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2009, 05:08:32 AM »
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on April 18, 2009, 02:48:31 PM
bohat khoob salma ji, behtareen khayal. Applause Applause

Shukriya Saurabh ji!
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2009, 05:10:31 AM »

 ISII LIYE KISI SHAYER NEY KYAA KHOOB KAHAA HAI YEH ISHQ NAHIN AASAA.......

 NICE NAZM ......S786
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salma786
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2009, 09:20:53 AM »
Quote from: Aryaan on April 19, 2009, 12:11:52 AM
Bohat khoob Salma...
Shukriya!
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2009, 09:26:46 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on April 18, 2009, 12:00:16 PM
Khud ko mitakar bhi hum unhe paa na sake,
Karne chale the sauda zindegi ka maut se,
Kya tha malum hume ishq me hashr ye hota hai,
Shauk tha unka khelna ishq ke jazbaat se!

Yun to sadiyaa lag jati hai manzil ko pane me,
Hum to haar kar bhi manzil ke kareeb the,
Jise manzil samajh rahe the ab talak,
Aaj jana hum kitne badnaseeb the!

Hadso me jab pyar karne wale juda ho jate hai,
Tadap tadap kar jab apni jaan wo gawate hai,
Yahi hota hai kissa ishq ke baazar ka,
Ishq ke kisse yun hi nahi mashoor hojate hai!

Laila,Heer ke kisso ki daud me kabhi,
Hum bhi sab ka dil behlate nazar ayenge,
Waqt kya malham lagayega zakhmo pe hamare,
Waqt se pehle hum hi guzar jayenge!

Bohot Khoob Salma dear  icon_thumleft
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salma786
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2009, 11:35:57 AM »
Quote from: pandit on April 19, 2009, 04:35:35 AM
TOUCHING LINES SALMA JEE...
NICE WORK....
Thanks for reading Pandit ji!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2009, 11:58:25 AM »
Very very Nice Salma.. keep writing like this.........
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